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Devangana

@Devangana

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Arjun-Sam and Roshni will find out the truth soon. Love their dedication. Karan and Payal are in love but both are scared of voicing their feeling. Update soon.

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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Awesome update

loved it

Arni were great

the case is getting trickier

intetesting

loved Payal-Karan

waiting for the next part

continue soon

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rizwanaa

@rizwanaa

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#73

sorry for late comment
Arni convo was nice
there are new things adding up to the case
and Anand's interrogation was nice
Karan-Payal sequence was wonderful
and their convo was nice
thanks for pm
cont soon

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Just realised not commented here yet di...
Sorry :P
Awesome update ...
grrrhhh dat uncle he deserves more...
kya attitude dikha rha tha uff!!
Glad samjun bro there..
especially rosh bhabi haye!
do dil mil rhe h...
Oye hoye me n karan ...
too gud nicely written di...
Update soon..
ty..
love u..
tc :)

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rimi

@rimi_invisible

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

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@neha : congrats dear and thanks..keep reading..😳

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rimi

@rimi_invisible

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Scroll up for the replies...thank you everyone for still being with me and my story..😳

I know I might be dragging it too much but you people are loving me and i have become so greedy...😛😛

Here comes the next part...A shorter part but then things needs to be explained and i dont wanna leave them hanging in one update...😃😃

Please read and give back your comments about this part..have brought in a few twists hope they interest you..😳😳

and made a new banner..not good I know..but wasnt sleepy late night and not in a good mood so here is the resultant...I am not a creative person so please forgive..do give back your suggestions on the banner..😳😳😳😳

Chapter 17

Arjun and Sam planned to raid,'underground disco' in the night.But before that they need to know about the activities going around there.They dressed in casuals and entered the disco.While Roshni waited outside with the backup force.It was late night,the disco was in full swing.The youngsters were enjoying themselves,drinking and dancing.

Different colored lights illuminated the whole area.Some people at the bar counter sipping their drinks while swaying themselves with the loud party music,while some sat on the sofa enjoying themselves with their partners,some among them were weird looking men,surely enough, drug suppliers.

Sam and Arjun splited at two different directions inside the disco,keeping a keen watch on the people tumbling and dancing.Arjun had just sat down on the stool at the bar counter when suddenly the lights dimmed and the flash light fell on one perseon at the center of the dance floor.She slowly swayed with the music and made her appearance.Suddenly the mob started shouting and cheering for her.The bartender too was gawking at her.

Arjun too kept looking at the girl. A lady in her late twenties, in an extra exposing dress showing herself with her turns and moves,making the crowd gawk at her hungrily.He tried to search for Sam and found him standing at the corner irritated and restless,making a weird face.He too was looking at the woman who had suddenly aroused the crowd, and him too.Arjun chuckled at the thought of his friend being aroused by a mere bar dancer and concentrated on the mission.

Sam was looking around for clues when he suddenly felt the lights dimmed,darkening the whole area.He was taking his position and tried to contact Arjun when he saw a flash light fall on the center of the dance floor and a women turned swaying and moving with the rythmn.

She was awkwardly dressed exposing most parts of her body which was irritating him too much.But what frustrated him more was her intense seducing gaze aroused him at that very moment.He moved away restlessly towards the corner to avoid her gaze to seduce him more.

Arjun found a few suspicious men entering the disco.He alerted Sam and Roshni to get ready for the attack.Sam came out of the state and took his position.Both arjun and Sam fired in the air and stood straight blocking the suppilers to move and the backup team rushed in with Roshni leading them.

A commotion set in with the sudden firing and the mob despersed causing a few men to escape but Roshni had her team set well.They captured them outside the disco and took them into custody.The bar dancer who had just started her performance was startled with the firing.She was finding a way to escape when Sam walked to the dance floor and held her hand.She looked at him with her tempting gaze and a mischevious smile and kicked a fallen glass on the switch board making a short circuit and the whole area fell into darkness.

The unexpected darkness made Sam and Arjun to lose control and before sam could know,the lady had disappeared.The back up team too lost their control and some of their captured men went loose.

Before they could make a plan for the next move firing started from the other end.The darkness had lighten a bit but the faces were still not visible.Arjun,sam,roshni back fired while the the back up forces covered them well.The firing stopped after some time.Arjun felt some movement towards the gate and slowly moved toward the gate roshni covering him from behind.Sam walked towards the other end hearing some noise and was about to shoot when he realised his gun was empty and he didnt have any more extra bullet.

The men from the other end realised it too and came out pointing the gun at sam's head.The man was about to pull the trigger when a gun shot from behind and he fell head on, on sam.Sam looked over his shoulder and found the same dancer pointing the gun at him.Before he could question her,she pulled him to a nearby corner,saving him from another bullet.Sam fell on her due to the sudden pull and held onto her firmly,making her breath fall on his face.

