Hai guys thanks for such a appreciating, lovely, precious comment...And being so patient ...
I was so angry on my self ...
I am writing this part 3rd tym...
I was about to complete everything just
Than battery dead. ... 😡
So this is 3rd tym I am writing I am tired and restless sorry for mistakes ..
And I know I am going to me lots. ...
3-3 baar to mujh jasa pagal hi lik sakti hai
Enjoy the story & leve u r precious comment
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4:30 AM MUMBAI
A hand stretching out of bed struggling for Alarm clock
And finally she reaches it and stops it
Riya : Hai uthti ho na to chup kar
5:00 AM
Riya gets up
Riya : Hai bhagvan aaj to Abhay ka exam hai
Riya runs 2 Abhay's room
Riya : Abhay Abhay ...
she doesn't find him & she goes to hall & sees him
studying
Riya : Mai abhi tumhare liya brake fast lati ho
Abhay : No muma mai na milk pii liya hai aap kyu uth
gai mai chala ja ta ( making riya sit on the chair) Aap
kal pure raat file complete kar rha tha
Riya : Kasa nahi uthi mare prince ka aaj exam hai or
mai best of luck kana kasa nahi uth ti
Abhay : love you muma
Riya : love you too ab chalo na to bus miss ho jai gi
5:10 DELHI
Arjun : jaan utho jaan
Ariya : papa sirf 2 min
Arjun : 2 min kar ta karta 1 ghanta ho gaya hai ab jaldi Sa utho aaj school ka first day hai
6:00 AM DELHI
Arjun: ( screening)Ariya jaldi aa jau bus miss ho jai gi
Ariya : (coming down ) ya ya I am done
or Bus ... mai bus mai jaugi aap ka sath nahi (making a
weird face )
Arjun : Aaj buhut important meeting hai per paaka
promise mai tumha lana aauga
Ariya : mare school ka 1 day per aap hi nahi rahonga
Arjun : sorry (making a puppy face )
Abhay's School
Everyone is busy learning some asking answers to
their friend some of them praying badly a perfect
situation
before the exam but something was weird Abhay was a
relax as nothing was happening it was as normal day
for him he was just sitting on the table and watching
everyone suddenly ge sees his friend searching for
something
Abhay : Raj sab thik hai na.
Raj : voo mare pencil box nahi mil rha
(Exam invigilator enters )
Abhay : mare paas to sirf pencil hai tum chaho to la
sakta ho vasa bhi Mam aa gai hai
Raj : hai mujha pencil hi da do
Exam invigilator : Students plzz keep u r bags outside
Ariya's School
Teacher : ya ha kin kin ko drawing pasand hai
everyone screaming : mujha mujha
Teacher : OK Ok aap log colors nikalo mai tumha
Drawing paper distribute kar ti ho
(Suddenly a girl starts crying and teacher goes to her )
Teacher : kya hua bata ro kyu rhi ho
Girl : Mai color bhul gai
Ariya hears this and forwards her colors to her
Ariya : koi vaat nahi hum share kare gai jab mai ek color
kalug to tum dusra simple
Abhay's school
30 min left for exam 2 get over
Abhay has completed the paper a boy throws a chit to
Raj (Abhay's friend ) And Raj reads it .
NOTE : WATTS THE ANSWER TO QUESTION 15
Raj rods his head in no and throws the chit back
Invigilator sees and Tells Raj to get up and ask the guy
to pass the chit invigilator reads and and miss
understands that Raj wrote the chit and calls him
outside Abhay sees all this he goes out of the exam
hall invigilator scolding Raj and Raj trying to explain
Abhay : Sir kya mai vo chit dekh sata ho
invigilator : Abhay tum yaha kya kar rha ho andar jau
Abhay : Plzz sir
invigilator shows him
Abhay : Sir ya note Raj na nahi likhi hai ya note
pen sa likhi gai hai or
aaj Raj na apna penci box lana bhul gaya tha or mai
na usa pencil di Ab raj na ya note kyu nahi likhi ab aap
samjha ya samjhau ...
Arjun's Office
Arjun sitting in his cabin
Employe : sir Clint aai gai hai and presentation bhi redy hai.
Both of them proceedes ...
After the presentation
Clint : Mr . RAWTA bhut duna tha aap ka bara or aap ka
kaam ka bara mai aaj dekh bhi liya ...
It's Amazing so hum ab deal kab sing kar rha hai.
Arjun : Mujha ya deal nahi karni...
employe : Kyu sir ?? Ya aap kya kha rha hai...
Arjun : (Angrily) Aap apna aap ko kya samajta hai ...
Aap yaha Anadashram banai gai...
Aap ko kya lagta gai ki aap bhut aacha kaam kar rha ho..
Ya jagha pa garib logo ki basti hai un ka ghar ujardkar
aap aap ashram bana na chata ho ya kha rule hai ki ek
ko chat (roof) do or dusra ko use chat sa nikal do...
Mai ya project nahi lunga ..
aap ko or ko dhul lijiya ...
(Arjun moves out )
Riya's office
Riya : sir I am redy with my presentation aap aa rha hai na
Riya's sir : Riya hamare izat pure ja chuki hsi or jo bachi
hai vo tumhare haath mai hai..
