Arakshi SS: Crossroads of Destiny CHAPTER 3 updated - check index!

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So I originally wrote this story way back for sajda tere pyaar mein, which I adored a lot cause of Ranveer and Aliya. Still can't believe they ended the show right when it was getting so interesting.

It's based off one of my favourite animes, so if you see any similarities, that's probably why. Think of this story as an arakshi adaptation/version of it.

Anyways, so I've decided to revamp it for arjun and sakshi. Here, arjun has no tragic past, no roshni, so obviously he won't be our khadoos acp like in the show. It'll be more tragic for sakshi, in a way. But don't fret! She'll still be her carefree, bubbly self.

I'll be posting the character sketch for now, and then if ppl like it enough, I'll post the other chapters! So please do comment and let me know if this story is worthwhile!



Character Sketch:

Sakshi Anand:



a clumsy and crybaby girl. She is lazy and constantly gets bad grades at school because she never studies. Although she is often mistaken as unintelligent, she is actually just naive, lazy, and easily distracted. She prefers to play video games, read comics, and sleep. She also really loves food, especially sweet ones. Sakshi is afraid of dentists, ghosts, and lightning.

Arjun Rawte:

Arjun is rather reserved and collected in the eyes of people who don't really know him. He can sometimes come off as a jerk and rather cocky, but deep down he's really caring and a sweetheart. He is reserved mostly because he is still trying to figure out his past from his permanent amnesia and doesn't want people to get close if they end off leaving in the end. Even though Arjun constantly fights with Sakshi, he does care about her and right now that's the only way he is able to show her he cares. He also enjoys teasing her. Though, if caught in an embarrassing situation, he becomes uncomfortable as he tries to find a way out.

Other characters will be introduced as the story progresses.

Index:
Chapter 1 - see below
Chapter 2: Justice is Served
Chapter 3: Talk Radio
Edited by teamasadandzoya - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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seems to be nice concept pls do continue and pm me 😊
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Okies here's the first chapter! The name for this story is temporary, so as the story goes on, if anyone can think of a better one, I'm all ears!
Chapter 1 - Just a Piece of Paper

Aw man, can't believe I failed again. Actually.. Maybe I can. Hehe. But oh no, I can't go home with this test, mama ko kis moo se dikhaongi? Like, 'yeh lo mama.. I only got like a 30, your daughter's one smart cookie, Huh."

Ugh, what am I gonna do?! Frustrated, she scrunched up the piece of test paper in her hands into a round paper ball, aggravated with the results.

"Who needs school anyway?!" She rhetorically asked herself as she threw the paper ball backwards in the air. She could care less where that trash went now, walking forwards to go home.

However, little did she know that that paper ball would lead to the one man who would change her life as she knew it altogether.

The paper ball flew in the air behind her in a projectile motion fashion, and bounced off a black-haired male head, who was wearing black-tinted aviators on his eyes, a calm expression displayed on his face before...

"Hey, watch it choodi ki dukaan!" The man said, grabbing the paper ball into his hand after it bounced off his suave black head of hair.

Sakshi immediately turned around towards the male voice, surprised at his sudden outburst. Oh, Sakshi you're such a klutz! She mentally lamented to herself. "Oh sorry!" She called out to him, but then saw him with HER scrunched up test paper.

"A 30?" He questioned aloud sakshi's IQ as he read the red pen digits on the top right corner of the now crumbled up paper, creases now visible all throughout the page. "Admirable," he muttered.

Sakshi let out a huge girly scream upon the man's reaction at her test paper. "Aaahh!" She couldn't believe he was actually looking at her test paper - didn't he have any manners at all? She grew apprehensive on the man's growing interest with her paper.

"Tum uh, aisi hi bewakoof ho, ya are you just plain lazy?" He rhetorically asked her in a mocking manner, his eyes wandering up and down her figure. He turned the paper around so the big fat digits "30" were visible for her to see from far away.

Angered that someone was actually invading her privacy, she stormed up to the man, furious that he had the nerve. "Oh why you--!"

She hastily snatched the paper from his hands so he could no longer judge her (too late for that), "ugh give me that! Tumhari himmat kaise hui mera test paper dekh ne ki!" She yelled at him as she turned right around from him and proceeded to walk in the opposite direction.

Huffing and puffed, she continued to storm and walk forward, her paper crunched in her hand. "How dare he! What a jerk calling me 'choodi ki dukaan'! Agar maine usse sabak nahi sikhaiya toh mera naam bhi sakshi nahi!" She angrily muttered to herself as she continued to walk away, but then her footsteps slowed down to a stop as she turned around to peer at the man she just bitterly encountered,

"Phir bhi. Cute toh hai," she said with that oh so familiar lilt in her voice.


Arjun watched as the miffed girl angrily strode down the street away from him. He took off his aviators from his eyes in a slow and charming fashion, and gazed at her as she slowly disappeared into the street. Hmm... Something about that girl, he mused to himself.

Chapter 2: Justice is Served

Edited by teamasadandzoya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hahahaa me first again😆😆😆
You'll be like, doesnt this girl sleep? Well, its a saturday night..sooo😃

I must say again, you write brilliantly! You had me hooked from the very first line! I was just planning to shut down my laptop but then your SS came along and i kept on reading haha

A very good start I must say! Hahahaha must say, I love the name choodi ki dukaan😆😆😆 it suits her so muchhh! But Sakshi failing?😲 LOL
Loved their first meeting..would really love to read more 😳

Well done girl👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hahaha me 2nd again
wow wonderful dear
another story 4rm u
amazing start
love arakshi 1st meeting
i knw story kafi intresting ho ge plz update soon w8ng 4 next n thanx 4 pm n plz dnt stop here ok
Edited by ...Maha-Srk... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome concept
sakshi failed LOL!!!!
continue soon
plss pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it ws vry awsme dear..
fantastic strt 👏👏👏
arjun nd sakshi's 1st meet ws vry vry intrstng.. milte hi jhagda 😆😆 ye nhi sudhrenge 😉
luvd dis prt.. continue soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start
liked what arjun called sakshi choodi ki dukaan
sakshi failed but got attention of arjun not bad 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Heyya...thats soo interesting..you write sooo well..am excited to read what happens and how arjun will change sakshi life..do continue soon and thank you for writing it 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ritu_24

Hahahaa me first again😆😆😆

You'll be like, doesnt this girl sleep? Well, its a saturday night..sooo😃

I must say again, you write brilliantly! You had me hooked from the very first line! I was just planning to shut down my laptop but then your SS came along and i kept on reading haha

A very good start I must say! Hahahaha must say, I love the name choodi ki dukaan😆😆😆 it suits her so muchhh! But Sakshi failing?😲 LOL
Loved their first meeting..would really love to read more 😳

Well done girl👏


Haha don't worry I'm a night owl too ;)
Hehe I try ;) so glad it caught your interest!
Haha I don't even know how I came up with that, I just thought of their onscreen first meet, and then it just clicked I guess lol.
Ahaha let's just say she's not the smartest of the lot ;)
Working on the next chapter right now!
Xx

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