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Posted: 11 years ago
Res for comment on part 8
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Awww... Tera chehra kitna suhana lagta hai ... this song played in my mind as I read that FB part of Arjun when he saw Karan-Simi fighting over the game of cards 😉
Poor Arjun
So this was the case ... Kiran ... a simple man who was desperately in need of money was trapped into this web
No wonder it was Arjun's idea and guesswork that Kiran was forced to do something 😳😳
And that is how Sam got Avni in loop ... but he just tried to help an innocent
Already posted my questions in previous comment about the case 😛
Poor Shree ... so now he is secretly working on the case ... of course he is a genius ... he is capable of getting a lot ... and now I wish he is able to solve the case and bring Sam-Jun together ... there is a bigger task waiting for them ... Sikandar ... *Iske aage ki line mai chat mein bataungi*
Awww... Shree called Arjun ... it hurts
Ohh... My God!!!!!!!! Sikki Kamina planning to plant Kiran against Arjun 😡😡😡😡
*Iske aage ki line mai chat mein bataungi*
Awieee... Avni in a fix ... again she has to face the situation she was avoiding 😳😳 ... Anjali being closer to Arjun 😳😳😳
So finally she made up her mind, though reluctantly, that she will leave Anjali at Arjun's place 😳😳😳
And... Kiran is back in Mumbai...😳
And what followed next scared me and left me in tears with butterflies in my stomach 😳😳
Kiran went to his house ... He saw Anjali... He saw Avni and ... he saw Anjali with ... Arjun ...
Arjun Suryakant Rawte ... whose wife was brutally killed by Kiran's boss... Sikandar ... And Kiran was the witness to all this
And watching his daughter with him was nothing less than a shock
Now what 😳😳😳😳 ... This is what Kiran must be thinking 😉😉😉
Edited by bgargate - 11 years ago
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Eeeshhh... part 9 is yet to come... confusion in title line ... its part 8 on Pg 31 😛😛😛

Chalo... koi baat nahi ... extra comment for the entire story 😉
I am simply in the love with the entire story and the way you have woven these multiple tracks seamlessly into forming a perfectly balanced thriller 👏👏👏
All the parallel tracks are perfect as individual ones and have the scope of perfect merging at a believable point ... and I will wait for that 😉 ... I trust you that u can do the justice to this plot ... and for me ... this is your best story so far 👏👏👏👏
A grand salute... a standing ovation and hats off to u Heli ... for this awesome track 👏👏👏
Edited by bgargate - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG OMG OMG
Kiran was there when sikander killed Roshni n left Arjun 2 die
Awesome update
Shree has spoken 2 Arjun about the last case of ETF
So Avni finally decided to let Arjun look after Anjali while she goes 4 the medical camp
Wonder why Sikander has sent Kiran
Is it 2 kill Arjun
Omg
Thanks 4 update
Continue soon
Can't wait
Thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey all... kaise ho? Thank you for your time and like and comments. I really appreciate it.

@Laila: Kiran's task is yet to be known. But more about everyone before that.As I said before, everyone is related to each other. You will know it soon, Thanks again buddy.

@Kreyas: thanks

@devangana: Kiran have suffered alot in his life.More to come out soon. thanks

@Godly affection: thanks

@Harishree: twists tho suru hui hai. aage aage dekho.😉 thanks dear

@aisha: yes dear, for now he is the show stealer. guess what wud happen when they meet??
thanks birdie

@jia: thanks

@snehajain: yes it was Arjun's idea. but then Arjun never saw or knew Kiran in person. he had only heard about it from Sam thanks buddy.

@Megha: sree's convo soon revealed. thanks again

@sisgeo @misakiscarlet: thanks

@manali: as of now Sameer dosent know abt his return. but... wait and see. thanks

@sweetchilly: thanks a lot. yes yaar memories do a lot to all. It plays with everyone. not only the main chara, but all, as you will see in the upcoming updates. thanks.

