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Posted: 11 years ago
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SORRY GUYS FOR UPDATEING SO LATE WON'T TAKE MUCH LONGER
COMMENTS DONE TO ALL IF YOU WISHES THEN DO CHECK SOME OF
YOU GUYS HAD A DOUT ABOUT ARIYA & ABHAY AGE SO LET ME CLEAR IT ABHAY IS 11 & ARIYA IS 4


Part 2

Next Morning

Delhi

Arjun moving towards Ariya's room to wake her up on the other side Ariya peeping out of her room sees Arjun and runs towards the bed. Arjun enters her room & sees her catching her stomach & moving right & left on bed

Arjun (Scared) : Ariya !!

Ariya : papa ! papa ! Mare stomach mai bhut pain ho raha hai Raat sai

Arjun : Raat sai !! Tum na mujha jagaya kyu nahi mai abhi DR ko bulata ho

Ariya (popping her eyes ) : DR !! Nahi
Mai thik ho (jumping on bed) app aai or dekho stomach pain bhi chala gaya
Arjun : Badmash mare jaan hi nikal di
Ab batu ya sab nakra kyu

Ariya : papa mujha school nahi jana

Arjun : aap ko to school pasand aai thi na to fir

Ariya : (making faces) plzzz

Arjun : ok per kal sa jana padaga

Ariya : nodes her head

Ariya thinking

Yesterday in her Class room

Teacher : Sab bacha aai gai hai chalo ab ek ek kar ka apna name or apna bara mai kuch batu jasa apna father or mother ka name aap ko kya pasand hai

When Ariya's chance comes

Ariya : Mare name Ariya hai mai papa ki pari ho vo mujhsa bhut sara pyar karta hai unka name Arjun hai vo mare har wish pure karta hai

A girl from behind : tumna Mumma ka name nahi kha Ariya

Ariya : Mumma ka name ... mujha nahi pata

Everyone starts laughing & says : Mumma ka name nahi pata .

Flash back ends

Ariya starts crying

Mumbai

Abhay comes tumbling with a tray in
His hand keeps it on table and goes near the study table of Riya and takes the diary and reads it

12 sall hua huma ek dusra sa alag hua
dekha jai to zindagi kafi aga nikal gai hai.mai yaha mumbai mai apna bata ka sath aj sa 12 sale palha mai na usa akhri baar dekha tha uska baad ..

( kal ka day mom unsa alag hui thi )




Uska baad na baat hui na mulakat.

Magar in 12 salo mai ek din abhi asa nahi tha jab mujha unki yaad nahi aai

( pata nahi mom aap kasa us admi ko yaad karti ho unsa pyar kasa kar sakti ho jis insan na aapko itna dard diya aap ko akala chud gaye jab aap k Unki sab sa jada zarurat thi )

aaj bhi har raat mai diry lihyi ho dil ka kisi kona mai ya pata hota hai ki is vakt khai na khai subha ho rhi hai

Arjun ka naya parivar ..

Use parivar mai usa koi pyar sa jagai ...

( vo insan to apna jindagi mai aga baad gaya hai or aap uski yaad sa apna aap ko nikal hi nahi pa rha kyu mom une insan ko koi farak nahi padhta ki hum jee rha ya fir maar )

Riya gets up Abhi keep's the diry and moves to her .
Abhay : Mom aap utha gai ya lo milk pi lo
Riya : Abhay tum itna jaldi kyu uthta ho
Kitni baar ka hai or duud (milk) kyu

Abhay : Or maina bhi kitni baar kha hai aap sa aap roya (cry) maat karo rona sa week ho jata ho isiliya mai na apka liya milk laya ho
Riya(smiles & drinks) : Aaj tumhare study leave hai na mai tumha Raj ka ghar chud da ti hu sath milka padna

Abhay : mom mujha akala padna pasand hai u know na

Riya : I know Abhai

Abhay : aap jaldi sa redy ho jau

Delhi

[ Arjun's Office ]

Employe : sir kal ki deal jo cancel karna ka disission abhi hum change kar sakte hai

Arjun : tumha ek baar khai baat samaj nahi aai vo zamin gareeb logo ka sahara hai sare zindagi ke kamai ( savings) apna in chota ghar ko bana na mai laga da ta hai agar hum unsa yah cheen laga to vo log kha jai ga vasa bhi jis tarha sa Mr Mahta ( Clint) ya zamnen la rha hai vo illegal hai

Employe : sir agar hum nahi to koi or company la lan gai

Arjun : koi nahi langa ya zamin illegal hai koi company hai nahi kahagi fir bhi tum ispa watch karo

