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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Godly_Affection

awesome n interesting

continu soon


Thanks ..

Story will be posted in few min... 😊
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Originally posted by: sdutta

hey

thanks for the pm 😃
after watching the promo ,i became more impatience
plz plz plz start soon


Thank you sooo much ... 😊
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Originally posted by: Snehajain

Nice...

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...


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#44
Hai guys thanks for such a appreciating, lovely, precious comment...
And being so patient ...
I was so angry on my self ...
I am writing this part 3rd tym...
I was about to complete everything just
Than battery dead. ... 😡
So this is 3rd tym I am writing I am tired and restless sorry for mistakes ..
And I know I am going to me lots. ...
3-3 baar to mujh jasa pagal hi lik sakti hai
Enjoy the story & leve u r precious comment

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4:30 AM MUMBAI

A hand stretching out of bed struggling for Alarm clock

And finally she reaches it and stops it

Riya : Hai uthti ho na to chup kar

5:00 AM

Riya gets up

Riya : Hai bhagvan aaj to Abhay ka exam hai

Riya runs 2 Abhay's room

Riya : Abhay Abhay ...

she doesn't find him & she goes to hall & sees him

studying

Riya : Mai abhi tumhare liya brake fast lati ho

Abhay : No muma mai na milk pii liya hai aap kyu uth

gai mai chala ja ta ( making riya sit on the chair) Aap

kal pure raat file complete kar rha tha

Riya : Kasa nahi uthi mare prince ka aaj exam hai or

mai best of luck kana kasa nahi uth ti

Abhay : love you muma

Riya : love you too ab chalo na to bus miss ho jai gi

5:10 DELHI

Arjun : jaan utho jaan

Ariya : papa sirf 2 min

Arjun : 2 min kar ta karta 1 ghanta ho gaya hai ab jaldi Sa utho aaj school ka first day hai

6:00 AM DELHI

Arjun: ( screening)Ariya jaldi aa jau bus miss ho jai gi

Ariya : (coming down ) ya ya I am done

or Bus ... mai bus mai jaugi aap ka sath nahi (making a

weird face )

Arjun : Aaj buhut important meeting hai per paaka

promise mai tumha lana aauga

Ariya : mare school ka 1 day per aap hi nahi rahonga

Arjun : sorry (making a puppy face )
Abhay's School

Everyone is busy learning some asking answers to

their friend some of them praying badly a perfect

situation

before the exam but something was weird Abhay was a

relax as nothing was happening it was as normal day

for him he was just sitting on the table and watching

everyone suddenly ge sees his friend searching for

something

Abhay : Raj sab thik hai na.

Raj : voo mare pencil box nahi mil rha

(Exam invigilator enters )

Abhay : mare paas to sirf pencil hai tum chaho to la

sakta ho vasa bhi Mam aa gai hai

Raj : hai mujha pencil hi da do

Exam invigilator : Students plzz keep u r bags outside

Ariya's School

Teacher : ya ha kin kin ko drawing pasand hai

everyone screaming : mujha mujha

Teacher : OK Ok aap log colors nikalo mai tumha

Drawing paper distribute kar ti ho

(Suddenly a girl starts crying and teacher goes to her )

Teacher : kya hua bata ro kyu rhi ho

Girl : Mai color bhul gai

Ariya hears this and forwards her colors to her

Ariya : koi vaat nahi hum share kare gai jab mai ek color

kalug to tum dusra simple

Abhay's school

30 min left for exam 2 get over

Abhay has completed the paper a boy throws a chit to

Raj (Abhay's friend ) And Raj reads it .