@rinku @shreya: thanks

@Atisha: how can I give you poison?? I want you alive till end na!!
Sree had to work up, after all he is the techie.and how cud he miss such valid points. you will get to see more him soon. and each of their's path will cross too. thanks a lot dear.

@skrafty: thanks

@farheen:all have individual work. soon more to come.

@nikita: thanks

@maha: I wouldn't have brought Sik. but his part is left open by oyr CV. socha wahi pe jaake pakadlu. glad u liked it. thanks

@alee @samaman: thanks

@Swara: no Arjun was not related to Kiran's case.He had just given the idea to Sam. thank u

@Annu: Avni is confused. abhi bhi Arjun uskeliye stranger hai. and she don't have choice too. so she called him. thanks

@yas: thanks a lot yaar

@rimi: thanks a lot yaar. yes a lot happened. and the same goes in the next part too. wait and see.

@bhavna🤗🤗🤗🤗 Thank you sooo much for individual comments. Loved it a lot my dear. Glad that you loved the story a lot. chapter number me mere hi galthi thi.stupid me. love you a lot

@hal @zainabhassan: thanks ladies

Scroll down for the update.
Edited by kunchu - 11 years ago
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Part 9:

Night:

Kiran was pacing up and down in his room. What could be worse than its now? His daughter is with a man who is supposed to be dead 3 years back. The condition in which he was left back was not the one that would have made left him alive. Even if the wounds would have healed taking its time, which still is a mystery as of how, but the mental stability? How did he recover from that brutal murder in front of his eyes? That man had seen his wife been stabbed atleast 6 times right infront of his eyes. And before that he was assaulted very badly as none could even imagine. His wife had taken her last breath in front of his eyes. He was pathetically alive when the life left her eyes. Kiran had nightmares of that event many a time in his life. He had seen death and played death to many. But what he witnessed that day, proved many things.

One, his boss Sikander was an evil. He knew when and how to strike. Any one would believe his flattery smile. But what lies beneath is something as cruel as hell. If conditions were not as today, Kiran himself would have taken the life out of that creature. But he was bound in many ways.

Two, the boss had a very strong reason to strike that policeman. It was very rare when he came down to do some action. Always he had men like Kiran to do away the doings. He had a reputation to be held. The name Sikander was known only in their circle and a very few actually got a chance to see that face. For many others, he was a voice that came through the speaker, or selected correspondents. For the rest of the world the name Sikander did not exit, he was some one else, whom Kiran hardly knew.

And unknown to everything, his Anjali was with him. What is the unknown work for which he was brought down to Mumbai? Was it Arjun? If so, what about his daughter? Will she have to witness what her Dad has turned to be? Did she ever know his dad? What has Avni told about him? He knew nothing.

He sat back to the bed tired. It was too much for him. He never felt so drained these days. His mobile rang breaking the trance. Speaking of the devil, here was his call.

"hello"

"hello Kiran. Mumbai ka hawa kaisi hai?"

"wo sab chodo. Ab kam ke bath karo. Wo kaunsa adhura kaam hai, jiskliye mujhe yaha bheja hai?"

"ithne jaldi kya hai Kiran? Wo kaam ayega. Pehle, kuch aur. Abhi hamare usual dock keliye nikalo. 2 baje ke baad, ek consignment aane wale hai, use factory thak pohonchao."

"meine pehle bhi kaha tha aapse, mujhe uss dande ke sath math judiye"

"firse yaad dilatha hu Kiran, ke abhi bhi boss mein hi hu. Kafi unche bolne lage ho tum aaj kal"

Kiran stood silent at this end. On the other end, the boss was trying his best to keep his temper in leash. "Kiran... kuch purane karz hai, jo tumhe pura karna hai... hope you remember it."

"ussi karz aaj thak bhukat raha hu mein. Kuch bhula nahi hai ab thak"

"good. I knew it. Tum mere wo wafadar sipahi ho jisse mein ankh band karke viswas kar saktha hu. Use tutne math dena. Firse wahi bath yaad dilatha hu. Tum mere liye kaam kar rahe ho. Maana mostly tum un logonko hatarahe ho, jo mere raste me athe hai. Par ye math bhulna, ke hamesha tumhe choise nahi milega."

