Ariya - Jeena Sirf Mere Liye- part 5 pg 40 - cmpleted - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
nice update...
excited to know ariya's past.
will be waiting for the next part...
continue soon!!!!!!
thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: aadi720

nice update...

excited to know ariya's past.
will be waiting for the next part...
continue soon!!!!!!
thanks for the pm...

thnk u dear forl iking 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
interesting start
waiting for the flashback
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
awesm n interesting start dear...
do continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
Wow di..
It was awesome and mind blowing start.
Just loved it.
Loved the choree antics.
So etf got a new case.
Hearing riya name arjun was shocked.
Precap looks interesting.
Do continue soon.
And thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: farana786




hey aku sis this update is specially update for u coz u know app ne bahut interzar kiya. .
n thanks for liking it 😊 😊


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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
Plzzz yaar ab nxt update bhi jaldi sey deydo... 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
Superb concept dear..
Ariya loves each other but sepreated due to families fight..
Arjun got married (how could he, poor ri)
ri still single and now got kidnaped
waiting 4 arjun's reaction when he will found that the kidnaped girl is non other that riya mukherjee
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
thanks all for your corporation and motivation .i really appreciate your views on my fiction
thnks to these people
part 2
flash back
arjun: riya kiya huwa yaar itna udaaas kiwu ho
riya: arjun wohh mere parents tumhare aur mere bare mei jaan gaye aur unhone mujhe tumse milne se mana kiya hai
arjun: par kiwu , i mean hamare parents toh acha dost hai nah
riya: patani arjun , mujhe bahut dard lag raha hai
arjun: tum phir math karo
tabhi riya ki ma ka call aya aur usne arjun aur usko ghar par bulaya
they both went to her home . after reaching there they saw arjuns parents were also there
arjun and riya looked at each other.
mr mukherji : aoo tum dono
riya: papa woh ...
arjun to his dad: dad app log yaha
mr M: Haa meine bulaya hai inhe .aaj kuuch baatein saaf karne ke liye
arjun:matlab
mr raute: listen arjun beta , hum dost hai kais saalo se aur tum dono ka yeh rista hame bilkul manzoor nahi
mr M: haa isi liye aaj tum dono ko abhi isi waqt se alag hone ka faisla lena hoga
riya: par papa app jaante hai mei arjun ke bina ...
arjun: wait riya ... ', he turned towards the parents , '' yeh kaisa Mazak hai aur app log itna khilaaf kiwu hai ',
mr R: listen arjun yeh rista nahi ho sakta bas
mr M: haa i agree too
arjun: thik hai agar app nahi maante toh mujhe koi farak nahi parta , bas riya kiya chahati hai i know that
riya: arjun i love u and mei tumse dur nahi rahe sakti
arjun: thik hai we will leave this house
mr M: mr arjun raute apni hadh mei rahi , yeh tera jhopra nahi hai mera ghar hai
mr R: mukherji yeh kiya kahe rahe ho
thus the parents started fighting , aur arjun aur riya waha se chup chaap nikal kar apne dost Sameer rathod ke ghar bhaag gaye
sam: yeh kiya kia tum dono ne
arjun: u don't understand sam ,woh hame alag kardete aur hum yeh risk nahi lena chahate thee ..
sam looked at riya and then arjun and hugged them both .
'' you both know i love you both nah , u guys can stay here as long as you want ''
they stayed at sams house for a week but one day their parents found about them and took separated arjun and riya .
riyas dad took her back and they went to USA while arjun got so angry with his parents that usne appne saare ristee he tor diya aur woh aur sam law college chor ke police training mei chale gaye , phir ETF and there they are now .but in sab mei se riya ka aaj tak koi khabar nahi chala.arjun not for a second forgot her ...
flash back ends
shree: acha sir toh yeh kiya hum usa jayenge case ke liye
rathod: haa ,hum sab waha jayenge aur woh bhi agle hafte
sakshi: par hum investigate kaise karenge aur kaha
Ayesha: kiya hum etf wale bun ke jayenge yah undercover
rathod; under cover jayenge
shree and chotu as friends on vacation , liza on holiday , sakshi and arjun on honey moon and me and Ayesha as married couple on vacation .karan and simran as husband and wife and Anjali as there sister ...
ok all check
all: sir
rathod: shree sab ki id banao aur arjun ...
arjun was still in his flash back
sakshi: arjun ... arjun ...
arjun: huh
sakshi: Sameer bula rahe hai
arjun looked at Sameer and nodded
rathod wanted to tell him that his riya they were talking about but woh yeh risk nahi lena chahata tha aur use arjun ka gussa pata tha hai
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Edited by farana786 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its been a week since they have been to USA but they haven't got a clue as to what happen to riya kapoor ..
all were solving the case except arjun and sakshi as they havnt arrive from india yet . last moment arjun and sakshi went to another undercover case .
rathod was hell angry and fuming now
shree wishpered to Ayesha: kiya baath hai ajj tak rathod sir ko kabhi is tarha nahi dekha
