Farishtey (last part: Pg 114) 2/10 - Page 9

Created

Last reply

Replies

803

Views

103.5k

Users

76

Likes

2.1k

Frequent Posters

rizwanaa thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#81
awesome update
so Rathod coming back
the l'll computer expert was superb
loved how in this young age she knows
to manage herself alone when her mumma is at work
and also keep tracks of her mother's safety
Avi n the choice for her ch are wonderful
her worries as a mother were beautifully described
Karan-Simmi- Arjun were amazing
loved their bond n care for each other
thanks for pm
cont soon
ll-Farheen-ll thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#82
This is once again proved that even if Arjun pretends "An I dont care attitude towards everyone" but the fact remains to be the same that he too is emotionally dependent.First it was the ETF team &now its the 3of them.
Anjali seems to be more mature than her age group.Is it becoz of the absence of a father in her life or there is sumthing else.Now i get it,her mother has already given a SYS to Arjun to stay away from her daughter but i m sure she knows her daughter too well๐Ÿ˜ƒ
If I am not wrong kunchu ,Anjali's father was a gadget man,wasn't he?Also is he no more in this world?
sashashyam thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
#83
Dear Farheen.

Your @blue is spot on. Please my comment on page 9, which echoes the same assessment.

Shyamala Aunty

Originally posted by: ll-Farheen-ll

This is once again proved that even if Arjun pretends "An I dont care attitude towards everyone" but the fact remains to be the same that he too is emotionally dependent.First it was the ETF team &now its the 3of them.
Anjali seems to be more mature than her age group.Is it becoz of the absence of a father in her life or there is sumthing else.Now i get it,her mother has already given a SYS to Arjun to stay away from her daughter but i m sure she knows her daughter too well๐Ÿ˜ƒ
If I am not wrong kunchu ,Anjali's father was a gadget man,wasn't he?Also is he no more in this world?

vidya.anand thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#84
Amazing update dear...
Loved the bond that Arjun shares with Karan and Simran...the way he cherished the jacket shows that he is bonding emotionally with them...
and ofc Anjali...can totally relate to what her mother thinks and fears...all mothers would want their child to be safe and away from such problems...so cant blame her for it!

cont soon
Edited by vidya.anand - 11 years ago
skrafty thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#85
Awesome update
loved it
Each and every emotion was well defined
beautifully written
waiting for the next part
continue soon
misakiscarlet thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#86
awesome post. ...
arjun -karan and simi were amazing...
whats the link with avni...still wai8ng to see more about har
bonding of arjun and anjali is so sweet..
overall lovd it
good job
continue sooon
thnx for pm
Chulbuli_Annu thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
#87
nhi re kya krna sikh k...agar itna hi zaruri hai sikhna to chai wale sabse ameer hote...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† so no tension main to chai peeti nhi...jo piyega usko tension honi chahiye ๐Ÿ˜†


๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
u know what...maine socha tha k comment baad me karungi

but rati is my fav...anjali ki mom hi sahi

but story me rati bhi hai ye hi bahut hai

sam ne arjun k bare me puche jaane pr no comment bola...humm ye to hona hi tha

so sam wapas aa rha hai...kitne whqt k liye...

aur aayega to tikega ya nhi

simmi aur karan arjun k liye jacket laaye

ahaan

aur anjali ki mom uske liye always worried rehti hai...ab single parents to waise bhi zyda worried rehte hai...


Edited by chulbuliannu - 11 years ago
rimi_invisible thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#88
It was Rathod in the beginning..I first mistook him for Arjun,but gradually understood when shree came in picture...he is coming back for some work?nd does it involve arjun somewhere?i am waiitng for that part of the story,

next comes out anjali and her mom...beautiful introduction to the characters...exactly appropriate..

next comes arjun and his gang...jacket pasand aya,you kept his style of acknowledgement..i loved that too...

Loving this story,as i had loved your other stories...do continue...thanks for the pm
Snehajain thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#89

Awesome update...

๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...
anu91 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#90
loved it...
u written so well...
anjali and her mom part liked it...
P.S. one doubt is sakshi liza chotu and aisha is alive...

Related Topics

Arjun thumbnail

Posted by: Smalldesires ยท 8 years ago

Hey guys I'm here with the prologue of my Ariya story, though the title hasn't been yet decided but i hope you will enjoy it. Prologue :Life is

Expand โ–ผ
Arjun thumbnail

Posted by: VindhyaMounika ยท 1 years ago

Arakshi SS: Chance By Kismat Prologue, Part 1 and 2 Part 3: Arjun kneeled before lifeless Sakshi, who didnโ€™t even blink from past 5minutes. She...

Expand โ–ผ
Arjun thumbnail

Posted by: SarafWasima ยท 9 months ago

Prologue The night was heavy. As if the air itself carried the weight of unspoken truths and unfinished emotions. A storm was brewingโ€”not...

Expand โ–ผ
Arjun thumbnail

Posted by: SarafWasima ยท 10 months ago

Part 1 The ETF office had always been a place of tension, urgency, and adrenaline, but today, an unusual silence loomed over the space. The...

Expand โ–ผ
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".