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dinazz

@dinazz

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#691

Amazing update .

Karan too has a sad past 😔and his father is not well.😔

they r being followed and been taken by sikanders men and are in danger . Hope they will be fine.

Maybe now its the time for arjun to meet sikander.

cont soon.

Thanks for the pm.

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-Carrie-

@-Carrie-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#692

Ufff!😕

Aasmaan se girey aur khajoor mein atke

I was massively relieved when I read Karan was safe at the hospital. But what's this? Karan ke saath Kiran bhi Sikky ke giraft mein? 😭 Bahut naa insaafi hai Sardaar! 😛😆

I was hoping for some sparks to fly when Arjun sets sights on Sik for the first time.😕 Nothing rang a bell in his mind? Why did he come personally after Arjun? Hmm...Will wait for you to reveal it all

Super thrilling update! 👏

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Swara85

@Swara85

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#693

Commenting on last two chapters.
This Sikander..🤬 thought he would have compromised for Patil..but no..
Loved the convo between Shree and Anjali..😊
Karan's dad in mental hospital..even Arjun didn't knew anything about it..just hope Kiren and Karan both are fine.

ACP Aman and ACP Zaid..wow..!!😃
Feeling really bad for Karan..but how is Kiren and Karan's father are related...??
Finally Arjun saw the face..it must have been so painful for him..and the way Sam is supporting him..👍🏼 well Arjun does need that..
Kiren and Karan are in danger..lets see how the team finds them..team se yaad aya..It is nice to see both Aman and Zaid here..ab ye chaaro milke Sik ki band bajaynge..😈
Now Patil will get to know Raza is responsible for his girl to be missing..waiting to see his reaction.

Awesome updates Kunchu..👍🏼going well..waiting to see how you have designed the plan to bring Sik out..
Thanks for the pms..cont soon.

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#694

Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved it
Amazingly Written
WOW! ACP Aman & ACP Zaid
they are helping them Loved their entry
Finally Arjun saw his face
Karan n Kiran are in danger
Continue Sooon
Thanks for the PM

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904129

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#695

Awsumm Update Di..😊 So ACP Aman And Zaid are back! 😃 These 5 men are now gonna watt lagaoing of Sikander! 😆 Mazaa Aayegi..!! 🤣🤣 So Aman knows Anjali too?? No Complaints! She is a cutie! ❤️ Thankfully, Karan is safe. Warna I thought he may be in danger!!! Kiran informed ArMeer abt Kiran. Awwiee..❤️ Arjun is concerened about Karan.. But why does Ravi Mehra? An ordinary Taxi driver seems familiar to Karan? Is he related to Sik in any way?? 🤔 Uhooo?? Two bikers following? This does not seems good..!! 😕 Sameer is right! Arjun needs to face his demons.. But where these two men are taking them??? And Patil's case too seems intresting! Thanxx fr pm..Continuee Soonz.

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Shweta Gupta

@ll_megha_ll

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#696

Wow di...

It's awesome and mind blowing upda...

Just loved it...

Do continue soon...

And thanks for the pm

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Bhavna Antriwale-Gargate

@bgargate

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#697

Uresed on Pg 91

Res for parts 24, 25 and 26 😊

Unres 😊

Part 24

So fireworks begin between Arjun and Kiren and Sameer is the referee 😉

So finally Kiren revealed the truth

Shree in action .. good to see him active 😊

Awww... my Einstien baby ... working with Shree 😊 ... this will keep her distracted and may be give her a sense of being helpful in what Arjun and Kiren are doing.😊

Karan and Simi have their past lives to deal with

Emotions of everyone were described beautifully ... Avni, Kiren, Arjun, Karan, Simi and Anjali ... loved it 😊

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Part 25

Aww... Little Anjali is so serious and mature for her age ... she knows everything and the way she poured her heart out to shree was beautifully described 😳

Arjun-Kiren part was brilliantly written ... it actually laid the foundation of the story ... perfectly descriptive ... 👏

Raza ... Sikander ... this one mistake is going to cost him a lot ... good that he is digging hhis own grave by betraying Patil ... now i just hoe the girls including Sanchi are saved in time 😳

Team targeting Patil ... good move 👏

Eessshhh!!! Karan's father ... 🤢

Ahaaa... new comers 😉

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Part 26

Ahannn!!!! ... as i had guessed correctly ... Aman and Zaid are here 😊

Great progress 👏

Poor Karan

So Kiren knows Karan's father ... waiting for u to reveal more on this track 😊

Kiren and Karan kidnapped 🤢

The little things that touched me were Aman and Zaid's little talk with Anjali and noticed the leg braces, Arjun looking at the back of papers in Aman and Zaid's hands, A small emotional moment between Sam and Arjun.

All emotions brilliantly portrayed.

Edited by bgargate - 10 years ago

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ashmi

@ashmifebaa

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#698

wow. Karan and kiren were trapped waiting for next update

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Shreya

@shreya09

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#699

Zaid & Aman 😲 ☺️ great choice Helna 👍🏼 oh i miss reading Khamoshiyan...

Sovfinally Arjun saw Sikandar's face... was expecting lots of emotional outburst from him... but i guess the present situation didnt permit him to react in a harsh way... tension for Karan & Kiran's safety is still holding him back... but i seriously want you to show whats going inside his mind... may be in next update 😉

Karan... felt really bad for this man... somehow i wished Arjun to be wirh him... instead of Kiran... just like Karan was always there for him... but again... the present scenario... noone has the control over it (Except you ofcourse 😆)...

the last part was scary... both Karan & Kiran under there clutches

dont know what to expect.

But Awesome & Great update it was Helna 👏

will wait for more 😳