ARAKSHI: HUM AAP KAY DIL MAY RAHTAY HAIN (THREAD 2) PART 26 pg 47 - Page 12

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: NATURESHIVANI



agree with each n every line of u but still the show and this fan fiction story is two different thing so we can not connect our selves with this stories as we get connect with the show n about the time of updating so being n student n (writer of this forum only) there is so much pressure i have to study so its not possible to update regulary so its a natural to lost ur grip on the story ok end of this topic i'm again on my words don't end this so soon and do'nt make long as jeevan key din baki ki baat update key bad😊




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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Nethravathi

She is right Rehana don't end this story soon do make it long even if it is not possible to make long as Jeevan key din. Please please please



Don't worry dear
I write as much as I involve in this story
And want to give all of my readers satisfaction
Actually all story have some kind of base line
If the base line is finish or you say the aim of
Story reveal no charm left
And I try to finish when it's needed
So in this story many things to be reveal
It's not finish so soon
It's take time
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rehana25



Don't worry dear
I write as much as I involve in this story
And want to give all of my readers satisfaction
Actually all story have some kind of base line
If the base line is finish or you say the aim of
Story reveal no charm left
And I try to finish when it's needed
So in this story many things to be reveal
It's not finish so soon
It's take time

Agar ye baat hai to phir teek hai. Love to read your updates & Love you
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Posted: 11 years ago
And after finishing this one u will start another story.
Right? right? right? right? (Puppy face)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awwsssmmm part
Loved it
Supperbbb...
Amazing...
Loved the bonding between Mr King Kong n Miss Pink Pabther...
Wow! they are childhood friends...
Neil knows about Arakshi...!!!!
Cont sooon
Thanks for PM
Edited by _Nikita_ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: EashaYousufzai

And after finishing this one u will start another story.

Right? right? right? right? (Puppy face)



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Posted: 11 years ago

PART 18

Next day, sakshi get off from ETF...sameer tell Ayesha...when she ask...sakshi isn't come yet? Sameer tell her that she can't come today...she already tell him yesterday...saying this sameer move to his office and Ayesha join her fellow in hall...they start their pending paper work...arjun hear this news when he way to his office...one angry wave go through his body...he get more angrier when he try to call her but still her phone comes unreachable...how's she become so irresponsible...she know they talk every night...without talking each other they never go to sleep...why she is not checking her phone...where is she? And main thing she is with whom? This question makes him more restless...he is walking around in his office...then sameer enter...looking him walking...with restless he said.

Sameer: ab iss tarah walk karnay say toh problem solve nahi hogi...yeh sab bolnay say pehlay dekhna tha kay kiya bol rahay ho...aur kiss kay samnay bol rahay ho (he scold him )

Arjun stop...look him enquiringly...said: sam, kiya hua hay...kiya kah rahay ho.

Sameer throw a newspaper in front of him and said: yeh kah raha hoon jo iss main chuppa hay...kiya tum nay paper nahi dekha...parha nahi...aur agar parha nahi toh kum say kum...dekh hi lo...sab pata chal jaiy ga (he point out him one picture)

Arjun hold paper with knowing nothing...open front page and his mind going blast...half of front page fill with last night party pictures...many officers picture...are there...comm sir and sameer pictures but most shocking picture is his and riya...riya holding his upper arm and almost glued with him...picture caption said...one perfect couple and love birds in ETF...arrogant ACP Arjun with pretty riya...arjun throw the paper away and shout

Arjun: kiya bakwas hay yeah (he is screaming)

Sameer: zara interview bhi read karlo...jiss may tum nay...riya ki tareef may zameen asmaan ek kar diyay hain (he tease more him)

Arjun: yeah sab bakwas hay...main iss news paper ko court may lay jaoonga...may nay koi bhi aissi baat nahi ki thi...yeah sab inhoon nay apni marzi say likha hay (he become more furious)

Sameer: kyun tum nay uss ko interview nahi diya tha (he ask)

Arjun: diya tha...magar uss nay answer toh wohi rakhay hain...thooray say change kiyay hain...magar (he read the article...said) question change kar diyay hain (he finally take a deep breath and look sameer)

Sameer: kiya tum sach kah rahay ho (he take paper in his hand and start looking that article again)

Arjun: haan...I am hundred percent sure (he remember everything)

Sameer: iss ka matlab hay...yeah bhi uss hi silsilay ki kari hay (he whisper)

Arjun sharpen his ear and ask: kiss silsilay ki kari hay.

Sameer: kuch nahi (he snaps and said) arjun...bas apni aankhain khuli rakho...kuch bohat wired honay wala hay...

