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-Carrie-

@-Carrie-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#321

Yipiieee!

BRB

P.S: That's Rahul Dev right? Apt choice to play Sik 👍🏼

Awesome update!👏

You first smoothed out each thread individually fortifying it up with its own story and then are in the process of neatly tying them up together to weave this amazing tapestry Kudos!

Shree is a tortuous soul caught between what is right and what might offend some. I loved the way this young person is marching forward with equal amount of trepidation and strong will power to save whatever remains of the legendary ETF. Very well portrayed.

It was a joy to see the bonding between Senior & Junior techies😆 Superb!

All is not lost for Kiran where love for Avni is concerned 😳 Hope he does not cause her harm in his blind hatred.

Sikander is evil personified. He suffers from sever God complex. Thinks he can pull strings and living humans will dance or die at his whim & fancy. Such people always meet a terrible end. Waiting for that day.

Beautiful. Thanks for the PM

Edited by -Carrie- - 11 years ago

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rinku95

@rinku95

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#322

Originally posted by: ...Maha-Srk...
Yay me 1

unres
superb
just amazing
wonderful veri well written
no words for their emotions, turmoil etc
aww
etne saare amne samne...
Hehehe siki ka dimagh to einstein se bhe tez hai,
but end mai rathore ko kiran ka pic bejh ke es bloody sikander ne apna khel start kar he dia...
M scared kea hu ga aub 5 lives on stake n other side bechare shree, karan n simran *sigh*

Thanks for pm

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misakiscarlet

@misakiscarlet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#323

awesome update...
loved it...
the turmoils ..pain ...accusations on pne anothr were wriiten soo good
sikandar!!! 🤢 kehna to nahi chahti but no doubt he is very intelligent ek teer se ye sab ke shikaar karega 😉
sameer ko wapas laane ka kya idea nikala hai...
contd. soon
thnx for pm

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638783

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#324

Awesome update 👏

loved shree-anjali convo ❤️

so sikander has made his first move ...

continue soon 😊

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Shweta Gupta

@ll_megha_ll

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#325

Wow dear..

It was awesome and mind blowing update.

Just loved it.

Do continue soon

And thanks for the pm.

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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#326

Awesome update
loved it
it was mind blowing
Sik is planning something really big
interesting
waiting for the next part
continue soon

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laila

@laila1994

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#327

For the first time in my whole life I am falling for a villain.

I am loving your sikander😆😆

Though frankly, I don't like the guy you chose for him.

But you have written his character brilliantly.

Sorry but in this story I love Sikander more than Arjun

Kiran still has some feelings for Avni.

And there is also some hope for him.

But I doubt if Arjun & Sameer would ever be able to forgive him🤔

Shree-Anjali scene was a treat to read. Loved it.

Avni trusts Arjun with her daughter But she doesn't know Arjun is indirectly involved in breaking her family.

Shree: He is now more mature & sensible that before.

So Sameer is coming back to mumbai🥳

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-Carrie-

@-Carrie-

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#328

Another thing I absolutely have to get off my system because it always eats me is that Rathore simply loves to flog Arjun What do you do to a man already drowning in guilt? Throw him a life line or stick his neck deeper into it?

By his logic all policemen should take care not to hurt their criminals feelings. Lest they come back for their loved ones 😳

Sikander killed Roshni & ETF members. Enough said.

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#329

superb one..

Love Sikky Diglogue..

kya dimmag laga ya hoga tumne ye diglogue write karne ke liye...

and Shree & Arjun ek step aage jaa chuke.. ab sirf Rathod ko aana lana hai...

its really excting to see how Sikky play with them & how they defeated him.

So Kiran , thinka abt his princess..

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Atisha Khan

@Shamsad1607

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#330

I'm feeling like eat you up!!! 10G-GM!

Bechara Shree...Rathod Typhoon ka sirf aadha nikla hain uski upar se.. baaki toh...anyways, Rathod's outburst was just superb!! cuoldn't imagine better than this.

And Arjun...loved his caring gesture towards Shree. Chalo...indirectly hi sahi...kuch toh nikla iss emo-kanjoos ke dil se!!

Anjali...is a sweetheart...loved her here, specially with Shree. & two techy geeks made it work!! yes, not Arjun but we also saw the glimps of the old Shree.

Avni & Kiran...both missing Anjali... loved Avni's motherly concern and Kiran's pondering over his life...his one wrong move just made 3 lives miserable!

Sikandar...he just voiced out my thoughts...bohot maza aayga!! & he just made his first move!! wow!! Atisha khush hua!!

Keep writing!!

P.S. regarding RFA...love you too 😉...