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Posted: 11 years ago
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heylo...

So as i had promised a raesha OS..which was long pending and also due to loads of blackmails from my morcha wali behnas...🥱🥱

idea is from Ishita...so if anyone has anything harsha against it plz direct all your cannons to her...🤓

well a bit distorted by me too..so 1 or 2 jootas could be thrown at me..but not more..🤔

and since i am writing for my adorably cunning sissys i want extra long and extra cheezy comments from all of you...😳

well owe this to all you four who had tortured me to write such idiotic stuff...😒

nways no more banters...do give a read and leave your reviews...😊

the characters are from ARJUN and you know them all but i have changed them a bit even the back story...so in case you cant relate or find it too absurd please avoid reading..



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INDEX

PART 1 page 1
PART 2 page 5
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made this banner hope you like it..😳




PART 1


'Aisha ye sab kya hai?tum pagal ho gayi ho?kyu gayi waha bina bataye?'a visibly fuming rathore was bursting on Aisha.

'Sir usse iski zaroorat thi.He was hiding something and i wanted to find that out ,'aisha justified herself with equal arrogance,

'mein abhi bhi chief hu aisha aur agar tumhe kahi jana hai,kisi se kuch puchna hai to mujhe batake jaiya karo.Tum ek team mein kam kar rahi ho.Agar team ke sath kam kar sakti ho to karo warna nehi.Do you understand that aisha?'rathore barked at a furious aisha,

After a long pause and a irritated expression aisha nodded her head.

'you may leave now.'Rathore dismissed her finally settling down on his chair,trying to calm himself down.

Aisha walked of her desk still muttering curses at him.She banged her fist on her desk which made her things jump up with the applied thrust.

Shree and Chotu were observing her from the time when Sameer had entered the office and the first thing in the morning he had called for her.The already two angry hot headed bosses were making their presence eternal in the office and this angry aisha again added to their annoying list.

Aisha had joined ETF 20 days back after her undercover mission's success which helped ETF in a case and thus ETF got introduced to their next appointed officer.

Aisha was a woman of less words and more deeds.She was a multi talented person,an ammunition expert by proffession and a painter by passion.She was definately a feminist who always made her own presence in front of everyone specially at her work place which consisted mainly of men.

She was an introvert,mostly silent,but hardworking beautiful lady who had spent most of her time undercover working there almost from the past 4years.Her joining ETF was much to her reluctance but ETF being one of the best security forces she couldnt deny the offer.

Though its been some time she has joined ETF but still her relation with her aquaintances has not developed.She normally kept to herself though she was always praised for her contributions in the work.But her lone self always kept the others at a distance except for Rathore,the chief,who gave her the equal space she deserved in his team but her self acclaimed working style annoyed him to a big extent.

Two days back ETF had come through a kidnapping case which had later turned out to be a planned kidnap by the victim herself and ETF clearly suspected the victim had been into some pressure for planning such a horrible deed.All the while Aisha had carried out her own investigations without informing anyone,not even the chief.When they came to know about the useful results from her did they came to know of her individual investigative skills.

Though Rathore was completely against such a thing but never probed her about it.But he lost his temper when Aisha went to meet the victim's uncle and charged him of helping the victim to get money from her father.The uncle was a known underworld don and meeting him alone had high risks of getting in grave danger.

Aisha had her skills to handle them but then Rathore wasnt convinced and finally after a long search for almost the whole night they could trace her in a less visited closed factory which was then used as the don's meeting and transacting place.

Finding Aisha safe had boiled down rathore's impatience and insecurity but it had brought back the hidden anger.He called her the next morning just to burst her for her deed last night,which could have cost her life.

Shree and Chotu had witnessed the heated gaze and conversation through the closed soundproof door but they wernt too eager to console Aisha,they never shared such a relation.They looked on trying to decipher the next move and had taken a step towards her desk when rathore called them all for a case and all hurried to the conference room leaving an angry aisha behind.

Aisha was trying to compose her anger but it was almost getting impossible for her to take the disgusted angry look specially from a man.She leaned onto her desk and closed her eyes but nothing really worked.Finally she sighed and opened her eyes just to find a glass of water being held in front of her.

He looked up at the source and found arjun holding the glass to her with a meaningful calm gaze.She wanst much fond of Arjun for his irritating attitute and 'i-am-the-boss' look but she respected him for the excellence in work and the concern he always showed in his disguised self but then he was almost like a mirror image of her which made her smile at times.

Aisha took the glass from him quitely and sipped the water looking at him.He lowered his gaze and walked away to the conference room without sparing her another gaze.

The day became hectic with the arrival of the case and by the time all sat to take a breath of relief it was night.The whole day there was continuous arguments between aisha,sameer and Arjun,which led to some tough moments between them.Though aisha supported Arjun at times and accompanied him but Sameer was always left out of the league,which irritated him even more.

It was late and everyone had gone back home leaving behind Aisha,arjun and sameer.Arjun was in his cabin sitting with his usual file and a pen thinking while sameer was busy with a mail.Aisha was immersed in her laptop screen.

Sameer pressed the send tab and locked him computer.He picked up his gun holster and came outside checking the time on his mobile.He blinked his eyes looking at the time and walked out hurriedly when he sensed some lights at the workarea in the otherwise dark place.

He walked to the desk and found aisha reading something on the laptop screen.He frowned at her neglegence to the time and it brought back his rage.