Arjun understand nothing but said: sam...main iss newspaper aur iss reporter ko toh nahi choroon ga (he take phone and start pushing number)

Sameer stop him...put back receiver and said: arjun...tum kuch nahi karo gay...jo chap gaya...woh chap gaya...agar ab tum koi statement do gay toh baat aur barh jay gi (he try to explain him) log aaj parhain gay aur kal bhool jay gay...magar tumhara koi bhi reaction...iss baat ko bohat uchaal day ga...aur phir kahin tum ko koi ghalat qadam na uthana parh jay...apni ghalti ko sahi karnay kay liyay...so, leave it...but be careful now. (arjun understand that thing...he know sameer is right...it's better to ignore but be aware for next time)

Sameer pat his shoulder and go out...arjun feel himself ashamed...he never think that his interview turn to an affair...how it possible that she change his views and write nonsense things...he read that article again and every line make his goose bump rise...in the end he throw newspaper away...paper fall on someone feet...who take the paper and one evil smile crept on her lips...

Yes, that was none of other then riya...riya mukerjee...who feel happy to see her plan successful...she is purposefully did this...use her connection...invite her one very devoted friend reporter...both trap arjun...when he want to go sakshi side...his mind wandering near sakshi...both take advantage of this situation and ask some tricky question...although arjun was composed and give very appropriate answer but then she change some question...that small interview is a mix and match of arjun answer and reporter question...with that they use the photo...when riya stop arjun for introduce her friend...that time she take one picture and after that mock the picture...and give with that article and with that disturbing caption...riya and her friend join work makes arjun angry and he become furious...

Riya wait for arjun reaction...she know she ignited fire...and this time she come to put some fuel on it...but she don't know that arjun has a gift...a gift of pure, devoted and loving friend...sameer...who not only smell something wrong going on around him and he aware arjun as well...that's why arjun control his emotion and try to figure out what's happening going on...riya come near him...he rest his head back with close eyes...when riya place hand on his shoulder...arjun snap and look riya...he quickly stand and said.

Arjun: riya...tum kiya kar rahi ho...main nay kitni dafa kaha hay...yeah office hay...khayaal kiya karo (he said with anger)

Riya: arjun...dekho na...yeah newspaper main kiya chuppa hay (she said innocently)

Arjun: haan...main nay dekh liya hay...leave it...main aissi jhooti baton par react nahi karna chahta (the show indifference)

Riya shocked to see arjun reaction...she can't digest his reaction...she want his anger and out of control behaviour...she plan this to make furious him and show his anger towards that paper...she guess arjun sue that newspaper...and his statement make this issue more big...and she take advantage for this and pressurise him...use that situation in her favour...but she confuse to see his behaviour.

Riya: haan...haan...arjun tum theek kah rahay ho...choro rahanay do (first stammer then composed) hum kyun inki her sachi jhooti baton par react karain.

Arjun: aur koi kaam hay...toh bolo...warna mujhay kaam hay (he show indifference)

Riya: theek hay...main chalti hoon... (She feels defeat and loses her plan...so no point to stay here...she leave the room)

Arjun sight travel until she cross the door...riya leave office but open new door for arjun...he start thinking about her...is riya behind all of this...or not?

Next day, sakshi is back...with full charge...her cracking jokes and smiling face...fill ETF environment with life...wearing light lemon colour kurta with white shalwar and white and yellow duppata...her shirt have white thread work...she tied up her hairs in white band...white bangles and white strap watch...engage her both wrist...she look fresh like flower...busy chatting with her group...arjun can't ignore her presence...sitting in his office...he focus on her laughing in hall...through his glass wall...sakshi feel his gaze on her...her cheeks goes blush but she try to avoid him looking...this think make arjun more angry.

Arjun already angry because she could not take his call...last two days he try several times...yesterday, she take his call but said...she is busy and cut his call...arjun easily hear neil voice coming from her back ground...he never imagine neil presence at her home at this hour...it's almost mid night.

Today, she ignore him and busy with others...neil officially join ETF from today...he become friend with everyone...he impress for others...even sameer also talk with him in very light mood...arjun find neil, sameer and sakshi talking in very serious mood...but he don't know the reason.

One case comes and everyone get active...it's high profile case...one famous business man daughter laila get murder...in her own house...in her room.

ETF arrive on crime scene...girl age like 18 - 19...very beautiful and innocent look...ETF keenly observe everything...ayesha, sakshi and liza check the girl where about...liza turn her body and find girl mobile under her body...cover with blood...while sakshi find half broken mobile case cover...sameer and arjun did questioning with business man and his wife...riya questioning with maid and other servant...shree check some electronics things...chotu outside and talk with watchman and neil standing in one place but his eyes travel and judge each and everyone...especially on riya...he try to hear her conversation between her and servant.

After finishing...questioning arjun and sameer comes to see the body...sakshi, Ayesha and liza discussing something...looking them they are quiet.