Hum par bhut loon hai...
plzz kisi bhi tarha ya deal crack kar do..
Riya : don't worry sir sab thik ho jai ga
(Both move)
After the presentation
Riya's Sir : I am proud of u tum na kitna aacha sa
sambhala sab kuch
Riya : sir ya to mara kaam hai (looking at the watch)
Riya's sir : tumha kahi jana hai kya baar - baar ghari kyu
dekh rhi ho...
Riya: sir mare bata ki school chutna vali hongi
Riya's sir : mai droop kar do ?
Riya : no sir mai chali jaugi.
Riya's sir : come on itni badi deal crack ki hai itna to
mai kar hi sakta ho na
Riya smiles and nood her head
Abhay's school
Raj : Thanks Abhay
Abhay : Raj...
Raj : (intrups) mumy papa aa gai...
Mumy mumy aap ko pata hai aaj kya
hua ( he explains everything )
Ayesha : wow Abhay app to bhut smart Ho
Raj : Thanks Abhay
Abhay : Raj no thanks ...
muma khati hai na sach bolna chahiya
or sach ka sath dana Chiya hai na
mama (I guess mama means sis bro)
Sam : hai bata tum na sahi kaha ( Moving his fingers on his hair )
vasa aap ki muma kha hai
On the other side
Riya reaches school
Riya : Thanks sir
Riya's Boss : Plzz thanks maat bolo
Tum apna data ko laa aau mai yaha
wait karta ho is bhana usa mil bhi
lunga or tumha ghar bhi drop kar
dunga.
Riya : no sir mai chali jaugi.
Riya's sir : r u sure
Riya : yes sir thanks for the lift
Riya moves towards Abhay's class
Raj : Masi aa gai
Riya : itna zoor ka kyu chila rha
hai...
Raj : masi masi aap ko pata hai. ...
Sam : use saas to lana Da...
agar kabhi koi announcement karna
hai to tujh sa aaker bolna chahiya ..
Chila chila kar khaga ek min mou
baand nahi rahta hia
Ayesha : usa kyu daat rha ho...
Sam : sorry
Riya : ab bolo
Raj : Raj asa bhi koi soory bolta hai
Riya & Ayesha both looking at sam
Sam ( holding his ear ) : sorry...
Raj : Masi aap ko pata hai aaj kya hua
( he starts his mahabharat )
Ariya's School Ariya waiting for Arjun.
Arjun comes in a hurry
Ariya : sorry jaan late ho gaya
Ariya : late! !!!!!!!!
Aap pure pure itna hour late ho
Showing ( 3-4 fingers )
Arjun : sorry let's go home ..
Ariya : naa sirf sorry ek to aap mujha
chodna bhi nahi aai or Ab late ho gai
Aap na teen ( 10 ) tym up down karo
Arjun does so.
Arjun : now let's go..
Ariya : No .. mujha icecream khilanai
padhage ... Promise...
Arjun& Ariya moving towards car and
Ariya telling Arjun about
her first day of school
10:pm Mumbai
Abhay looking outside his
window
Abhay : sabka paas dad
Hai sirf mare paas nahi
hai ...
Raj ka dad usa kitna pyar
karta hai aaj jab vo Raj ko
Mana rha tha mai vaha
chup chap khada tha
bhagvan ji aap
na kabhi so cha hai ki
mujha kasa lagta hai..
aap ko kasa pata honga ..
kabhi aap na mare felling
nahi samjhi Na dad na. ...
dad no to mare mom ko
Bhut sad kiya hai. ...
mare mom is the best
mom... or apna unha hurt
kiya I hate u dad I hate u
...
10:04 PM Delhi
Ariya looking at the
bhajvanji statue ..
Ariya : Bhagvan ji bhagvan
Ji jab mai choti thi tab aap
na mare mom ko apna
paas bola liya aaj mai
palhi baar school gai mare
Mom ko apna paas bola liya
plzz mare mom ko mujha
vapas kar do dad bhi sad
rahta hai vo bhi happy honga or mai bhi plzzz..
Mumbai
Riya screaming
Riya : so jau
Raj : palha apa
Riya : zidh maat karo ..
mai ja ka so jau gi ..
Raj goes to bed and riya
sits beside him and
moves when he is asleep
Riya goes to her room takes the diry and starts writting (plz refer page 6
Those who didn't )
12 sall hua huma ek dusra sa alag hua
dekha jai to zindagi kafi aga nikal gai hai.mai yaha mumbai mai apna bata ka sath aj sa 12 sale palha mai na usa akhri baar dekha tha uska baad ..
(Abhay's wakes up and comes to riya's room and see's riya crying
And goes back to his room
Abhay to himself : fir sa mom ro rhi hai kuch to karna padaga )
Uska baad na baat hui na mulakat.
Magar in 12 salo mai ek din abhi asa nahi tha jab mujha unki yaad nahi aai aaj bhi har raat mai diry lihyi ho dil ka kisi kona mai ya pata hota hai ki is vakt khai na khai subha ho rhi hai
Arjun ka naya parivar ..
Use parivar mai usa koi pyar sa jagai ...
Abhay comes screaming ...
Abhay : muma muma mujha daar lag rha hai plzz aap mare sath so na moving riya from her desk into the bed ...
TO BE CONTINUED ...
PRomo ...
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