T2 FF :Kaisi Teri Khudgarzi...Discont note on page 134 - Page 45

Originally posted by: IshitaRocks015

fantabulous chapter...
it was very nicely written...
the emotions...desire..longings... very nicely depicted..
ariya seem to be close to each other... yet so far from each other...
that song...man...wen.it released... i was addicted to it... i love it so much...
chai peena scene was cute...muh jala lia...
hmm...story turning serious...
update soon...
4 now...update BOL...pppiiillliiijjj

Originally posted by: 9909187438

Please please please di ariya ko jaldi milva do.

Originally posted by: khemanisarita

wow
awesome update
love it
cont soon

Originally posted by: chand91

soo heart touching

awsm

lvd it

plz cnt soon

Originally posted by: pango

awesome update

loved it

thanx for pm

continue soon

Originally posted by: unishaz

superb yar.. Loved it.. Thanks for pm..

Originally posted by: skrafty

Awesome update

loved it

loved ariya convo

Their feelings were written nicely

Loved the banner

Waiting for the next part

continue soon

Originally posted by: samara_shiba

Awesome update :-)
Ariya scenes are nice,Both want to be with each other but cannot be as both still have ego some where deep down
ria is going away from arjuns house and his life ;-(
Waiting for arjun 2 understand riya n bring her back in his life
plz update soon...

Originally posted by: farana786

lovely update yar
emotional tha thou riya tried some funny moments
feel sad for ariya.eh kieu dil khol ke baath nahi krte

thnks for pm
update soon
aur lambaaa wala

Originally posted by: TINASINGHPS

i dun know on what 2 comment whether on the beutiful , touchy banner.or for the awesome update or the accompanying music behind in the bg...

all these 2gether was successful inmaking my eyes moist...

the song is totally appropriate at both of their situation...yet i can fell it more close to arjun..as if his mind is singing it for his heart!

frankly i m listening this song for the first time..n now its in my like list..thanks 2 u for placing it in the right situation which made me understand its meaning deeper...i listened it while reading ur update for almost 7 times!

both r longing for the solace...but still for each other betterment r apating..LOVE! IS THIS THE INTENSITY OF LOVE!?

cont soon

thk for pm

Originally posted by: kunchu

Superb banner

loved it

the part was simple yet smooth

they are parting the ways

infact its good, so that they dont see each others pain

continue soon

Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll

Wow dear...
The baneer was very heart touching...
And the update was awesome and mind blowing.
Feeling bad for ariya.
Both loved each other so much but they didn't tell eachother because of there stupid ego..
Loved ariya funny moments..
Ariya are awkward with each other.
You wrote very beautifully...
So riya was leaving arjun house.
Arjun want to stop her but couldnt...
Loved arjun mv about sam riya bonding.
Hope ariya realized there love and be together.
Do continue soo..
And thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: angelarya

Beautifully written...
👏👏👏
Arjun-Riya over tv remote..😆
but now everything has changed,they aren't the same
Arjun and his cutting chai...they have a special bond😆
Riya ko chai peeta dekh kr apne lips or tongue ko jala dala😆

ye true they have a special bond...😊😊

Well both Arjun and Riya feel guilty for not being able to save their relationship
but they do blame each other also for the same

Arjun does care for Riya now also...
it was seen many times
in this update also
preparing breakfast for her
helping her to carry the luggage
and all
yes any gentleman would do this for a lady and Arjun is a perfect
but still it shows his concern
he was guilty that he had hurt her by bringing her in the house

the part where Riya told Arjun about Sam's marriage...
I thought that the old Riya and Arjun returned back
but unfortunately they had only created the distance between them

really you expected? sorry to disappoint..its still along way dear..🥱🥱
Hope Saakshi and Vishal don't suffer for Ariya's deeds.
Sam is very intelligent,a very good friend...
In this story I m always confused who is wrong or who is right...
So no opinion regarding anyone
but ya I loved Vishal's,Sam's and Aayesha's characters...true friendship shown by them

The banner is beautiful
And how do u get the music on the page?
I was so surprised from where the music started when I opened the page
Well done
Good job
Unfortunately I didn't listen the song

tutorials yaha nehi...pm me if you wanna know...didnt listen??why?? didnt like?😕

Continue soon
Thanks for the pm