2-shot: Arjun's Bachelor Party *last part-pg11* 14.03.2014 *completed* - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Last part:

Soon,they girls' get ready in their coolest and hottest avatar and leave for Hard Rock Cafe,while the boys' were waiting for Shree's surprise to come..Arjun was least interested in all this,but,he will have to put up an act infront of them.He saw the faces of Shree,Sameer and Chotu,who had a big smile plastered on their face.He shook his head in negative and prayed for these three.

''Yeh teeno aaj marne wale hai apni apni biwiyo ke haatho se...'' He thought and smirked..

''Waise,Sam... Yeh Shree ka surprise kahaan hai? Abhi tak aayi nahi hai?'' Arjun asked Sameer.

Shree and Chotu were shocked,as well as Sameer...

''Aise kya dekh rahe ho??? Tune jo abhi thori der pehle bola,uske baare mein maine socha and you were right.Chal.. Aaj aazadi ki khushiyaan manate hai... Chal... Arey woh dekh agayi Shree ka surprise aur uske saath aur chaaro pariyaan...'' Arjun said and pretended to ogle at them...

Shree,Sameer and Chotu's face brightened up,seeing the lady in black top with pathani salwar,while,three out of four women were glaring at their husbands through their veils.

''Main tainu nahi chadangi,Sameer Rathore... Ab toh yoh karnama thare Maa Bapusa ke samne main laungi... Tu rukh...'' fumed Aayesha.

''Iss Specky ki toh main haddi torh ke skeleton banake rakhdungi.. Hydrochloric acid na dalke chemical reaction kardungi..'' fumed Liza under her veil...

''Hey Deva... Mala utha lo... Inhone toh aaj hadh hi kardi.. Sasubai ko batana hi parega...'' Sakshi fumed under her veil..

''Mujhe mere Arjun pe bohut bharosa..Woh aisa kuch bhi nahi karenge jisse mujhe dukh pohuchegi...Thanks for the tip,Arjun...'' she moved her veil a bit and blinked at Arjun,to which,he returned a flying kiss to her.. She blushed.

BG Music:

Surprise girl: ''Aarey jhumar bhi main bhool gayi,
janeja tere liye..''

Aayesha: ''Aarey jhumka bhi main bhul gayi,
Janeja tere liye..''

Sakshi: ''Aarey main toh sabkuch bhul gayi,
janeja tere liye..''

Liza: ''Tere liye,tere liye,tere liye...''

Shree,Sameer and Chotu: ''Toh phir kya hua?''

Silence prevailed in the cafe...

Slowly,all the girls' moved their veils' and revealed themselves infront of the boys.Except Arjun,Shree,Sameer and Chotu were hell shocked to see Aayesha,Sakshi,Liza and Riya there..The trio gulped saliva down their throat.For a moment,they forgot to blink their eyes..

Arjun(pretending to be scared seein the girls): Arey...yeh chaaro ko kaise pata chala ki aaj hum yahaan aayenge? Zarur Chotu ne bola hoga? Chotu...(looks at Chotu and feigns an angry look).

Chotu(in a shaky yet scary tone): Aai Shapath,Arjun sir.. Maine kuch nahi kiya... Maine kisko nahi bola...

Shree(in an irritated tone): Zarur tune hi bola hoga... Koi bhi baat tere pet mein nahi reha hai... Pura ka pura plan flop hogaya.. Gayi bhens pani mein...

Sameer(stuttering seeing Aayesha): Aa...aa...ssshhhuu... Tt...ttuuu...mm... yyy...aaahhhan...

Aayesha(coming towards him,shooting glares): Haan main yahaan... Ab toh main aapko nahi chhorne wali... Mere hote huye,aap kisi aur paraye larki pe dorey dall rahe ho... Maa Bapusa ko yo baat bataungi se... Manne mhare gharwale ne dhokha diyo se... Yo Punjaban sikhni thare ko nahi chhoregi... Sameeerrr...

She marches towards him and gives punches(light wala)to him...Everybody were seeing this...She quickly grabbed his hand and took him away to their home.Same with Liza and Sakshi... Karan,Arjun's cousin comes there and asks Arjun,

''Ab yeh bala ki khubsurat kaun hai? Zara humari taraf toh nazar daliye...''

Karan moves towards the surprise girl and is shockedafter moving her veil,to see his wife,Simran there... She fists her hands and starts to beat him up.Both of them ran around the whole cafe and were fighting like Tom and Jerry...Riya and Arjun laughed seeing all the antics...Arjun went towards Riya and pulled her for a warm hug... Riya smiled and patted his back,softly...

''I know,Arjun,ki,aapko yeh sab katay pasand nahi hai.. That's why,aapko yahaan bhejna nahi chahti thi,par,Sameer bhai,Shree aur Chotu bohut zidd kar rahe thhe,isiliye aapko jana parha... Mujhe aap par aur aapke pyaar par pura bharosa ki mujhe aap kabhi bhi niraash nahi karenge... Chaliye,hum thora ghumke aate hai..Chowpati chalein? Aapka mood bhi accha hojayega...''

Arjun happily nodded and thanked Bappa for giving him such an understanding partner like Riya,whom he is going to get married in just a few more hours...

''Sorry Bappa for destroying the party..Mera koi bura intentions nahi thha Bhai,Shree aur Chotu ko hurt karneka... I am sorry,Bappa...''

Riya asked apologies from Bappa in her mind and soon,she and Arjun went for a drive,while,Sameer,Shree and Chotu were on the verge from getting exiled from their rooms...

The End...

P.S: Sorry for not giving it a nice ending.Thought of giving some different ending..Hope you all like it.
Edited by zebbie0504 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
Mind blasting update dr...!!!!!
Girls MV about boys was superb...!!!!!
OMG Arjun is the one who gave her tip... oh so that's why mahashey seemed least interested in the party...!!!!!
Poor Sam... sab key samney biwi key haathoon pit gaya...😉😆
Karan n Simran part was way too cute n fuuny...!!!!!!
Ariya moments were beautiful... awww she understands him so well n he also didn't let her down by keeping her trust on him...!!!!!!
Wonderful ending...😳
Edited by Aks13 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: Aks13

Unres it fast Zeb...😊


karti hu re. Wait.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE...kaha hai update???????????
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sukanya001

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE...kaha hai update???????????

dinner ke baad... abhi busy hu.. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Waiting...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: zebbie0504


dinner ke baad... abhi busy hu.. 😊


ok 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Last part updated on pg11.. Do comment and like...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing
Poor Sameer, shree, chotu, karan
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb starting. Love it. Interesting precap. Thanks for pm. Continue soon.

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