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Ritu Dang

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Posted: 11 years ago

#251

xtremly sry 4 nt cmntng on ur previous pst.. ws a bit bsy wid my xams

cmng 2 d stry.. it ws luvly

d chess game.. ol d fb scenes.. sikander nd kiran's cnectn.. evrythng ws beautifully presntd

shree lndng in karan's garage ws a cmplte shock.. i hd nevr xpctd dat

wndrng wat's runng in sikander's mind.. nd wat's he plnng 4 kiran??

do cntinue soon.. nd thnx 4 d pm

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rinku95

@rinku95

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Posted: 11 years ago

#252

Superb
Continue soon
Thanks for pm

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Shreya

@shreya09

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Posted: 11 years ago

#253

yes yess yesss !!!! Shree arrived :)

very nice update Helna
Arjun-Anjali scene was a treat to read 👍🏼

Arjun-Shree telephone convo... very nicely written.
Kiran is a very interesting & different personality
great writing

superb 👍🏼

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Devangana

@Devangana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#254

Sree and Arjun meet. Arjun and Anjali talk was sweet. Continue soon.

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

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Posted: 11 years ago

#255

" Beautiful... "

So Anjali know abt herDad.. she missing him so much...

and nyc flashback.. So Karan thinks bcoz of Sameer Avni betrayed him????

And last part is damn good... Anjali & Karan😆

Shree sees Karan.. OMG...

Karan miss his princess , hpe he will meet her soon... but he thinks abt her saftey. 😊

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Harsha

@Harsha111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#256

Awesome update chechi...
Feeling sad for anjali. She realy miss her dad
shree saw kiran , twist?
Eagerly waiting for next part
cont soon...

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fly.high

@fly.high

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Posted: 11 years ago

#257

ahaann...this kiran is becoming a real gud of a character..! i simply fall for every character u create!

no 'such' feelings for kiran...bt i m loving th graph of this chara!

th flashbacks were both really very gud!
arjun and anjali parts r atreat to read always!

now enters shree in th frame!

continue soon

love
Aisha

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#258

Kiran had wanted to arrange money for Anjali's treatment and a nice life ahead with Avni but was in a wrong path & Avni too wanted to protect him so had trusted Rathod but Sikandar played his cards and caused all the problems.
Made Rathod seem wrong and Avni lost her trust on him & he also made Kiran take a complete wrong path.Still he hasn't finished his filthy business and wants to ruin Kiran too for raising his voice.Only it can be expected from that Sikandar.
Anjali is having a happy time in the garage unknown to everything around her.
That was a great update.
Looking forward to more..

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Atisha Khan

@Shamsad1607

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Posted: 11 years ago

#259

Present and past..past and present...nice combo!!

Kiran's past is now in front of us...& somehow I can smell Sik's plan also..

Feeling bad for Kiran, still this man has some goodness inside...& still he loves his daughter.

the chase match was awesome..& A-a convo...more than awesome! so Anjali can recognise Kiran!!(point is noted!)

Shree decided to bring in the case, but why Arjun is hesitating?? Is he afraid of loosing his loved ones again?

K-a is always fill the fun factor of the story...loved it.

And finally Shree!!(he also saw kiran, noted it!)..usse raha nahi gaya!

I'm imagining the blast with 3 techies together!! Cyber Hurricane is on it way!!

Keep writing...& thanks for PM.

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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

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Posted: 11 years ago

#260

Awesome update
loved it
this part was well depicted
loved the way u wrote it
Loved the chess part
So Anjali knows about her dad
Shree came unannounced
waiting to see what happens next
continue soon

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