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kunchu

@kunchu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Chotu sa... but interesting update

he is missing her for 1 year and now lets see how he is going to keep it up

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Atisha Khan

@Shamsad1607

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

First, sorry for being so late to comment on this thread.

Actually I was busy and read this story from the start.

this is an wonderful writing on Arjun-Roshni's emotions, love and friendship. & you've done it beautifully.

At the beginning you started with the stormy environment and Roshni's turmoil with her married life. her thoughts was beautifully written. then came up Arjun and her mutual friendship, how she can read that man like an open book. In spite of knowing Arjun loves someone else she tried to hold onto her marriage and finally she gave up thinking she was hurting Arjun by separating him from his love. May be she also thought Arjun just doing his duty towards her as a husband, not as the man who loves her.

Arjun made a choice at the first day his love proposal misfired, instead of telling Rosh the truth, he just gave her an affirmation to her love. He chose her friendship over his love. Or may be he chose his first love over his attraction?? You know the best, I guess!! but this guy didn't hide anything from Rosh, he even tried to get rid of Ashmara's memories...but in this process, he made his wife feel insecure...when he realized that and tried to convince her, it again gave her some wrong signal & the result is, Rosh made her mind up and left him.

the whole background story gave us our rough, reckless guy. Now he gonna bring his wife back...(he will na??) but my question is, Is it gonna easy for him? Will that lady gonna understand him this time? I'll wait for my answers.

Do continue...& thanks for PM.

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Delusional Minx

@Delusional_Minx

Stunner

+ 36

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

awesome update dear

loved it

dream was scary

waiting for roshni to come back

continu soon

thankx for pm

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rimi

@rimi_invisible

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

chotu update...but nice one...(why you mislead me 😡😡😡😡😡,sazaa milegi..😉😉)

so its a year after roshni left...and arjun is hallucinating ashmara in roshni's place...🤢🤢

he is troubled...his state of mind could be understood...and you potrayed well..

sam found roshni...but will arjun be able to get her back??

nd what about ashmara??where is she??what happened a year back with the three??

wanna know...

cotinue soon...thanks for pm

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laila

@laila1994

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

raja_ki_rani, Aisha1998, Beboluvshaleen, rinku95, Thank you for liking it. But I guess a comment won't hurt either😊

Originally posted by: miss_precious
Ur right... It was a short update!
If I remember correctly one year ago was not the first time he made love to her right? Or have u changed the storyline that the first time they made love to each other... Out of guilt she left him

Thanks for the pm and please update soon x

No. That was not the first time, & That has nothing to do Roshni leaving Arjun.

Originally posted by: _lovergirl101_
Loved it! Great storyline so far! 👏
Does arjun realise he loves Roshni??
Thanks for the pm...
Please continue soon! 😊

P.S: it's so funny how both our first ffs are completely the opposite of each other!! 😉

Thank you for reading it.

You have to wait & read to know about it😉

Yup. I noticed😆

Originally posted by: Devangana
Read all the parts in one go. Loved it Continue soon. Beautifully written

Thank you & welcome here😊

Originally posted by: jayprabu
Nice update. You have taken a year leap. You have nicely expressed state of Arjun after Roshini left. Eager to res d next update. Thanks for the pm and continue soon.

Yes, I have taken a leaf. Though it was not planned before but I am changing storyline a bit.

Thankyou. I am glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: naina25
great...story😊
con soon😊

Thank you & welcome here.

Originally posted by: kunchu
Chotu sa... but interesting update
he is missing her for 1 year and now lets see how he is going to keep it up

Thankyou di (Hope I can call you that) for liking it.

Wait & Read to know😊

Originally posted by: Shamsad1607
First, sorry for being so late to comment on this thread.
Actually I was busy and read this story from the start.
this is an wonderful writing on Arjun-Roshni's emotions, love and friendship. & you've done it beautifully.
At the beginning you started with the stormy environment and Roshni's turmoil with her married life. her thoughts was beautifully written. then came up Arjun and her mutual friendship, how she can read that man like an open book. In spite of knowing Arjun loves someone else she tried to hold onto her marriage and finally she gave up thinking she was hurting Arjun by separating him from his love. May be she also thought Arjun just doing his duty towards her as a husband, not as the man who loves her.
Arjun made a choice at the first day his love proposal misfired, instead of telling Rosh the truth, he just gave her an affirmation to her love. He chose her friendship over his love. Or may be he chose his first love over his attraction?? You know the best, I guess!! but this guy didn't hide anything from Rosh, he even tried to get rid of Ashmara's memories...but in this process, he made his wife feel insecure...when he realized that and tried to convince her, it again gave her some wrong signal & the result is, Rosh made her mind up and left him.

the whole background story gave us our rough, reckless guy. Now he gonna bring his wife back...(he will na??) but my question is, Is it gonna easy for him? Will that lady gonna understand him this time? I'll wait for my answers.

Do continue...& thanks for PM.

Wow. It's like I am reading a summary of my own story.

Felling good actually. Thank you for such a big comment. Means alot.

@Bold, Nope, sorry, but it is not true/fact. What he had for Roshni was just friendship wala Love, nothing else.

I will make sure he gets his wife back, but not so easily😆

Originally posted by: Godly_Affection
awesome update dear
loved it
dream was scary
waiting for roshni to come back
continu soon
thankx for pm

Thank you.

I know😆

Roshni will take her time to come back.

Originally posted by: rimi_invisible
chotu update...but nice one...(why you mislead me😡😡😡😡😡 ,sazaa milegi..😉😉)

so its a year after roshni left...and arjun is hallucinating ashmara in roshni's place...🤢🤢

he is troubled...his state of mind could be understood...and you potrayed well..

sam found roshni...but will arjun be able to get her back??

nd what about ashmara??where is she??what happened a year back with the three??

wanna know...

cotinue soon...thanks for pm

I didn't mislead you. How can you not hate Roshni leaving Arjun, & the broken state of our ACP.😲

It was not hallucinating, it was a dream.😕

Yes, he will get her back, but after passing some obstacles.

More about Ashmara in next or coming updates.

Originally posted by: jia03
Lovely update❤️

Thank you for liking it😊

Edited by laila1994 - 11 years ago

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laila

@laila1994

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Chapter 8 "Regret? May be"

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Read the note below

Edited by laila1994 - 11 years ago

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laila

@laila1994

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

If you want PM for updates, please like the post on first page & buddy me.

PM for next part will be sent to those who will comment.

I will update it in two or three days, You know what you have to do.😈

Edited by laila1994 - 11 years ago

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Shreya

@_lovergirl101_

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Lovely!! But a bit short! 👏 Love Roshni's undying love for arjun. Continue soon...
by the way, did u get my pm? 😊

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rinku95

@rinku95

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Superb
Roshni is so kind
Thanks for pm
Continue soon

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angle1shanu

@angle1shanu

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

u make me cry dear...superb updte...and this song is my most favourite one and ful song along with the scene was in front of me during i was reading this story...again loved it...plz continue it soon