'Aisha,kiya kar rahi ho yaha?itni raat ho gayi hai,ghar nehi gayi?'he shouted surprising her,

'sir..'she stood up surprised,

'chalo mein drop kar deta hu,'he said calming himself down looking at her shocked face,

'nehi sir,ap jaiye mein chali jaungi,'she exclaimed back raising a brow,

'aisha raat ho gayi hai,tumhara aise akele jana..'sameer started again but was stopped by aisha,

'Sir,meine kaha na mein chali jaungi,apko mere har cheeze se itna problem kyu hai?apko der ho rahi hai,ap ghar jaiye,'she retorted back,crossing her arms at her chest.

Sameer gave a disgusted look at her and walked away.She gave a winning smile at his departure and sat back on the chair leaning back on the head rest and rotating the chair.Her eyes went back to the computer screen and she straighten back to complete her task.

It was quite late when she sprinted down the steps to the parking.But to her utter surprise there wasnt a single vehicle present there.She stamped her foot and walked to the road with the least hope of getting a conveience or a trustworthy lift.

It was a few minutes she was waiting on the road when a car came and stopped in front of her.The windshields slipped down and arjun popped his head out opening the door for her.

'Aao,mein tumhe drop kar dunga,mein bhi ussi taraf ja raha hu,'he called her,

Aisha dropped in.Atleast Arjun was far better than her chief.They drove away at perfect silence only aisha directing him the way at times.Aisha was looking outside feeling the now-almost-empty mumbai roads when the car stopping making her look at arjun.She looked at him with a questioning gaze.

'kulfi khaogi?'he replied pointing to the kulfi cart at the side of the road,

'abhi?sara khatam ho gaya hoga,'she replied with a sarcastic look,

'nehi inke pass khatam nehi hota,'he replied looking at the man in the cart,who was
packing his stuffs,and then again at her,

'nehi ghar chalte hai,'she replied after a moment of pause,still looking at his lost face,

'roshni keheti thi,kulfi khane se dimag thanda hota hai aur neend achi hoti hai,'he said again giving a faraway look,

'roshni?'she asked with a frown,

'meri patni,waise uska ye nuska kam acha karta tha,try karogi?'he asked looking directly at her,

Aisha couldnt reject after the sparkle which brighten up his face when he mentioned roshni.She nodded and both got down from the car and walked to the kulfi cart.

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done...now give back your reviews...😊

pms will be send later after a day or two...getting busy for a few days..😳😳

Edited by rimi_invisible - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res..me 1st
unres... lemme dance 1st...


🥳 🥳 🥳



i know kabhi kabhi hi 1st hoti hu...n i also know k iske bad jo mai karungi sb meko wapas karenge..still...m so happy...
sneha di..goldie...sorry..but...



d start was





ya... rimi di is ryt.. agr idea acha na lge plz mujhe marna..me n my crazy mind...
wel well.. firstly thank u rimi di.. both 4 listening to ur morcha wali sis...n d me 1st position too..


coming to d update... wow! kya start hai... sam blasting on Aisha... cool 👍🏼
poor shreetu... becharon k liye really tough hai..sab hot heads ...
arey table marne se k hoga...mat maro...
chalo...atleast arjun is capable of handling her...
lol..aisha..mirror image of arjun... 😆
ahan..aur jao sharafat se drop krne...yehi hoga...
arjun n aisha...adhi raat ko kulfi?
khao khao...dimag thanda hoga...
aisha is so short tempered!
Ab jaldi se nxt update... superb strt... :-D :-D 🥳


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Posted: 11 years ago
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I know, I am late. I AM NOT SORRY😆
Sameer's attitude was DHASU, I don't know why but I liked that he blasted on Aeysha.
But that surely doesn't change the fact that he was AKdu & Sadu. Idiot kahin ka. Ese koi kisi masoom larki ko sunata hai.😡

Anyways, about Ayesha I can very well understand her state, being a woman who works at men oriented profession, her not taking "Manly"orders from her boss was justified. ⭐️

Arjun-ayesha, Awww you write their scene so sweet & cute, Arjun saw his mirror reflection in ayesha. Or may be he saw his Bhabi in her😆

Just tell me, Kulfi scene wala idea kiska tha??? I wannna give big hug to that person. It was simple but so heart-meltingly beautiful.🤗
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unres...

Morcha successful...Congo girls...🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳
Awesome start...
Sam scolding Aisha...😡😡😡
LOL...bechara table...Aisha ke gusse ka sikar ho gaya...😆😆😆
Poor Shree-Chotu... two already the ab ek aur aa gayi...😆😆😆
Arjun...mirror image of Aisha...🤣🤣🤣
Arjun asking for having kulfi to Aisha...😲😲😲 😲😲😲
I guess Sam ke anger ke piche wajah kuch aur hi hai...😉😉😉
Continue soon...Advance Thanks for PM...
Edited by Snehajain - 11 years ago
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Awesome start 👍🏼
loved the last scene between arjun & aisha.. it was cute ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Haila maine ye dekha hi nhi.


Ye samsha bhi na...


Oh Arjun kulfi khayega.. great.. use to har 3 4 kulfhiya deni chayie aur sammy use to Fridge mai bitha dena chayie... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved it... Love arjun and Aisha's genuine friendship
Please continue soon x
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Awesome update
Loved it
Sam blasted on Aisha😡😡
Arjun mirror image of Aisha🤣🤣
Arjun asked Aisha for kulfi😲😲😲
Interesting
Waiting for the next part
Continue soon

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