Kiran clutched his fist to keep up. The sweet tone was irritating to the bits.

"tho mere bhai... jao, hamare log tumhara intezar kar raha hai"

"aur baadme kya karna hai?" he was impatient now.

"wo fir bathaunga. Ab jao. Bada consignment hai, mujhe nirash math karna. I know you wont." Then came a laugh, and the line went off.

Kiran threw the phone to the bed, he was breathing heavily. He heard a knock at the door. They were waiting for him. He took back the phone and walked out. He was back in an SUV, but memory was that of a trip in a van, precisely a police van, almost 7 years back.

He was taken to the lockup for questioning. He was enraged to the maximum that he was so violent. If there was no handcuffs, he would have atleast killed 2-3 policemen who were trying to get hold of him.

He was expecting all third rate torture in the cell. He welcomed it. Atleast it was better than men who were trying to control him as if he was a wild horse.

"Chodo usse..." came a masculine voice that had a huge power in it. He turned to see a well built police officer, the same one who had taken him away from his home. If he was not mistaken, he had seen this guy nodding at Avni. So this was the man with whom she betrayed him. She had called him to handover him. The mere thought enraged him further. He moved towards the man only to be held back by the constables.

"shant hojao Kiran. Tumhara gussa mein samajh saktha hu. Par isme Avni ka koi dosh nahi hai. She was just trying to help you"

He gave out laugh that had full on sarcasm. "help me?? Kaise?? Police ke pas chodke?? I never expected this from her. Never. She betrayed me. Aur iskeliye mein use kabhi maf nahi karunga."

"thats your thought Kiran. Lekin hamara nahi. Mujhe patha hai, ke jo tum kar rahe ho, wo tumhare pure marzi se nahi hai. Koi majburi hai. Apne beti keliye paise chahiye. Isliye kar rahe ho na? Hamare sath do Kiran. I promise, mein tumhe kam se kam saza dilwa dunga. You can be a free man. Wapas apne pariwar ke sath ji sakthe ho"

"kaunse pariwar? jo mujhpe viswasghat kiya? I am sorry officer. Mere koi pariwar nahi hai. Jo karna hai karlo"

The officer, Sameer Rathod, stood infront of him. "kash tum hamare bath samajhne ke koshish karthe Kiran. Kash... tum ab jiss admi keliye kaam kar rahe ho, use tum mila thak nai hai. Bas unke kuch logonse mile ho. Wo jo upar hai, wo sabkeliye thabahi hi plan kiya hai. Tum bas ek mohra ho. Tumhare hone se ya na hone se kuch nahi badlega. So choose your side wisely."

"ab mujhe choose karne ko kuch bacha nahi hai officer. Kuch bhi nai..."

Rathod knew that was the end of discussion. A man came to cell and called back Rathod. He left after giving a meaningful look at him.

The whole night none came to question him. He was all alone in the cell, with protection outside. He couldn't cry. Still there was pain all over in his chest.

He had just hacked a few sites for some men. He knew what he was doing was illegal, as the material that he was collecting were of the undercover officer's identity stored in much secured channels. And other official information. But he had to do it. Anjali needed proper treatment. And Avni...

He ceased the thoughts. All the way long, he was feeling cheated by her. Why Avni? Why did you do it?

Next morning, Rathod came in. He could see a change in the officer's attitude. He was angry, upset and irritated. He came to the cell with another officer.

"tumhare case ab ye handle karega. Tumhe yaha se lejarahe hai"

He could clearly read that the officer was not happy with the decision. The new officer grabbed him by the collar and punched at his stomach. He bent down feeling the pain. "ye kya kar rahe ho officer?" Rathod had barked.

"ye tho khatirdari ke shuruath hai... aage aage dekho Rathod, kaise hum sare sach ugalwathe hai... tum fikar math karo. Tumhare Mumbai me aane ke baad ye pehle case tha na? Case hath se jathe waqt bura tho lagega hi. Koi bath nai, iss sheher me case ke koi kami nahi hogi. Ab chal..." he dragged Kiran out of the cell. Before going he looked at Rathod. There was a tinge of helplessness over there in his face.

