~Hum Tere Bin Aab Rahe Nahi Sakte~ARIYA SS(Updated part8)on pg33 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
Wow awesome update dear...
Poor riya...arjun really hurt her...so much...


Shree to kamal hai...awesome

Update soon dear...and add me in ur pm list...dont forget to pm me..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Beautiful n painful...
I can feel each incidents..
All are like realities..very close truth...
Saree pehnti hai...gaana gaati hai...
Kitni pyaari hai...aur pyaar bhi karti hai..
Per pata nhi q pyaar milta nhi hai..
Kissi ke pyaar se kissi ki zindagi itni bhari hoti hai ke pyaar ke liye jagah nhi bachti..
Aur bichari ke samne bas andhera hai...
But cant say that Arjun is wrong...
Its tough for him too...
Felt so so bad to know that Arjun has emptied half bottle of whiskey. .
This man is breaking. .
Hope Arjun will find her...
Am sure..he will soon...
Waiting for Arjun's next move...
Please bind them together soon...
Awesome update..
Magical writing...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Superb
Poor shree
Finally riya confessed hope arjun accept it
Thanks for pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Uss khadus se bahut gussa hun..
A girl is genuinely confessing that she loves him..
Aur khadus keh rha ke yeh baat tum kisi se bhi keh sakti ho...
Hate this guy...
Kabhi nhi baat karni chahiye iss pagal se...
Oye tu jaldi update karegi???
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: Amritamalhotra

Uss khadus se bahut gussa hun..
A girl is genuinely confessing that she loves him..
Aur khadus keh rha ke yeh baat tum kisi se bhi keh sakti ho...
Hate this guy...
Kabhi nhi baat karni chahiye iss pagal se...
Oye tu jaldi update karegi???


nahi soch rahi hu k nxt year updt karungi 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Great cs!
And the way u have represented it is just amazing!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
oh tht means arjun loves ri ..but due 2 his fear he said tht ...n yeh shree bhi na har baar kuch ult ahi karta hai..cont soon n pm me when u upst
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
wow...
awesome start dear..
just loved it.
do continue soon.
and thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter B (part 1) https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/3936586/hum-tere-bin-aab-rahe-nahi-sakte-ariya-ss-updated-part8-on-pg33?pn=4

Chapter C

After taking some times Arjun stood up and wait for a while, he tried to draw the road map in his mind. He set up his mind and started walking towards. "I have to get her back.. I have to.."

Other side Riya was walking slowly in rain, she lose her all strength. Her tears were mixing with raindrops.(in her mind) "I really love you Arjun. Tumhare life se to tum mujhe judne nahi doge. Tumhe lagta hai tumhare sath judke meri life badbaad ho jaegi, but u don't know.. tumse juda hoke main jee nahi paungi. My life is meaningless without u..Shayad mere jane k baad tum mere pyaar ko samajh paoge."

Riya reached to an abandoned bridge end. She closed her eyes, "kash tumhe ankhri baar dekh pati... Good bye Arjun..."

Suddenly someone shouted by her name, "RIYA..."

Riya was surprised; she thought that its her mistake... She ignored it. Again that voice called her, "Stop Riya." Now she stopped and really surprised. "Arjun"

Arjun was there, at last he found her. He ran towards her. Arjun hold her shoulders and shook her, "kya karne ja rahe the tum? Main tumse kuch puch raha hu Riya."

Riya got back her sense, "Tum? Kyun aaye ho yahan.. Leave me alone."

Arjun: pagal mat bano.. vapas chalo.

Riya: nahi sir. Vapas jane k liye koi wajah hi nahi bacha.. bas ek baat, main kisiki bhi zindegi kharab nahi karna chahti.. kisi aur se kahe bhi nahi sakti k main unse pyar karti hu.. bas aap khush rahena.. (after some silence) Mujhe jaane dijiye sir.

Riya was ready to step ahead. But she felt a pull, Arjun was holding her hand, "thik hai, jaha bhi jana chahte ho jao, but mujhe bhi sath leke chalo. I will not let u go alone."

Riya was blank; she couldn't understand what to say. She looked at him. (with a pale smile) "main jaha jana chahti hu, vaha aap nahi aa sakte. Sorry sir, mujhe aakela hi jana padega."