He killed the man with her gun and steadied himself.She too steadied herself and looked around.The situation seem to be in control now.Arjun and Roshni too rushed in to search for Sam and found him looking at the dancer.The back up team sealed the place and took the people into custody.

Arjun and Roshni came near Sam and looked at the dancer with a questioning glare.Sam too was confused about her.The lady realised their gaze and put the gun at her back.

'ACP Aisha Kapoor,undercover agent.'

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Arjun informed Karan and Payal about the developments of the case.Karan was furious to know about his uncle's confession.Though his Dad had fought with his uncle always regarding his drinking habits and extrovagant nature but his dad had loved his brother like his own son.Karan too shared a special bond with him after his dad's arrest and then dismisal.But he had never imagined in his dreams that he could be involved in something like this and would have forced his own brother to death just to save his illegal activities.

Arjun had felt Karan's sudden silence on hearing about the case and had tried to console him but everything was in vain.Karan handed the phone to Payal and moved out to the garden trying to get the horrifying truths sink into his head.

Payal too had noticed his change of expression and his broken state after that.He too had lost his family and now he lost his last anchor.Payal could understand his defeat and walked to the garden after her small talk with her brother.

She was sure to find him back on the bench,as she had found him from the very first day.She walked to him.He was sitting with his head buried in his palms and bending down to support his elbows on his thighs.Payal sat silently beside him.Karan felt her presence and looked up at her.He was depressed and his face was pale but his eyes were blank,they didnt emote a single emotion.Payal was getting scared of the silence in his eyes and asked him,

'karan tum thik ho?'

Karan nodded his head and looked away.He was getting annoyed at her unneccesary concern but didnt wanna show.But Payal was unaware of his present mind state and continued probing.

'to aise kiyu baithe ho?bhaiya ne bataya na,uncle ko wo log,'

'pata hai mujhe sab,doobara batane ki zaroorat nehi,'karan cut her irritatedly,

'per karan mein to aisehi,'

'aishi kiya payal?kiya batana chahati ho?kiyu itna concern dikha rahi ho?iski koi zaroorat nehi
hai mujhe,adaat hain mujhe akele rehene ki...akele chor do mujhe,'

'karan tum aise kiyu kehe rahe ho,mein to bas tumse baat karne ayi thi,insab ke bare mein to mein..'

'khatam ho gayi teri baat,to ab jao aur so jao,please,'he shouted at her,

Payal was confused at his behaiviour but more than that she was hurt.She felt insulted and that brought tears in her eyes.She wiped them sitting there,but they again started forming.Karan looked at her tears and that angered him more.

'ab ro kiyu rahi ho?irritate maat karo payal,just go'karan spoke up again,

Payal got up and ran towards the gate instead of going inside.She didnt wanna go in and show others her tears.She stood by a tree wiping her tears.

Karan looked at her retreating back and smacked himself.He was angry on himself,his fate but he vent his anger on the poor soul,who had come to company him in his grief.He looked at her and found her standing near the gate holding the tree trunk,facing her back to him.He didnt have the mind to go to her and console.He knew if he did he would end up hurting her again.

He remained sitting there looking down on tha grass trying to calm himself.He was sitting there for sometime now,suddenly he heard a sharp cry and then payal shout his name.He looked up instantly and found few men holding her mouth and dragging her outside,while she was struggling trying to move out or shout.

He instantly sprinted towards her,shouting at the men and calling her.He reached them and held onto one of the men from the back.They fought back punching him hard in his belly.He too returned back with the same force making their cheeks bleed and nose broken.He held onto payal's hand,who was still struggling in one of their arms who had closed her mouth,kicking the man, when he felt something hit his head shooting in pain and he fell almost unconcious.The little sense he had,he could only feel two people holding him up and then put him into something and then he lost his concious.

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done with this part...cliffhanger??

dont hang me for them..😳😳😳 gove back your review...😃

Edited by rimi_invisible - 11 years ago

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Res 😉 / Unres

Yaah Me first 🥳

Beautiful update rimi Awesome

Loved it Karan is shattered badly after this bitter truth

Aisha n sam Super as uaual

OMG Payal n karan in danger 😲

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 😊

Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago

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unisha

@unishaz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#78

interesting.. Loving it.. Continue soon.. Thanks for pm..

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rizwanaa

@rizwanaa

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#79

awesome n interesting update
the disco sequence was well depicted
and Sameer's reaction towards the the dancer was nicely written as well
and so we get to meet Aisha here
Karan n Payal were superb
the banner is lovely!!
thanks for pm
cont soon