He was in a van with 2-3 guards. He didn't know where they were taking him. There was another jeep in front with the officer and others. After sometime, the trip stopped due to some block in the road. From nowhere came gun shots, and the last thing that he remembered was a man with a mask breaking opening the backdoor of the van, and hitting him with a gun's butt.

He jerked as the SUV stopped. They had reached the destination.

***

Karan, Simi and Arjun had a guest at "home". Anjali was there to stay for 3 days. Simi was excited as she was thinking of getting a company to speak, while Karan banged his head hearing about it. The kid was always hell bent to annoy him. But still he liked her. And Arjun was as usual in his I-don't-care attitude.

After constant nagging from Anjali and blackmailing that he don't have guts to play against the "real opponent", Karan was now sitting opposite Arjun with a chess board in between them. Simi and Anjali were spectators. But Simi got bored and was now concentrating on helping up her nails, giving some absurd comments at times. Karan knocked out Arjun's rook from his way and smiled triumphantly. "ye gaya ek aur... ab tumhe patha chala Chashmish ke hum bhi kisise kam nahi?"

Anjali banged her forehead with her palm. "kahi se ye suna hai, Mr. Karan ke over confidence is injurious to health"

"kyu?"

"kyunki, agle 4-5 moves me aap haarne wale ho"

"ja ja... kuch nahi hone wala"

"aur agar mein shart rakhu tho?"

"rakhlo... aaj agar mein jeeth gaya tho tumhe wo karna hoga jo mein kahunga. Aur agar nahi jeetha tho thereliye ek pizza, extra cheese wala. Manzoor?"

"double manjoor. Simi di, aaj dinner math banao. Mujhe pizza milne wali hai"

"ab dekhtha hu kisse overconfidence hai. Chal Shera, ab there move hai"

Arjun was looking at the banter. He has to bear it for 3 days now. "hogaya bathein? Ab mein shuru karu?"

Karan nodded him to go ahead. As predicted by Anjali, by the 5th move Arjun won the game. Karan was open mouthed at the sudden change. He had everything in his grasp till the last moment. Then what happened?

"chakravyuh" Anjali answered his unasked question. "chakravyuh suna hai? Mr. Arjun ne wahi kiya hai. You were caught from all side, par tumhe patha bhi nahi chala. Well played Mr. Arjun."

He nodded agreeing it. "pizza ka ek share mujhe bhi chahiye" he proclaimed. He really enjoyed Karan's expression at that moment.

"haye rabba... ek kaam karna, har roz ye game khelna. Thab mujhe kisi din dinner banane ka zaroorath nahi padega." Simi was happy at the result.

"tum kehne kya chahthe ho? Ke mein kabhi nahi jeethega?" Karan was upset.

"jo samajhna ho, samjhlo" she walked in giving a high five to Anjali.

***

Sikander was in his place trying to compose himself. His man nearby was observing him. "saab ek bath puchu? Aap uss Kiran ke manmani ko ithna kyu bhav derahe ho? Aise kya hai usme jo..."

He looked up silencing him instantly. "2 cheez. Jo tum logonke paas nahi hai. Akal aur wafadari."

The man went silent and walked out fearing further attack.

Sikander had heard about this guy 7 years back and about his arrest. He wanted him out as a tech expert back then was rare. He pulled certain strong strings so that the case went away from the new officer who was in charge. The attack was well planned and took away Kiran from Mumbai and hid him from the world for more than a year. He wanted everyone to forget that name and identity.

In the hide, his men informed about this man. He was a being with a hidden fire. It took a long time to get him to speak something. He was sober and angry all the time. But in mean time he was trained by his men. Soon they knew he was a gem. His shooting skills proved it well.

After one and half years of training and hiding, he was taken out abroad through secured channel. He was given work and all the distraction possible. Again this man surprised all.

