Arakshi FF - Forever with You - Last chapter and Epilogue 07/05

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PoohLover

@PoohLover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

Rituu rituuu😳

I sooo sooo sooo sooo love when you go into the past...i just love reading about chotu arjun and sakshi sooo please bring them on...and the story is going on the right pace😃😃😃

Sooo sakshi,aisha,sameer and arjun both went to the same school thats awesomeee...cant wait to read mooore about their childhood😳😳

Arjun since a child only has been so protective about his titli and i loove that😛😛

So they are reopening the cafe..thats fantastic...soo want sakshi and arjun to open up to each other😳😳

Lovely updateee..thank you sooo sooo much..biiig hugs 🤗

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misakiscarlet

@misakiscarlet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#162

awesome update...
loved ayesha and sam's part
ayesha knows arjun's secret and when will u tell us that?????!!!
fb was nyce..
woweee they are reopening their caf..g8
contd. soon
thnx for pm

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sisodia_shefali

@sisodia_shefali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#163

nice update got sam and aisha also in this one so sam arjun aisha and sakshi were schoolmates
and childhood friends
aisha knows why he left his secret but then what could have happened was it another girl 😕 what made him go man this suspense is killing when r u going to disclose it
awww that was so cute their 1'st day at school together arjun joining the same school and not leaving titlee's side for whole day 😆
cafe reopen smelling some cakes and muffins 😛😃
thanks for pm

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#164

Awwwsssmmm part
Loved it
Supperbbb...
Amazing...
So Aisha knows why Arjun left...
Flashback was sooo cute Supper Awwwsssmmm...
Beautifully Written...
Cont sooon
Thanks for the PM

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Anjali.Mital

@Anjali.Mital

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Posted: 11 years ago

#165

Awesome update Ritu...

And the fb part was really nice...

Cont. soon...

Thanks for the pm...

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sakshiarjun

@sakshiarjun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#166

Yipeee...The cafe is reopening...Me dancing...

As always I melted in the flashback like the chocolate in the muffin...❤️

I can't even imagine the naughty Arjun...Kithna sathathe ho Sakshi ko...LOL...

Though he teased Sakshi but he enjoyed the whole day sitting with her as he mentioned"Just like your cake"...

So Aisha and Sakshi are childhood friends... She knew Arjun and Sakshi very well and She brought Arjun back...A big hug to her...🤗

Sameer was surprised by Arjun's sudden arrival...We too were surprised Sameer bhai😆

Hope the future of the caf and Arakshi are full of happiness...

Continue soon Ritu dear... Thanks for the update... Love yaaa...

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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

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Posted: 11 years ago

#167

They say,"The memories that a mother leaves are cherished forever..."-True Indeed😃
See I told you i am in love with this version of Arjun & his Maai.😃They are a delight to read.Their conversation brings a big wide smile on my face.😃
Something tells me the reason for Arjun leaving for such a long period has something related to his Maai coz If i have understood their relationship correctly then I can bet on this that nothing more important than his Maai can keep him apart from his Titli or his Maai.Wonder if he was even there when his Maai breath her last

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 11 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: EashaYousufzai
Awesome update di.
Just loved it.
Arjun called Sameer and let him know about his arrivsl.
Aisha was the one who brought him back.
And she know Arjun's secret.
Flashback was cute.
So, they are going to reopen the cafe.
Plz plz con soon..
Yes the story is going a little slow but no prob.
We love it anyway..

Thank you soo much Easha! 🤗

thanks for sayin that..hope it will become a bit more fast paced now😉

Originally posted by: anu91
superb update ritu...
FB was so cute...
y this much suspense?y he left her...so aisha knows the truth...
do cont soon...

Thank you soo much Anuu🤗

Originally posted by: kunchu
What was that Arjun and Aisha hiding?
really waiting to know that.
The FB was so cute, Loved it
I also wud loved to have a muffin now
ek parcel kardo na

Heyloo Helna🤗

Next one you get to know😉 And thanks for the comment! hehee hope you got the muffin..maine parcel kar diya tha😛

Originally posted by: miss_precious
The flashbacks are too cute
Thanks for the pm
Please update soon x

Thanks so muchh🤗

Originally posted by: anitasharma
Awesome update
its perfect
loved it

Thank youu🤗

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 11 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: Humzy
Wow awsm update
Loved it
Beautiful flash back
Continue soon

Thanks a lot HUmaira🤗

Originally posted by: Arakshiya_58
amazing update ...
love it alote...
so aisha bring him back ...and she knows his secret...
that fb part is awsome...
i love this little cute titli-.arjun...
waiting for more...
con .soon...
thanx for pm...

Thank youuu Gausiya🤗

Originally posted by: sweetpari4u97
awesome update.
flashback was too cute.
just loved it.
cont soon

Thank youu Parii🤗

Originally posted by: skrafty
awesome update as always
just loved it
the FB was cute and lovely
waiting for the next part
continue soon

Thanks a lot Shravani🤗

Originally posted by: jia03
ch 4:
awesome update👏
loved the flour throwing session and their playing ❤️

thanks for all the pms 🤗

Thank youuu Jia for the comments🤗

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 11 years ago

#170

Originally posted by: fly.high
So it ws Aisha who made Arjun come back...for Sakshi...its pretty evident that aisha knows well sakshi to knw that hw badly she needs arjun..

the li'l scene of arjun calling Sam ws awesomely written...

the flashbacks r always a treat for me...i m in love with Titli and ACP Arjun...

continue soon

love.

Thanks a lot for the comment Aisha🤗

Originally posted by: jia03
ch 5:
lovely update👏
the paper boats reminded me of my childhood...
i remember when i was in school.. we went for a picnic... our teacher made us do that same activity... i don't remember what i wrote... but that feeling to see your boat float is awesome...

Thanks sooo much for the comments Jia🤗

aww really? i didnt know my imagination had been a reality! thats awesome to know😳 thanks for sharing that!

Originally posted by: Rehana25
Hhmmm my watery mouth dripping water
Tasty chocolate and orange muffin fill with melted chocolate
Just love it
Yep story move a bit slow and still with some confusion
But it's ok you know better when you ready to open things
I enjoy the arakshi childhood and love to read past
Do continue soon

Thank yoouu Rehana🤗

thanks for the suggestions - maybe now it will be a lil more fast paced😉

Originally posted by: ugababe
Fantastic work!!

Can't wait for more :)

Khushi

Thank youuu Khushii🤗

Originally posted by: shreya09
great great great writing Rituuu 🤗
Flashback scenes are always my favorite here
but i am now also very eager to know what made Arjun distance himself from his title...
he actually came back after 6 long years.
very nice update it was
waiting for more 😳

Thank you soo much Shreyaa🤗

main kuch kharab likhti hoon tabhi u say its good lol..thanks a lottt😳