Suddenly Arjun pulled her towards him and held her waist; "kahana ekbaar, aaj aur abhise tum kahi bhi akeli nahi jaogi."

Riya was holding her breath. "main mazak k mood me nahi hu sir. Leave me."

Arjun(hold her more tightly): mujhe aaj tak kabhi bhi joke kahete hue suna? Am sorry Riya.. sach sunna chahti ho? mujhe darr lagta hai pyar se, pyar karne valo ko khone ka darr.. my past still haunts me. Roshni ko to main pahele hi kho chukka hu, tum bhi mujhe chhodke aise chali jaogi?"

Riya was surprised, she never met this Arjun. He was totally different, so calm, and lonely. She touched his face, "kabhi nahi jaungi.."

Arjun touched her face back, "aur kabhi jaane ki koshish bhi ki na... to... Samjhe ya Samjhau??"

Riya smiled and said, "abhi bhi dhamki de rahe ho? ekbar pyar se bolke to dekho.."

Arjun saw that red marks on her shoulder, he touched that marks. But riya quickly covered it.

Arjun: ye kaise??

Riya: kuch nahi aise hi.. jaane do

Arjun: kya aise hi, ye vo... (he couldn't complete his sentence, he sneezed)

Riya: God bless u.. lag gayi na thand.. chalo ghar chalo.

Arjun: itni raatko cab milna muskil hai, we have to walk.

Riya(by holding his hand): tum sath ho na, I can walk over n over.. I have no problem

They started walking silently. But this silence speaks so loud.

(After almost 2hours)Riya removed her high heels and started walking bare foot.

Arjun: paier dard kar rahe? We r almost reached.

Riya: no am fine.

Suddenly Arjun lifted her up in his arms. Riya: aree aree kya kar rahe ho?

Arjun: chup chap chalo...

Riya hold around his neck and lean her head on his shoulder. Arjun entered in his house and laid her on a couch. He was about to go, but Riya stopped him by holding his hand, Arjun understood that and sat beside her. Riya touched his face and stared in his eyes. Slowly Arjun came down and placed his lips on her lips. After getting depart Arjun saw tears in her eyes. He sucked it, "don't cry Riya. I will not let u cry anymore. Am sorry. I am really sorry." Riya hugged him. Suddenly Arjun remembered about that marks on her shoulder. He got up and removed her pallu from her shoulder. Riya also couldn't stop him. "ye marks uss party me mere hatho se aye hai na?"

Riya: Kuch nahi hua.. thik hu main. Abhi koi bhi dard mujhe mehsus nahi ho raha hai

Arjun: chup chap baitho..ek bhi word mat bolna

He went in the room, and came back with the first-aid box. At first he kissed on her shoulder and applied medicine on them.

Riya held her breath,slowly she said, "aur kuch mat karo Arjun, iss khushi ko kahi meri hi nazar na lag jaye."

Arjun placed his finger on her lips. "aaj se tumhari har khushi ki zimmedari meri."

Riya: okk aab jao change karlo. Nahi to phirse cheekh ayegi

Arjun: hmm ja rahi hu, tum bhi change karlo.

Riya: mere pas xtra kapde to hai nahi. Bag to car me tha..

Arjun: to kya hua? Ek raat k liye mere kapde pahenlo.

Riya: nahi main iss me hi thik hu.

Arjun: aur tumhe thand lag gayi to? Zyada bolo mat, main kapde deta hu

Riya: Okk sir..

Arjun went to his room and bring a t-shirt and trouser for her.

Riya: isme to mein pakka joker lagungi.

Arjun: yaha koi nahi dekhne vala hai tumhe except me.. aab jao jaldi se change karlo. Am waiting

After 10-15mins Riya came out from wash room. Arjun looked at her, "u r not looking like joker." Riya: am feeling like Arjun part2

Arjun smiled at her

Riya: go n change... jaldi jao

Arjun went quickly. In the mean time Riya brought out milk from freezer, and make it hot. She also found chocolate syrup and made chocolate milk shake. Arjun came out from wash room and found Riya in kitchen. "kya kar rahi ho?"