Kiran never touched drugs or liquour. He never let any girl near him. But he proved faithful to what he was given. He was a man devoid of feelings. He had a fire inside. Only they had to pour oil at the right moment. 2 and half years after his escape from that police van, Sikander met him. The men around knew that now Kiran was going to be a marked man, as the boss was never so keen to meet anyone. He met only the best. And so was Kiran. And on that day, Kiran surprised the boss by another notch. He kept a decision. He didn't want any work related to drugs or ladies. He will be there when he wanted for any other work. The boss smiled and shook hands.

Only now he was getting to know how strong Kiran and his ideas were. If he was not as loyal as now, he would have reached his grave for his attitude. But now it was time. Its time to break him up little by little to show his right place. A wounded tiger should not be left open for long time.

The trip to Mumbai was just a beginning.

***

It was almost midnight. Arjun was on his favourite position, above the car, leaning onto the window pane. He was thinking about Sree's call few days back.

"Sir... Sree here"

He was silent for a while. "I know you are there sir... kuch bologe nahi?"

"ab bolne keliye bacha kya hai Sree? Meine sab kuch khatam kar diya hai na?"

"aise math boliye sir..."

"tho tumhe kya lagtha hai?"

Sree waited silently for a while. "uss rath Liza ne call kiya tha mujhe..."

"wo mere sawal ke jawab nahi hai Sree"

"usne bohot bath ki thi..." Sree continued ignoring his question again. Arjun waited silently for him to continue. "abhi bhi samajh me nahi araha hai Sir, ke ye sab kaise hua? Uss din aapka thabiyath teekh nahi thi na?"

"hm..."

"aur wo video,jo police ke paas tha... wo unhe kaise mila? Jithna mujhe patha hai, office ke ander ke koi bhi video bahar jane ka rasta nahi hai."

"tum kehna kya chahthe ho?"

"koi ander se khela hai Sir... bohot badi khel khela hai. Baki sabko aapne arrest karwa diya. Wo hi bach gaya."

Arjun sat silent. Indeed he hadn't thought about it before.

"sir, kuch karna hoga. Ye patha karne ke actually kya hua tha..."

"isse ab kya milega Sree?"

Sree waited for some time. "I can't believe it. Ye aap mujhse puch rahe ho..."

"ab sab kuch badal gaya hai Sree. Kuch bhi bacha nahi hai. Jiss system ko meine sabse zyada maana, usne hi dhoka diya. Aur mujhe bas ek naam diya. Wo jo apne team ke bali chadaya. Jisse bhi apne paas rakhne ka koshish kiya usse sab meine... khair... acha hua tum dono pehle hi nikal gaye... warna mein tum dono ko bhi..."

"sirf wo log sab nahi sir... hum sab mit chuke hai. hai na?"

Arjun didn't reply.

"aur sabse zyada chot tho aapko hi laga hai... mujhe patha hai." Again Arjun sat silent.

"please apne aapko dosh math dijiye sir. Agar hum sab mile tho shayad wo sare bath bahar asakthe hai"

"ye sab pehle Rathod se kehne ke baad call kar rahe ho mujhe?"

"nahi sir, Rathod sir se meine ab thak iss mamle me bath nahi ki hai. Mujhe laga pehle aapse bath karlu. I want to meet you, Sir. Thab jaake mein kuch kar saktha hu. Mujhe ek bar firse office jaana hai."

Arjun waited for a while. "Sir..." Sree tried to probe again.

"Mujhe thode time chahiye Sree. I will call you back"

The call ended soon.

But he never called back. He wanted to call back, but something was stopping him.

He heard a voice behind him and saw Anjali. "kya hua? Soye nahi ab thak?"

"neend nahi arahi hai. Aur Simi dib hi so gayi. Tho socha aapke paas au." She sat on the long couch keeping her legs on it. "aap bhi soye nahi?"

He nods no. She looked away. "mumma ko bohot miss kar rahi hai. Pehli baar unse dur hu na? Mujhe patha hai, wo bhi soye nahi hoge."