Mumbai

[ Riya's office ]

Riya's Boss : Riya kha hai

Riya enters

Riya : sir mai kuch sites dekhna gai thi

Riya's Boss : good mujha tumsa important baat karni hai

Riya : Hai boliya na sir

Riya's Boss : Riya tum to janti ho na Riya humare company ka status
Kal hi ek jana mana company na ek badi deal ko rejecte kiya hai yaha aacha chance hai humare liya Riya agar ya deal crack ho gai to humare sare loans sab kuch thuk ho jai gai

Riya : no worries sir mai sab hand kar lunga

Riya about to start her work when she gets call from her house

Servant : mam jaldi sa ghar aa jai ya Abhay baba gir gai.

Riya : kya .. !! Mai abhi aai ( keeps the call ) &
says her colleague : mujha jana honga tum location , Area sab dekho mai aka presentation banati ho.

Riya's house

Riya : Abhi !! Abhi !!

Servant : mam DR akar check up kar ka gai koi zada serious baat nahi hai
Bas thudi chot aai hai kal tak thik ho jai gi

Riya : Abhi kha hai

Servant : apna kamra mai

Riya runs to his room

Riya : Abhi kitni baar kha hai kuch chiya to kisi or sa kha do stool lakar chadna (climb) karna ki zarurat nahi hai

Abhay : mom mai bulkul thik ho aap office sa khu aa gai bad manners chiya jai ya

Riya : Aach .. mujhpa order .. *Wink*

Riya comes back 2 her office & makes the presentation .
Clients loved her presentation and agrees to work with them ..

Delhi

[Arjun's Office]

Employe : sir ! sir ! Ek kisi company na project la liya hai ..

Arjun : kya .. tumna unha ya bada ya ki ya illegal tarika sa land liya ja rha hai

Employe : hai sir we need to do something

Arjun : kya name hai company ka I think mujha hi involve hona pada ga

Employe : Khurana Construction
Mumbai

Arjun hearing "Mumbai" goes out of his cabin

Arjun in some alone place thinking

PLZ SEE LAST PROMO

Arjun tumhara mare pas hona bhut matter karta hai or tumhare ise pyar ka sahara mai mai pure jindagi gusar lungi I LOVE U mai tumsa bhut pyar karti ho or hamasha karti rhaugi

He images some of their fb

Riya being sad & looking at him

Lafzon se jo tha pare
Khaalipan ko jo bhare
Kuchh tto tha tere mere darmiyaan
He keeps his head supporting on wall
Rishte ko kya mod doon
Naata yeh abb tod doon
Ya phir yun hi chhod doon, darmiyaan
Benaam rishta woh...
Benaam rishta woh, bechain karta jo
Ho naa.. sake jo bayaan, darmiyaan
Darmiyaan Darmiyan
Darmeyaan Darmeyan
Kuchh tto tha tere-mere darmiyaan
Haaye
Darmiyaan Darmiyan
Darmeyaan Darmeyan
Kuchh tto tha tere-mere darmiyaan

Tears rolling down his cheeks

Someone from behind calls him & he gets out of the fb and response to him

old person : bata ya dekho huma humara ghar khali karvana ka noti mil
Gaya ab kuch nhi ho sakta tum na apna taraf sa jitne ho sakta ha utna kiya ya hi bhut kuch hai humare liya ( folding his hand)

Arjun catches his hand and says

Arjun : mai aap logo ko asa har maan na nahi da sakta

Arjun gets a call

Arjun : Chacha ( uncle) mai aap sa baad mai baat karta ho
He picks up the call

Employe : sir mai na use company ko bhut offers diya fir bhi vo nahi maini ab aap ko hi vaha jana honga

Promo[/COLOR]



Edited by Black_Angel - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: saritak

wow
awesome
super update
love it
cont soon


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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
Wow..
Awesome update dear..
Just loved it..
Do continue soon..
And thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
Wow
Awesome update
Love it
Cont soon
Edited by zubiya92 - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: unishaz

superb.. THanks for pm..


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll

Wow..

Awesome update dear..
Just loved it..
Do continue soon..
And thanks for the pm.


Thanks 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: zubiya92

Wow
Awesome update
Love it
Cont soon


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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
Awesome
Superb
loved it

Ariya is too cute...she doesn't want to face the question of her mom
Poor girl

Abhay is innocent and probably he has grown more than the other children of his age due to circumstances

Arjun is so good.A caring father and also he does good to poor people

Riya is a very good mother

Promo is quite interesting
Will be waiting for the next part
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm

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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update
loved it continue soon
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#80
awesum update ...
superb
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