Sameer: liza...kiya report hay? (He ask)

Liza: sir, murder raat ko 10 say 11 baje kay darmiyan hua hay...kissi sharp object say stab kiya hay...like knife (she start telling them her finding...while other quietly hear her) blood lose honay ki wajah say maut hui hay...magar is ski lash ko haath lagaya gaya hay (she inform sameer)

Sameer: kiya matlab?

Liza: I mean iss ka murder hua tha...toh yeah iss tarah ghiri thi (liza show him girl position) magar hum nay iss ko doosri position may paya hay (liza show other position)

Sameer: dam it...aur kuch liza.

Liza: ek baat aur bhi hay...magar woh main lab jaakar...check karkay hi bata sakti hoon (she said...while looking Ayesha and sakshi)

Sameer: theek hay...body lab lay jao (he give her permission to shift the body)

Sakshi: sameer...yeah ek mobile mila hay...magar khoon may cover hay (she shows him mobile) aur yeah ek mobile ka toota hua hissa hay (she shows him broken part)

Sameer: shree...yeah mobile lo aur data check karo...aur iss tootay huay part ko bhi check karo (he order shree)

Shree: yes sir (he take mobile with sakshi)

Ayesha look sakshi...both exchange sight...arjun and sameer feel both talking through eyes...strange...both ACP exchange sight...they are hiding something...or hesitate to tell them...ayesha and sakshi turn and look liza...who order her assistance to shift the corpse in lab...then liza exchange glare with Ayesha and sakshi...girls trio...signal to each other through eyes...silently...then liza shake head like encourage them to tell and leave the room...sakshi take deep breath and shook her shoulder...ayesha shake her head and look sameer but confuse see his sight fix on her...she gulp and said

Ayesha: rathod sir...woh kuch aur bhi cheezain hain (she hesitantly start saying...sakshi try to move other side but Ayesha pull her again...said) yeah sakshi bataiy gi.

Sameer and arjun look sakshi...who give hard glare to Ayesha...then see both ACP to her side...she start biting her nails and said

Sakshi: main...woh main...actually, sameer...kuch photos hain...yeah lo tum khud hi dekh lo (she thrust some photos in his hand...and look other side)

Confuse her and Ayesha behaviour...sameer take those pictures and know the reason of their hesitation...these are nude picture of that girl...totally nude...even though...sameer and Ayesha share feeling and engage but this kind of things...make them shy and both steal their sight...arjun can't stop himself and take photos from sameer hand and look in...now, he know the reason of girl trio hesitation...both ACP understand that they are shy and feeling shame to show these photo to them...and even though discuss...he give those back to sameer and sameer put those in evidence bag.

Sameer: Ayesha and sakshi...room ko acchi tarah say check karo...see if you find any other things (he composed quickly and lighten their shy and hesitate behaviour...both nodded and start work on it)

After finishing everything...ETF go back...neil is silently observe everything...he didn't interfere in their work...neither give any suggestion and finding things...he just observing everyone...back to office...everyone sitting in hall...and discussing on case.

Arjun: sam...mujhay woh photos do ek minute (he see evidence bags and then ask)

Sameer give him that bag...arjun take out all pictures and spread on table...sakshi and Ayesha just ignore and check other things...while riya and others see those...shree, chotu and neil divert their attention to see those kind of photos but riya is very excited...she see one by one every picture...standing near arjun chair...her one hand on arjun shoulder and she bend near him...her chest rubbing with his shoulder blade...she is doing this purposefully but arjun didn't notice...he is busy looking one thing and finally he find...he raise his head and before he said something...he feel riya presence is very near him...he scold her.

Arjun: riya, what is this? (He show her very closeness)

Riya: woh arjun...main toh yeah photos dekh rahi thi (she give the reason and said) dekho na itnay ameer maa baap ki baiti...aur kaam dekho kaisay... (She gives remarks)

Arjun just ignore her and stand...he comes to sameer side and said: sam...yeah dekho...yeah saari photos dehan say dekho... (he show him some photos and continue) inn sab ko dekh kar tum ko kiya samj aata hay

Sameer look those photos and said: yes, you are right...main nay iss par ghaur nahi kiya...hhhmmm ...tum theek kah rahay ho (looking one by one photo he agree with arjun)

Both look those photos very keenly and discuss further...while others just quietly looking...

sakshi wait for a while and said: please, hum ko bhi batao.

