SS:Mended Relations. ch5: pg34 26.11.2014 *complete*

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Awwsssmmm start
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Suryatapa sengupta

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Nice concept. Superb teaser. Pls continue soon. If possible then pm me.

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Snehajain

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#23

Awesome concept & teaser...

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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#24

kya solid protolg or tesr hai

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aleena

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

ariya married supper
like the concept
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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

awsome concept

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Anika_VR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Meet Padmini Arjun Rawte...

ch1.

A lady picks up her fone and dials a number.She waits for the person on the other side to answer her call.. She smiles.

On the other side,in his office,he was checking some case file when his concentration was broken by the shrill ringtone of his phone.The caller id brought a big wide smile on his face.He immediately answered the call..

''Hello,Riyu..''

''Hi,Patidev... Kaise hai aap? Lunch toh kiya na,aapne? Chai pi apne?''

''Main toh accha hu.Din accha guzar raha thha,par,ab aur accha guzrega..(Riya blushes on the other side after hearing this)... Lunch bhi karlia aur Chai bhi pi hai... Mujhe abhi yaad aaya ki aaj toh Padmini ki vaccination hai..Tum yahaan aajana,hum teeno saath niklenge,thik hai?''

''Jee... Wahi thik hoga... Chaliye,main phone rakhti hu..Padmini ko khana khilake sulaungi aur khud thora rest karungi...Umm.. Chaliye,Bye.. Love you..''

''Love you,too.. Take care...''

As they disconnected the call,they went to their own work.After an hour of bedrest,Riya got Padmini dressed up and herself got dressed up and left the house for the vaccination centre with Padmini in her lap. After 20 minutes,she reached Arjun's office.She picked up Arjun and went away to the Vaccination centre for Padmini's vaccination.

In the evening.

A couple knocks the door of Rawte Mansion.An old lady,of 60 years old opens the door.She lets the couple come inside and makes them sit in the big hallroom.

''Aap log?? Maine aapko pehchana nahi??''

''Woh.. Main..''

The man was stopped by his wife and she took over.

''Hum Mrs.Riya Rawte ke friends hai.. Aap unhe bula dengi...''

''Oh accha... Maaf karna beta,par,woh toh ghar pe nahi hai. Paddo,mera matlab,humari Padmini guriya ko vaccination centre leke gayi hai.Thori der mein aajayegi.. Aap log baitho,man aapdono keliye chai-naashta leke aati hu..''

''Hmm..''

The couple was none other than DCP Sameer Rathore and his wife,Meera Rathore.Sameer and Meera looked at the photos of Riya with her husband,Arjun and with their daughter,Padmini...

''Meera,humari bhanji Padmini.. Dekho usse.. Arjun aur Riya ka combination hai... 6 saal hogaye uss baat ko.. Meri ek galti ki wajah se meri behen ne mujhe itni sazaa de di aur maine bhi usse ghar se nikal diya.. I hope,woh mujhe maaf karde..''

''Nahi... Aisa kabhi nahi hoga,DCP Sameer Rathore..Hargiz nahi..''

Sameer and Meera turned around to see Riya,glaring with murderous eyes at them,with Padmini sleeping in her lap.Daijaan comes and takes away Padmini to her room to make her sleep,whereas,Riya,dropped Arjun to his office,on the way to home.

''Kaunse haq se aap yahaan aaye hai? Aap hai kaun? Main toh aapko nahi pehchanti?'' Riya said,gritting her teeth..

''Par,Ri..'' a helpless Sameer said.

''Bas... Mar chuki hai woh Ri 6 saal pehle,jisse aapne aapki sauteli behen ki galtiyo keliye ghar se bahar aur aapsab logo ke zindagi se bahar nikal diya... Woh toh ussi din mar gayi thhi... Mare huye log kabhi zinda nahi hote... Main toh aap sab keliye marchuki hu... Ghar jaake uske liye shok manaiye.. Mare huye insaan kabhi laut ke nahi aate hai... Chale jaiye yahaan se... Yahaan koi Riya Rathore nahi rehti hai.. Yeh DCP Arjun Suryakant Rawte ka ghar hai aur mera,yani,Mrs.Riya Arjun Suryakant Rawte ka ghar hai.. Chale jao yahaan se...'' Riya said to the couple,who were standing opposite her,in an angry tone.

''Par,Riya..'' Meera tried to talk.

''Mrs.Meera Rathore,aap aapke pati ko yahaan se le jaiye,warna,majburan mujhe aur tarikey apnane parenge...''

Suddenly,a servant comes and says,

''Zaubaisahib,Padmini baby ro rahi hai...''

Riya wipes her tears and immediately goes upstairs to look at Padmini... As she enters the room,the sight infront of her wrenched her heart.She immediately picked her up in her arms and hugged her tightly and swayed her Padmini.. She had slight fever due to the vaccination,which will get cured in 2-3 days' time.

Sameer looked dejected and slumped on the sofa behind him..

''Sab meri galti thi,meri galti... Na toh main usdin yeh faisla na leta aur abh yeh sab na hota... Sakshi ki galti ki saza maine Riya ko de di... Main bohut bura hu.. Tumse tumhari dost bhi cheen li,Meera... Main Riya ke bhai kehlwaane ki layak nahi hu... Maafi ke layak bhi nahi...''

Meera tried to console him,when,out of curiosity,she asked,

''Yeh Padmini kaun hai?''

Servant replied,

''Arjun dadasahib aur Riya Vahinisahib ki 1 1/2 saal ki beti hai..''

They were shocked yet happy,as well,as they got to see Riya's daughter after 7 1/2 years later..

Precap: Teaser for ch2.

Edited by zebbie0504 - 11 years ago

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abhya/akanksha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Fantastic update dr...!!!!!

Ariya convo was lovely...!!!!! They seemed quite happy with each other...!!!!!

Wow they didn't told their real identity to the servent n introduced themselves as her friends...!!!!!

Awww Sameera tried to apologized for his mistake but she didn't gave him the chance to do so...!!!!! Her each word to him showed her anger n pain...!!!!!!

Rathod's MV about Padmini was nice whn he saw their family pic...!!!!! But why thy both got surprised to know about Padmini from her servent...!!!!!

Sam realized that he had done a grave mistake n want to repent it but Riya didn't budge went to her daughter...!!!!!!

Thanks for pm dr...!!!! Continue soon...!!!!!

Edited by Aks13 - 11 years ago

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Mdmadona

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

wow awesome prologue & teaser
cont sooon

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Anika_VR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Updated ch1 on pg6..
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