NOTE : WATTS THE ANSWER TO QUESTION 15

Raj rods his head in no and throws the chit back

Invigilator sees and Tells Raj to get up and ask the guy

to pass the chit invigilator reads and and miss

understands that Raj wrote the chit and calls him

outside Abhay sees all this he goes out of the exam

hall invigilator scolding Raj and Raj trying to explain

Abhay : Sir kya mai vo chit dekh sata ho

invigilator : Abhay tum yaha kya kar rha ho andar jau

Abhay : Plzz sir

invigilator shows him

Abhay : Sir ya note Raj na nahi likhi hai ya note

pen sa likhi gai hai or

aaj Raj na apna penci box lana bhul gaya tha or mai

na usa pencil di Ab raj na ya note kyu nahi likhi ab aap

samjha ya samjhau ...
Arjun's Office

Arjun sitting in his cabin

Employe : sir Clint aai gai hai and presentation bhi redy hai.

Both of them proceedes ...

After the presentation

Clint : Mr . RAWTA bhut duna tha aap ka bara or aap ka

kaam ka bara mai aaj dekh bhi liya ...

It's Amazing so hum ab deal kab sing kar rha hai.

Arjun : Mujha ya deal nahi karni...

employe : Kyu sir ?? Ya aap kya kha rha hai...

Arjun : (Angrily) Aap apna aap ko kya samajta hai ...

Aap yaha Anadashram banai gai...

Aap ko kya lagta gai ki aap bhut aacha kaam kar rha ho..

Ya jagha pa garib logo ki basti hai un ka ghar ujardkar

aap aap ashram bana na chata ho ya kha rule hai ki ek

ko chat (roof) do or dusra ko use chat sa nikal do...

Mai ya project nahi lunga ..

aap ko or ko dhul lijiya ...

(Arjun moves out )

Riya's office

Riya : sir I am redy with my presentation aap aa rha hai na

Riya's sir : Riya hamare izat pure ja chuki hsi or jo bachi

hai vo tumhare haath mai hai..

Hum par bhut loon hai...

plzz kisi bhi tarha ya deal crack kar do..

Riya : don't worry sir sab thik ho jai ga

(Both move)

After the presentation

Riya's Sir : I am proud of u tum na kitna aacha sa

sambhala sab kuch

Riya : sir ya to mara kaam hai (looking at the watch)

Riya's sir : tumha kahi jana hai kya baar - baar ghari kyu

dekh rhi ho...

Riya: sir mare bata ki school chutna vali hongi

Riya's sir : mai droop kar do ?

Riya : no sir mai chali jaugi.

Riya's sir : come on itni badi deal crack ki hai itna to

mai kar hi sakta ho na

Riya smiles and nood her head
Abhay's school

Raj : Thanks Abhay

Abhay : Raj...

Raj : (intrups) mumy papa aa gai...

Mumy mumy aap ko pata hai aaj kya

hua ( he explains everything )

Ayesha : wow Abhay app to bhut smart Ho

Raj : Thanks Abhay

Abhay : Raj no thanks ...

muma khati hai na sach bolna chahiya

or sach ka sath dana Chiya hai na

mama (I guess mama means sis bro)
Sam : hai bata tum na sahi kaha ( Moving his fingers on his hair )

vasa aap ki muma kha hai

On the other side

Riya reaches school

Riya : Thanks sir

Riya's Boss : Plzz thanks maat bolo

Tum apna data ko laa aau mai yaha

wait karta ho is bhana usa mil bhi
lunga or tumha ghar bhi drop kar

dunga.

Riya : no sir mai chali jaugi.

Riya's sir : r u sure
Riya : yes sir thanks for the lift

Riya moves towards Abhay's class

Raj : Masi aa gai

Riya : itna zoor ka kyu chila rha

hai...

Raj : masi masi aap ko pata hai. ...

Sam : use saas to lana Da...

agar kabhi koi announcement karna

hai to tujh sa aaker bolna chahiya ..

Chila chila kar khaga ek min mou

baand nahi rahta hia

Ayesha : usa kyu daat rha ho...
Sam : sorry

Riya : ab bolo

Raj : Raj asa bhi koi soory bolta hai

Riya & Ayesha both looking at sam

Sam ( holding his ear ) : sorry...

