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Delusional Minx

@Delusional_Minx

Stunner

+ 33

Posted: 11 years ago

#341

unres

yay me first (kuch jyada hi jaldi aa gayi thi😉😆)🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳

ok enough dancing n partying😉😆

coming to the update

super se upar😉👏👏

complete update i was having goosebumps

poora hila diya iss update ne🤢

itne saare twists😲😲

sameer's pov 👏👏

arjun's thoughts..beautifully written👍🏼

simi's past😲😭😭..her baba😡

karan ka naya avtaar dekhne ko mila di..thankx for it😊

loved karan n arjun's convo on past..fantastic👏👏

kiran..is ka kya kahe..kuch samajh nahi aata😕

sam-coelho meet👏

coelho plans to reunite samJun👏😳

siva😡😡..ye sik ka aadmi he😲

avni back😃..par ab aage kya hoga😕😭

so some men r keeping eye on avni n arjun right?😕🤢

omg!! di..ye kya kar diya aapne..🤢

sam ka accident😭

siva 😡😡 i 'll kill u😈

fantastic update di🤗

very interesting

continu soon

thankx for pm😊

Edited by Godly_Affection - 11 years ago

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Devangana

@Devangana

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#342

Please let nothing happen to Sameer, although he may not show it but Arjun would be devasted, not to mention Sree. This is the first time Karan openly expressed his concern for Simi. Liked it. Continue soon.

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rimi

@rimi_invisible

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#343

what was in the end?? rathod ka accident?? so he stays in mumbai until he recovers...nice move..siva and kuchu..😆😉😉😉

well you started with simi;s background..i liked it...i think i can guess the rest of it...may be...😛

anjali...she is understanding and matured...much more owing to her age..
karan is sad for simi..he knows about her...
arjun is changing gradually..i liked it..

avni back so is kiran...now all in mumbai..what next??

continue soon..thanks for pm

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Harisree001

@Harisree001

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#344

Wow! Superb...
Simi's past...
Loved Arj-Karan convo...
Avni is back...
Wo log Sameer ko chot pahochne wale hai...
Cont soon...

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Anu

@anu91

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#345

well written part...

hope nothing will happen to sam...

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Shreya

@shreya09

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#346

speechless !!!!!
brilliant update Helna 👏

Simi... a short yet important & painful past is shown... Karan's care & concern for her... his talk with Arjun... littile Anjali... Perfectly written. very well done 👍🏼
Sameer's accident ... Siva 😡
Arjun... yes.. time to rise up again... waiting to see his reaction after hearing the news of the attack on Rathore...
Shree will also stay back i think ...
very very very nice writing.
update soon (if possible 😳 ... no pressure 😆 ) !!!!

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-Carrie-

@-Carrie-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#347

Awesome!👏

I am sure nothing going to happen to Rathore. Someone just wants to put him out of business for a few days. And its not a bad idea. All the players are orbiting around each other in Mumbai. He too needs to be here.

So one police man right in Coehlo's office is a mole🤔

I hope Simi was not ill treated by her new father. What is distressing her so much? Did he do something to her mother?

Her sadness & gradual going back to normal was very well portrayed👏 Love how Karan is a pillar of support to her.

Now that Avni too feels the family like vibes from the Garage Family hope she is more comfortable with the thought of Arjun in her daughter's life.

Kiran may be impulsive but he is no fool. Despite tight rein of Sikander he knows something is afoot.

Very well written. Even though the story has so many characters each person's emotions & thought processes are carefully laid out. Kudos!

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misakiscarlet

@misakiscarlet

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#348

loved the past..esp. the convo on pastavni is back..someone is keeping an eye on her..
kiran ka to kuch samaj hi nahi aata...left it to u
siva sik ka aadmi hai... 😲
omg...sam ka accident..hope he is f9 and arjun will go to meet him
contd. soon
thnx for pm

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Swara85

@Swara85

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#349

Kya update tha..👏 superb!
Arjun's thoughts about him being dormant all this time and did not notice what shree noticed was true. His care and concern about his new family was nice..!
Simmi and Anjali moment was nice..little glimpse of her past was well written..Her baba and her relation..i m confused..is it because may be he is her step father or something else..?lets see in next update may be.
Karan and Arjun's convo was superb..First time saw Karan expressing in such way..
So Kiran getting vibes of something is going to happen
Sam and Coelo meet was as it should be..and him thinking of Samjun meet was positive.
Mamma daughter moment was so sweet..so someone keeping eye on them..
and Siva..He is with Sik😡
And last part I was like what the..! I did not expect that coming..but nice twist..cont soon and thanks for pm.
Sorry comment thoda lamba ho gaya..!
P.S: I liked the way you gave something from every part and each character is framed well.

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laila

@laila1994

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#350

unres...

Firstly, your choice for Sikander is perfect this Character suits him the best. but he is a not handsome guy to droll na.🤪

No offence the actor.

Simi has a Not-so-good step father.

That is a nice touch.👍🏼

Avni is back...Yay🥳

I don't know if I should be happy or Sad But I am very much Happy that sameer had an accident

Firstly coz now Sam will stay in Mumbai.

Second Sam don't have anyone to take care of him there except you know who.

Or Zakhmi insan ko akela ni chorte na😆

Story to ab start hui hai boss. As sikander said, "game ke pehle sare khiladiyonko ek hi maidan me lana hoga." Now that all the players are in the ground can I say Game begins 😎⭐️

Edited by laila1994 - 11 years ago

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