ARAKSHI: EK DOOJAY KAY LIYAY (THREAD 3 ) EPILOGUE 2 PG 18

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aagana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#91

sorry..

i couldn't read the update due to caution as I'm not 16+..

no worries i just read your message at last

EDKL is just a wonderful story

Loved it the way it shaped up

Do continue writing new stories with new concepts

thanku for a wonderful stories once again👏

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rizwanaa

@rizwanaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#92

mindblowing,brilliant n romantic part
Sakshi's cuteness n innocence while complaining him with anger
was well written
and Arjun cajoled her and made her understand why he did so was nice as well
Arjun confessing and at the same time apologizing her
for his previous mistake which ruined her dreams was really nice
Sakshi's mind state and fears reliving the past experience
while Arjun well understanding her turmoils and pov both were superb
Arjun's understanding was wonderful
Arakshi moment were super hot n romantic☺️
loved the whole journey of this plot
which consisted of maa-baba's love towards their Pari,
Sakshi's innocence and love for her family n husband
and Arjun's heartbreak, his mistake and then his attempts to make
up all this with his love and care towards his Pari
all were beautifully portrayed in this journey
loved the plot and enjoyed a lot while reading it
thanks a lot for this plot!!👏
and eagerly waiting for an epilogue

Edited by rizwanaa - 11 years ago

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Devangana

@Devangana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#93

Worth Valentine's day really. Blushing ☺️

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PoohLover

@PoohLover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#94

Rehana rehana that was such a beautiful journey truly ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

We got to see soo many facet of a couple life 😛 😛

I personally loove this story very much 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Would really love to read the epilogue..where we will get another beautiful glimpse of arakshi married life 😳 😳

Thank you soo much for writing this and sharing it with us 🤗 🤗

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sweetpari4u97

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Posted: 11 years ago

#95

awesome part. pari was too cute,

loved her innocent talk.

very very romantic part.

its just awesome.

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pango

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Posted: 11 years ago

#96

wonderful update

loded it

it was so romantic😳😳

Sakshi's anger was awesome.

loved arjun's suprise

beautiful ending

thanx for PM

Update the epilogue soon.

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sisodia_shefali

@sisodia_shefali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#97

nice update happy for arakshi 😃 but sad for us 😭 because now they will not come to meet us as this story ends here
but pls don't stop writing arakshi do come with some new story will be waiting
happy valentines day 😃 and wishes for future stories

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Shezi19

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Posted: 11 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: easha4539
HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY...
Woww.
Jo bhi bolu kaam hai.
Superb update.
Still blushing hard.
Aww Sakshi's anger was awesome.
Arjun's sweet caring avatar.
Maa was involved!!! So sweet.
Update the epilogue soon.
And maine apni wish tumhe PM kardi.

Yes thanks dear
I soon start on your concept
Thanks liking my way of writing
Stay with me

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Shezi19

@Shezi19

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Posted: 11 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali
nice update happy for arakshi😃 but sad for us😭 because now they will not come to meet us as this story ends here
but pls don't stop writing arakshi do come with some new story will be waiting
happy valentines day😃 and wishes for future stories

Yes I am also sad
I really enjoy writing this story
That I forget my other story
Now I write that one and finish it
Then maybe I start any new one
Thanks dear for supporting me