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Posted: 10 years ago
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A longgg comment under progress 😉
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For parts 20 -23
What a lovely description of Avni's response when she saw Kiren 👏👏👏. Loved it.
Everything came crashing for her.
Little Anjali who was the most impacted person too was clueless what was going around her but even she could feel the negative vibes.
Arjun - Kiren part was even more beautiful 👏👏👏👏
Arjun who has his target closer to him but still adamant on his old ways and Kiren, a defeated man who is now desperate to protect his family at any cost.
But the part that touched me most was Anjali - Kiren conversation. The little girl craving for her father's love, finding him suddenly in front of her and doesn't want to let him go and Kiren in a fix because he too wants to be with his daughter but at the same his proximity to her will put her in danger.
And here comes another blow to Sameer... when Kiren mentioned Sikander... this was the turning point of the story 😊
Arjun's old problem... no control over his emotions but thanks to Sam... who is there to hold him 😊
Another high point... Avni slapping Kiren 😳 ... all anger bottled up in her heart found a way out.
For so many years she was guilty of betraying the love of her life but after knowing what he was doing for last few years, her faith in everything shattered
Lovely conversation between Avni - Kiren ... and the obvious problem... Avni dosnt have control over Anjali's emotions... she can distance herself from Kiren but she cannot do anything about Anjali's feelings for Kiren. 😳
Finally even Kiren has connected all the dots ... though he hates Rathod, but he has realised that even Rathod was tricked in that case.
Rathod's outburst ... a treat to read (i'm running out of adjectives now 😳) ... I could feel is anger 😳
Arjun's visit to ETF office ... and his words to the guard "Khalipan" ... I felt a tug in my heat 😳
And now Arjun realised that Sam knows everything
Sikander's past ... no one is born as a criminal... its the circumstances that mould his character
Sam-Arjun conversation... touchy ... some where I compared it with the SHraddh scene in the show ... this was complete contrast .. yet had the similar impact 👏👏
And here begins the chain of revelations 😳
Sikander's involvement in ETF blast case was a biggest surprise for Sam and shree
Kiren and Sameer re-living the terrible moments of their life ... the time which changed her ... it was scary
Roshni murder, Arjun's team's betrayal and ETF blast was perfectly detailed 👏
Yes... everything was soon going to be changed
Patil ... he seems to a weak link which would be easier to break ... because he doesn't know Raza' alter, Sikendar 😳
Sam was finally able to convince Arjun to at least listen to what Kiren has to say 😊
Patil's girlfriend kidnapped by Sik's men ... ab aayega mazaa... Patil can be really dangerous for Sik once he gets to know Sik's truth and that his girlfriend is one of his victims 😳
Kiren is again connecting the dots 👏👏
Edited by bgargate - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago


A marathon 5 updates reading. And what an emotional roller coaster ride!😭 Kiran's vain attempts at redemption, Arjun finally locking in on his arch nemesis, Avni finally confronting her past & huge guilt trip for Sam Rathore for not trusting his only best friend and brother officer.

The lashing pain I used to feel when watching Arjun's past life was back again today.

I wonder what will happen at the end of this saga. Only one satisfactory end result will emerge. That of Sikander being put out of business and more lives saved from being ruined.

But what about lives that have already been ruined beyond recognition? Arjun, Sam, Kiran, Avni & Anjali have had colossal irreplaceable damages done to them. Will Sikander's death change any of that?


Tragic!

Very well written, Helna👏 Sorry for the delay! 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
love the way the story is progressing
waiting for the next part
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb
Thank for pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
bohot din bad update mili.
Superb update yaar.plz update regularly.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderfully written. Arjun's helplessness, pain, anger - all were so alive in this update. Sameer now realised the mistake committed all these years by not trusting his friend when he needed it the most. The rest are having a glimpse of the way Sik's mind works when he wants to deal with his enemies. Hope they get together and nab him so that more lives are not destroyed. However, Arjun, Kiran, Avni, Anjali and even Sameer will never be the same again.. Please update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Now everybody know what Arjun and gone through and why Sameer hadn't believed him.Maybe if he had believed his words that day things would have been different today.
Even if Raza is bad for others, he doesn't seem to put his best men in problem.He didn't want anything to go wrong with Patil's girl.
Kiren has sensed something fishy, seems like they find out.
Great update.
Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 10 years ago
unresd my comment on pg 91
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update...
Kiren told them everything he knows...😃😃😃
It was like they all are leaving those moments of horror...
Arjun ki team ne end time pe jhoot bol diya......but they all were scared for their loved ones...
Someone from ETF office was back stabber...
Patil know noting about Raza as Sikander...
Raza dont want Patil to lost his love...
May be through Patil Raza/Sikander will realise the pain he had given to others, to Arjun...
Arjun dont want Kiren's help...well he is justified at his place...
Due to Sam he was ready to atleast listem to Kiren...😃😃😃
Now Arjun-Sameer will try to find that girl & evev Sikander vll also try the same...
Hope that girl is fine...

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awsum Update Heli Di..😊 So finally the layers of truth are opening up one by one! The revealtions by Kiran were really shocking! 😲 It was actually Kiran who gve them the threat calls. He too praised ArNi's Love! True they share an eternal relationship..❤️❤️ Kiran knows Sikander's ways of work. First he attacks all the weakpoints of the backstabber bfore killing the man himself! But till that tym.The man is half dead too..!! He really is a merciless animal! 🤬 Now all can actually understand the pain, anger and guilt of the broken man himself. Loved Patil And Raza's bond. Arjun's angry outburst seeing Kiran isnt the least expected but it cud make things difficult for Anjali. But Sameer is right they need Kiran in their Sikander's Quest. Kiran knows that Sikander will attack Avni and Anjali once he knows about his betrayal! So the gurl Patil is in love with is missing from last night. Shree shared the info that gurls have gone missing and Lo! Kiran smelt sumthing fishy..Thanxx fr pm! Continuee Soonz!

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