Well, I am new here so I will talk about Characters first:
Arjun: A husband, who's only expectation was to be loved by her wife instead What he got? Betrayal.That too by the person he trusted the most.
He not just lost his wife but also his unborn child. He was shattered & smashed. But luckily he got second chance in form of Sakshi, He somehow made an relationship with her, It gave him peace & feeling of being loved. But then riya got back. And now he is confused, he has to choose between the girl he loves & the girl who loves him.
Poor guy, He is at the Lost-lost situation. Even if he choose one, He will lose his one part. One way or another He will feel guilty. I am waiting to know how you will write that.
Riya: Though I didn't read all the parts But I know one thing. She did love Arjun. Full stop.
She betrayed him, she aborted his child for what-ever reason But she never stopped loving him. She chose her career over her husband, I don't know if I should consider it as sin or just a mistake. But whatever she did was surely not right. And now she want to be with her husband, I wonder if she even deserves him. As a proverb says: "First deserve then desire".
Sakshi: She accepted Arjun with his past, & also accepted his love for Riya. She is selfless lover. She just expect some love from Arjun in their yet undefined relationship. I doubt that she will ever get it. Poor girl, She doesn't know she is crying for the moon.
you have defined every Character brilliantly. They are in complicated situating, Where everyone is at Lost-lost situation either way. Even if Arjun choose anyone, problem will not be solve. If we say that Riya doesn't deserve Arjun then Arjun doesn't deserve Sakshi either. So I am not expecting any result by Who-deserves-who. They all are human, and two of them did mistakes that led these three to this terrible situation.
All the character's emotions are very well written, though I didn't read every update but I can say it because of the comments😆
PS. I don't care, Whom Arjun choose, And I will never ask you for any couple in particular. Coz I trust you & your writing skills.😊
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Coming to the update:
Riya's state was written very well. She still had hopes but poor girl just got disapointment.
But I personally sympathize more with Sakshi, She finally know the truth but the distrubing part was that she didn't came to know about it by Arjun. She must be feeling betrayed. & she has every right to feel like that.
I hated Arjun in today's update. He must have taken any step to prevent this situation. I know he is confused but he can not keep on playing with Riya's & sakshi's emotions.
If he stopped Riya from gng away then he should at least have informed Sakshi about it.
Ayesha-Rathod scene was really cute & funny. it was mood lightener part in otherwise Dukhi update.Loved it😆
PS. I just realize my comment is bigger than my updates😆
Edited by laila1994 - 11 years ago
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