"call karo"

"try kiya. Out of coverage area me hai" she sat silent.

He watched her intendly. "ek bath puchu Anjali?" she nodded yes.

"tumhare papa kaha hai?" he saw her face turning gloomy. He wished he had never asked it. "sorry. Agar tum nahi kehna chahthe ho tho..."

"nai aisa koi bath nahi hai. Mumma ne bathaya hai mujhe. Papa bhi bohot ache computer expert the. Par wo kuch galath kaam kiya. Phir..."

"fir?"

"fir... police ne pakad liya. Par wo farar hogaya... par Mumma ne kaha hai ke wo buri nahi hai. Bas kuch galath kaam me bhas gaya tha..."

He saw her speaking dreamily about her dad. He felt sad for her. "meine Papa ke photo dekhi hai... bohot ache hai..." she smiled sadly facing him. He smiled back. She leaned onto the headrest of the couch. Slowly she changed the topic to her mumma. How she worked and about their masti. And then she drifted to sleep.

Arjun watched the girl sleeping soundly. He got down and took her in his arms. She shifted herself in her sleep and clutched his T-shirt. He took her to his room and placed her on the bed. He tucket a blanket and placed his palm over her forehead. She went to a sound sleep and then he walked out. The car top was inviting him again for the night.

***

It was noon when Kiran noticed the same jeep that he saw last day. He silently followed it keeping a good distance from it. It stopped in front of a garage.

Kiran stood away to watch the place. Arjun walked out from the jeep. And on the way was Karan who was repairing a car keeping its front part open. Anjali was beside him sitting on the stack of tyres. Arjun ruffled Anjali's hair and walked into the garage.

Kiran was watching his kid from away. She was munching an apple and talking to the guy who was repairing the car. A smile came to his lips watching her animated talks.

Anjali saw Karan rubbing his hand in the shirt and taking potato chips from the packet to his mouth.

"ewww... gandi gandi hath se khate ho? Acha hua Mumma ne nahi dekha. Aapko issi waqt thapad marthe..."

"theri mumma hai bhi Hitler. There Mr. Arjun ke tharah"

"na...meri Mumma tho bohot sweet hai. Aur Mr. Arjun bhi ache hai. Par aap...eww..."

"oye zyada chehra math bana. Hath uthna bhi ganda nahi hai." He looked at his hand. There were some black marks over there. She eyes angrily at him.

Kiran saw it from a distance. She was just like her mom. But then he knew he should go away. He didn't want to put her in danger because of him. He knew his boss can at any time put anyone behind him. He didn't have a baggage of relation till now. That was his best plus point. And he didn't want to change. He once again looked at his daughter and turned to reach his bike which was a bit away. He was about to start when he felt a tap on his shoulder.

A young man was there. "excuse me bhai saab. Yaha aas paas koi garage hai?"

The newcomer felt the man was looking him head to toe, before pointing to the opposite side to a distance. The young man smiled. "thanks"

But he didn't return the smile. He put on the helmet and drove away.

The young man felt it a bit weird. He shrugged and walked to the pointed direction. As he reached there, he was feeling a bit tensed. How will he be welcomed? He had come unannounced.

The kid noticed him first. She might have recognised him. "Mr. Karan..." she called up. The othe man also peeped at him. Now he came forward. "aap yaha?"

"hi... Arjun Sir hai?"

There was silence for a second and then...

"Sree?? Tum yaha kya kar rahe ho??" Arjun was surprised to see him there.