Sameer: in sab photos ko dekhnay say kahin bhi yeh nahi lagta kay...in ko without permission liya gaya hay (he inform them)

Arjun: haan bulkay...jiss tarah say yeh pose day kar in photos ko banaya gaya hay...uss say lagta hay kay khas taur say banaya gaya hay...like modelling style (he join sameer and reveal other thing)

Sakshi: what? Kiya kaha...modelling style (she jump on her place...then quickly come on arjun side...she took those photos from him ...look them...then she go to evidence box and find one card ...said) sameer...yeh dekho...hum ko laila kay room say...yeh card bhi mila tha...xyz modelling and advertising company (she show sameer on visiting card)

Sameer: iska matlab hay kay...laila ko modelling ka shauq tha (he said)

Ayesha: ya phir ho sakta hay kay woh modelling karti ho (she doubt)

Arjun: lekin agar woh modelling karti toh...uss kay parents nay hum ko kyun nahi bataya (he raise the point)

Sameer: haan...hum nay us ski hobbies kay baray main bhi poocha tha...phir woh hum say kyun chuppa rahay hain (he said while thinking something)

Sakshi: ek baat aur hay...sameer...modelling kay liyay jo portfolio girls banwati hain...uss may iss tarah ki photos nahi hoti...I mean (she hesitantly stop)

Ayesha: haan sir, iss tarah ki photos toh (she also stop)

riya: iss tarah ki photos toh... koi blue print picture...ya phir you say triple xxx movies kay liyay shoot hoti hain...(she look everyone and share her view)

Sakshi: xxx movies ya phir triple xxx magazines (she contribute her thought...which amaze all of them...they are thinking in deep...when shree enter)

Shree: sir, yeh jo mobile ka toota hua piece mila hay...main nay uss ka pata laga liya hay (shree tell his finding)

Arjun: kiya pata lagaya?

Shree: sir, yeh mobile abhi two week ago hi launch hua hay...yeh uss ka back cover ka toota hua piece hay (he tell him)

Riya: toh iss ka matlab hay kay kissi nay iss ko throw kar kay pehanka hay (she share her view)

Chotu: magar koi bhi itna expensive mobile kyun iss tarah pehankay ga (he ask)

Everyone quietly sinks in deep though...when

sakshi snap and said: until if he or she knows that something dangerous and revealing in that mobile (she inform)

Ayesha: something revealing and dangerous in that mobile (she repeats and looks her with confusion)

Sakshi: come on guys...mobile main kiya hota hay (she look everyone...one by one then continue) mms.

Sameer: sakshi...tumhara matlab hay kay...uss mobile main koi aisa mms tha...jiss ki wajah say...uss ko throw kar kay toornay ki koshish ki gai hay (he look sakshi and need to clear her point)

Sakshi: haan sameer...dekho na...yeh itna expensive mobile hay...koi uss ko kench kar deewar par uss waqt hi maaray ga...jab uss ko ...iss mobile ko destroyed karna hoga...aur mobile destroy karnay ka matlab kiya hay (she look each and everyone)

arjun snap and said: chotu...yeah mobile repairing ki jitney bhi shops hain...sab say pata karo...yeh mobile repair kay liyay zarror jay ga (chotu nodded and leave the hall)

sameer: shree...woh khoon say bheega hua mobile mila tha...uss ka data nikaala (he ask)

shree: no sir...I am still working on it (he reply)

sameer: ok, you go and try to continue work on it (shree nodded and leave)

sakshi and Ayesha discuss something in low voice then sameer interrupt them and said: Ayesha, sakshi and arjun...you go and check that advertising company.

Riya: rathod sir...if you don't mind can I go with them? (She ask instantly)

Sakshi, Ayesha and neil quickly raise their sight and look her...then neil and sakshi exchange their sight...one strange smile spread on their lips...before sameer say something...

sakshi said: sameer...it's ok...I think I go and use my sources...try to get more information regarding this company (she give her suggestion)

sameer: ok, then arjun, you and riya go...(he give other work to Ayesha and leave the hall)

arjun throw hard glare to sakshi and neil...after leaving sameer neil comes near sakshi and both talking in slow voice...which irritate arjun...he already very angry on sakshi...but see this scene and feel sakshi ignorance make him more furious...throw one hard glare on both of them...arjun cross the door...riya follow him with big smile...she sense arjun disturbance and jealous feeling form against neil...she decide to put fuel in this ignited fire...and this is the best time nature give her...following him...she make plan in her heart...how to take advantage for this situation.

FINISH PART HERE

I HOPE YOU ALL LIKE IT

PLEASE DO COMMENTS

THANKS

REHANA25


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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome dear
Love it
Wanna more updates of this
Waiting fr nxt
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderfull update...
is riya ne fir gandi game kheli...
bt arjun ne achche se controle kiya...thanx to sam...
ye sam,shakshi aur neil ke bich kya khichdi pak rahi hai???
aur ab riya ne konsa naya plan kar rahi hai???
lots of questions hai...
plz plz con.soon...
thanx for pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rehana25



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agree with esha di...
plz plz plz start new one after this one please ...
love to read ur stories...
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