Riya: mujhe bhukh lagi hai. Main tumhare tarah bhuka marna nahi chati. So preparing chocolate milk shake.

She turned to him and showed him the tray with two glasses of milk shake (with her as usual smiling face) Arjun also smiled at her (maybe it's the first time Riya saw Arjun is smiling) Riya said him, "tum haste hue kafi cute lagte ho. keep smiling."

Arjun: Bahar aao.. m feeling so hungry

Riya(was coming outside): aree tumhe bhuk bhi lagti hai?

Arjun: Yes ma'am lagta hai

Arjun picked up a glass, "balcony pe chale?" Riya also agreed with her. Its Arjun's favorite place. Whenever he stays in house, he spends his time here. They came n sat beside on a swing. It was little cold outside. Riya rubbed her palms together. "Thand lag rahi hai?"

Riya: nahi thik hu.

Arjun held her palm, "thik ho? hath bilkul thand hai. Wait main kuch lata hu."
Riya stopped him by holding his hand, "mat jao na pls. Main thik hu." Arjun again sit. Riya placed her head on his shoulder.

Arjun: Recording kaisa raha?

Riya didn't say a word. Arjun looked at her and asked again, "kaisa tha recording? Chup kyun ho?"

Riya: Nahi kiya

Arjun: Kya? Tum studio me gayi thi na? Phir recording kyun nahi ki?

Riya: mujhse kuch bhi gaya nahi gaya

Arjun placed his palm on her cheek, "dekho meri taraf.."

Riya looked at him. "party me jo kuch bhi hua, sab meri galati hai. Uske liye tumne recording chhodke chali gayi?"

Riya: tum nahi samjhoge

Arjun: sab samajhta hu main

Riya turned her face in opposite direction and said in low voice, "Kuch bhi nahi samajhte ho tum. Agar samjhte na to nahi puchte k main kyun recording chhodke chali gayi. Tumhe to sirf mera bahar ka chot dikhai diya, dil pe jo chot lagi hai na, uske gaherai k bade me shayad mujhe bhi nahi pata."

Arjun realized her pain; he came close to her and hugged her from behind. "Am sorry Riya. I know I hurt u, shayad uske liye tum mujhe kabhi maaf bhi nahi karoge. Main maafi k layak bhi nahi hu.pahele hi din se aaj tak maine tumhe bohot ulta-sidha sunaya, tumhare ability par shaq kiya,jab bhi tum mere kareeb aana chaha tumhe utna hi dur kar diya. Aur aaj sabke samne jo kuch kiya maine,uske liye mujhe punishment to milni hi chahiye. Bolo kya karna hoga?"

Riya lose his hand and turned back to him. Slowly she hugged him and said, "promise karo phir mujhe tumse alag nahi karoge. Mujhe chhodke kahi nahi jaoge. Promise me.."

Arjun hugged her back more tightly, "promise, kabhi nahi jaunga tumhe chhodke."

They stay in this position for a long time. Suddenly Riya remembered about that milk shake. She said, "Arjun milk shake k glass abhi bhi vaise hi pade hai, aab pi lena chahiye."

Arjun: hmm.. raat bhi kafi ho gayi hai

They departed; Riya picked her glass and hold it to Arjun. He took a sip from it and did the same process with Riya. After that they finished their glasses

It was almost 3am. Arjun: kal to office hai na, chalo so jate hai.

Riya: mujhe neend nahi aarahi

Arjun: ok par andar to chlao.nahi to thand lag jaegi

Riya stood up, suddenly Arjun lifted her in his arms, and Riya was again surprised with his act. He entered in his bedroom and laid her on his bed, and covered her with a blanket. He sat beside her head and caresses her hair "so jao. Main yahi par hu." Riya was holding her hand, "tum bhi so jao na." Arjun kissed her forehead, "pahele tum so jao. Main yahi so jaunga."

Riya: ok

Riya fall asleep with his caring pat, Arjun also leaned back on the bed beside Riya.

May be after a long time Arjun is sleeping peacefully on his bed.


to be continued...

Edited by Sukanya001 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
loved it dear awesome
Beautiful update
loved how riya made arjun realized her pain😊
N arjun took care of her
Thanks for teh Pm
Continue soon 😊

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