Edited by kunchu - 11 years ago
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And Res by a stalker ... I don't care if I came in between ur posts 😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈
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Hmmm... Kiran in a shock ... 😳😳
Kiran's POV about that incident ... Arjun's state ... thought about Anjali being with Arjun... and possibility that his task in Mumbai might be finishing off Arjun ... the mere thought that Anjali might see her dad as a murderer scaring him ... was beautifully written 👏👏👏👏
Poor Kiran ...
The flashback of Kiran and Rathod was lovely ... totally as I expected 👏👏👏👏
So that other officer who was given the case was on Sikandar's payroll ... and Poor Kiran became the victim of this conspiracy ...
I have a little doubt ... will tell u in chat 😉
Wow ... Pizza party ... Smart Anjali ... Dumb Karan and Hero Arjun ... and cute Simi 😆😆😆
It was really scary the way Sik turned a simple boy next door into a deadly cold blooded murderer 🤢🤢
Shree is set with everything ... just waiting for Arjun's nod to go ahead ... their conversation was another beautiful piece ...
The little Anjali-Arjun conversation was so warm ... I simply loved Anjali's strength of character... she didn't shy away from talking about her dad ... She opened up with Arjun ... and after sharing the required information, she changed the topic and talked about her bonding with her mumma 🤗
This part scared me as I related Kiran's POV and Anjali's thoughts about her dad ... what will happen if Anjali sees her dad now
Eeessshhh!!! Kiran stalking Arjun and Anjali ... poor man ... cant help it
Anjali - Karan banter was fun to read 😆😆😆
Ahhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! now this last part gave me butterflies in the stomach ... bas ab yehi baki reh gaya tha ... 😳😳
Shree - Kiran aamna saamna ... definitely this will come up sometime later 😳😳😳
So finally Shree pahuch gaya ... hmmm
Waiting for next part 😉
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Firstly, I have no idea if I should call kiran an evil or wronged by destiny.
You have written his character brilliantly.
This is the only monster I sympathise with

Flashback: Poor sameer, He was trying to help kiren but only got " Baba ji thulla" in return.
Well, all I can say is "Welcome to the real world sameer"😔
If Kiren was not in direct contact with sikender before then y sikander took a great risk to free this guy??😕

"Karan, Simi and Arjun had a guest at "home". "
Though it was a short line but quotation mark on word home said it all. I don't know how you manage to write such things in such a simple way.

It was a mood lightener part in such a complicated & mystery filled update.

"Its time to break him up little by little to show his right place. A wounded tiger should not be left open for long time.

The trip to Mumbai was just a beginning."


My take on para above: I think the breaking part is related to kiran's family. As they are his only weakness. Do correct me, if wrong.


Flashback 2: Shree still has the guts to roar in front of " Zakhmi sher" 😆


"I can't believe it. Ye aap mujhse puch rahe ho."

"It is impossible to suffer without making someone pay for it; even if you have to die thousand deaths everyday to make it happened" I think that is the only thing which can re-unit RR & compel Rawte to take the notice on the past happenings.


Arjun-Anjali convo was so cute.

Arjun is getting TOO attached to her. It may lead him to bad consequences in future.

What will happened to Anjali when she will ever( or if) get to know the real face of her father.

about Arjun, (who she looks up as her father figure) what will be his reaction when he will get to know about her real father & his involvement in Rosh's murder. I know he will not get bitter to anjali. But she surely will suffer because of the rift between two most important person in her life.


Waiting for Shree's direct convo with Arjun.


PS. I intentionally left my views or prediction on a certain part,or an important hint.

I thought you might wanna keep it wrapped till the right time.😉




Edited by laila1994 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update👏
Loved the chess play👍🏼
so it was sikander who had freed kiran from the jail...
the flashback was nice..
arjun anjali convo was nice...

so shree has come to meet arjun...
continue soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update di👏👏
kiran's fb was nice
sikander😡😡
bechara Karan- Arjun ko haraana mushkil hi nahi na mumkin he😉😆😆
karan ko chess aata he ya sikh raha tha??😲😉😆
Shree still trusts Arjun😊
Arjun-Anjali' convo👏
Karan-Anjali's convo was 😆😆😆
Shree met Kiran!!
waiting eagerly for Shree n Arjun's talk
thankx for pm
continu soon



Edited by Godly_Affection - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update...
Sikander helped Kiran that's why Kiran is helping him...
Love the chess game...😆😆😆
What is Sikander upto???😕😕😕
Arjun-Shree was nice...
Anjali know about his father...😲😲😲...poor kid...
Feeling bad for Kiran...
Shree came...😲😲😲
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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