Raj : Masi aap ko pata hai aaj kya hua

( he starts his mahabharat )

Ariya's School Ariya waiting for Arjun.
Arjun comes in a hurry

Ariya : sorry jaan late ho gaya

Ariya : late! !!!!!!!!
Aap pure pure itna hour late ho

Showing ( 3-4 fingers )
Arjun : sorry let's go home ..
Ariya : naa sirf sorry ek to aap mujha
chodna bhi nahi aai or Ab late ho gai

Aap na teen ( 10 ) tym up down karo

Arjun does so.

Arjun : now let's go..

Ariya : No .. mujha icecream khilanai

padhage ... Promise...

Arjun& Ariya moving towards car and

Ariya telling Arjun about

her first day of school

10:pm Mumbai

Abhay looking outside his

window

Abhay : sabka paas dad

Hai sirf mare paas nahi

hai ...

Raj ka dad usa kitna pyar

karta hai aaj jab vo Raj ko

Mana rha tha mai vaha

chup chap khada tha

bhagvan ji aap

na kabhi so cha hai ki

mujha kasa lagta hai..

aap ko kasa pata honga ..

kabhi aap na mare felling

nahi samjhi Na dad na. ...

dad no to mare mom ko

Bhut sad kiya hai. ...

mare mom is the best

mom... or apna unha hurt
kiya I hate u dad I hate u
...

10:04 PM Delhi

Ariya looking at the

bhajvanji statue ..

Ariya : Bhagvan ji bhagvan

Ji jab mai choti thi tab aap

na mare mom ko apna

paas bola liya aaj mai

palhi baar school gai mare
Mom ko apna paas bola liya

plzz mare mom ko mujha

vapas kar do dad bhi sad

rahta hai vo bhi happy honga or mai bhi plzzz..

Mumbai

Riya screaming

Riya : so jau

Raj : palha apa

Riya : zidh maat karo ..

mai ja ka so jau gi ..

Raj goes to bed and riya

sits beside him and

moves when he is asleep

Riya goes to her room takes the diry and starts writting (plz refer page 6

Those who didn't )

12 sall hua huma ek dusra sa alag hua
dekha jai to zindagi kafi aga nikal gai hai.mai yaha mumbai mai apna bata ka sath aj sa 12 sale palha mai na usa akhri baar dekha tha uska baad ..

(Abhay's wakes up and comes to riya's room and see's riya crying
And goes back to his room
Abhay to himself : fir sa mom ro rhi hai kuch to karna padaga )

Uska baad na baat hui na mulakat.
Magar in 12 salo mai ek din abhi asa nahi tha jab mujha unki yaad nahi aai aaj bhi har raat mai diry lihyi ho dil ka kisi kona mai ya pata hota hai ki is vakt khai na khai subha ho rhi hai
Arjun ka naya parivar ..
Use parivar mai usa koi pyar sa jagai ...

Abhay comes screaming ...

Abhay : muma muma mujha daar lag rha hai plzz aap mare sath so na moving riya from her desk into the bed ...

TO BE CONTINUED ...

PRomo ...


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Edited by MeeraSam - 11 years ago
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#45
Sorry guys unable to PM anyone ...
Will pm tomorrow ...
It's too late ..
My hands , leg , bqck all r paining 🤢
Eyes swallowed up...
Hope u guys understand
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
wow great update
beautifully writteb
update next part jaldi
pm me
Edited by farana786 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
first of all very very sorry...😭
kafi late ho gaya na
exams and slow wifi😡

Now to the promo:
Awesome
Superb
loved it
👏👏👏

No doubt,u have worked hard for that...😃
Well now i m becoming just impatient...
jaldi jaldi story update karo,warna samjhee ya samjhaun😉


Continue soon

Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
awesome.. love it.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
awesome update dear
loved it
ariya n abhay in school
nice one
abhay's sys..khoon bolta he
amazing update
waiting for next part
thankx for pm
continu soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
awesome start
ariya & kids bonding superb lol abhay's SYS😆
feeling so sad for them yaar
everybody is missing each other😭😭😭
aww abhay hates his dad for making his mom cry
why ariya got separated??? that too for 12 years omg
eagerly w8ing 4 ariya & kids meeting
cont soon

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