Ayesha looked sadly at him
chotu: zarur koi pyar ka mamla hoga
liza: shh guys agar usne sun liya toh hamari khair nahi
tabhi rathod barked '' shree , call arjun and sakshi at once we need them ... and call riya kapoors friends for questioning again
shree called arjun and told rathod that they will b there in 2 days .
rathod and team went to samars place to get more information on riya .but samar was out on a business meeting so they talked to his wife and went back ..
after 2 days when arjun arrived , rathod gave him the details so they decided to meet samar again.
till now arjun havnt seen the photo of the model and neither have sameer the heart to tell him that it was his riya
they all went to samars house .
rathod: kiya app hame riya ke baare mei kuch important details bataenge
samaira; haa hum bahut ache dost hai , jab paheli baar woh ayi thi usa toabhi se mei, samar aur woh saath hai , ek saath rahete thee aur college complete kiya phir usne modeling shuru kar diya aur maine aur samar ne apna business
arjun: toh woh yaha ki nahi hai
samaira: nahi woh india ki hai , 10 saal pahele yaha akeli ayi thi
arjun looked at aher with some thoughts
sakshi: toh woh achanak kaise gayab ho gayi
samaira: nahi woh gayab achanak se nahi , usse pichle kuch saalo se threatening notes mitle the regarding her boyfriend
rathod shocked: what? boyfriend?
team , samair and samar looked at him shocked and confused
rathod looked at them embarassinly and said : wohh i mean uska boy friend matlab kaun
shree: dekha ayesha kuch toh garbar hai
ayesha: shhh
samar: nahi uska koi boyfriend nahi hai
arjun: matlab , abhi toh app ki wife ne kaha ke ...
samar: woh jisse pyar karti thi yeh uske baare mei baath kar rahi hai , yeh toh haame bhi nahi maloom hai ke woh kaun hai aur kaha hai bas itna jaante hai ke riya ke liye woh saas hai par hum jabse usko jaante hai kabhi uss larke se mile nahi
arjun: matlab:
samar: matlab woh india mei hai kahi
all team except arjun , samar and sumaira looked at rathod who stood frozen
rathod(pov) kiya riya abhi tak arjun ka wait kar rahi hai
arjun: thik hai agar kuch aur pata chale toh hum zarur ayenge ...
''shree tum riya ki kuch latest tasveer inse lelo '
they thanked them and went back to their hotel .in rathods room all were sitting thinking as to where was riya . tabhi shree , pasted the information on the board with riyas fotos . arjun was in his room .
shree: sir yeh kuch samajh nahi aaraha . agar riya apne boyfriend se mili nahi itne din se toh kidnapping , kahi uska boyfrined toh kidnapper nahi hai
ayesha: ho sakta hai shree
sakshi: yeh bhi hosakta hai ke dono kahi bhaag gaye ho samar aur samaira ko bina bataye
rathod: nahi , ria aisa nahi kar sakti
all turned shockely at there chief
chotu: sir .. app kiya riya ko jaante thee
rathod had tears in his eyes
ayesha: kiya app ... uska ...
sakshi: bolo sameer
rathod : ha mei usse bahut achi tarah se jaanta tha . woh hamari jaan thi
all: kiyaa
tabhi arjun entered with his cutting chai saying '' mujhe lagta hai rathod yeh kidnapping nahi koi saadis hai ''
he saw all were frozen at their spot and looking at rathod while rathod heard tears in his eyes
arjun was about to say something when rathod moved from his place and arjun saw the photos on the board
the cup fell from his hand and he stood frozen at his place
chotu: hailaaa
sakshi: omg arjun ...
arjun looked at rathod and he nodded at him , arjun ran to the board and took out the pictures , criny happily hugging rathod
'' sam , sam , yeh hamari ri , ''
rathood hugged himm back and nodded
now team shocked seeing their boss talking about the girl
karan: kiya chakkar hai yeh
simran: lagta hai yeh dono jaante hai isse
sakshi: par arjun itna khush kiwu ho raha hai
shre: haame toh laga sirf ayesha ka patta cut huwa par ab toh lagta hai tera bhi waqt aane wala hai sakshi
arjun: sam , riya ..
sameer: arjun haa yeh hamari riya hai aur usi ka kidnap huwa hai
arjun shouted : kiyaaa
all the team quieten down hearing the barking sound of there boss
sameer: shant ho jao arjun
arjun : kaise shant ho jao mei sam , batao tum .. aur tummne mujhe pahele kiwu nahi bataya ke yeh hamari riya hai
rathod: mei batana chahata tha aur foto aur file tujhe diya par tum ne dekha he nahi
arjun: par tunne toh riya kapoor kaha tha nah , mukherji nah
shree: ha sir woh samar aur sumaira ke se name use kar rahi hai riya
they looked at him mand turned back to each other again
arjun smiled: finally meri riya mil gayi ab mei usse dhund kar he rahunga
rathod: haa arjun
sakshi: arjun , sameer kiya app dono riya ko jaante thee
ayesha: kaise
karan: shera kuch toh bol
rathod: wohh haa hum usse pahele se jaante the , woh hamri bachpan ki dost thi aur aur uska woh boyfriend aur koi nahi arjun he hai
thuddd , gasps , shouts
whaattt
all shocked and stunned with this relevation
arjun sir riya ke boyfriend
sakshi felt like fainting while ayesha was happy ..
shree and chotu were shocked with liza , simran and karan
tabhi rathod ki phone ki ghanti baaji ... tringgg tringgg...''
rathod handfree call and answered '' hello ''
voice: sammy ... jun ...
sameer and arju looked at each other shocked ...
precap :
roshnis entry
Edited by farana786 - 11 years ago

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