Fiction Arjun: Reborn from Ashes. Chapter 22, p.50

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sonai

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Posted: 11 years ago

#341

wow!! what an update.. Just mindblowing...
Bahot dino k bad update mili
Arjun di k pass tha raat ko.uski seva karne k lia..
Samy & shree ne plan banarahi hay record dhound ne k lia
Updatw soon yaar.😊

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

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Posted: 11 years ago

#342

Loved it atisha awesome update

Rawte style main Mangesh ka interrogation was fab

arjun taking care of di 😃

loved how shree & sameer trying to find out things

DI & her banters to cyte

I a 28 yrs old not 28 months it was awesome & good one

lets see aage kya hota hai

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 😊

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Delusional Minx

@Delusional_Minx

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Posted: 11 years ago

#343

awesome update di

loved it

mangesh ko rawte style me interrogate kiya..😆maza aa gaya😆pehle heat..phir deep fry🤣

he blurted out everything!😆billah..anik's friend..to usne hi sab kuch karwaya..i doubted it😉

disha having fever..simi taking care n then arjun..so sweet😃😳

disha neend me kya badbada rahi thi??😕jaldi batana😊

rathod in confusion..disha ko mail kare na kare..kahe to kya..hehe..aur last me kuch bhi nahi kiya😆😆

shree ko bula liya..sam missing arjun..then the battle between mind n heart..kab samjhenge..they still care for each other..what a friendship 👏👏hats off to them! par dil he ke maanta nahi😉😆baat bhi nahi karenge😡

chalo..got a lead..devil ka naam to pata chala..dishari..ab confirm karna he..officers na batane ki kasam kha ke baithe he..aur ye dono pata karne ki😉😆 ab dekhte he S&A me kya milta he

ye koun banda tha..rathod-shree ki baate sun raha tha?? i'm guessing someone!😉

arjun-dishari..shre ko sava-sher mil gaya😆28 saal ki hu..28 mahine ki nahi😆😆

arjun embarassed😆poor he!😉😆

thankx for pm di!

waiting eagerly for next update..continu soon😊

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dinazz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#344

superb update.

some parts were hilarious🤣

arjun taking care of Di.!!

cont soon dear.

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misakiscarlet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#345

wonderful update
contd. soon
thnx for pm

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Snehajain

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Posted: 11 years ago

#346

Awesome update...

That Mangesh...I feel pity for him...😆😆😆

Arjun did Di's care ...😃😃😃

Simran knows when Arjun needs his chai...😆😆😆

Hope Rathod & Shree find something...

So Di was I & E...😕😕😕

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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Snehajain

@Snehajain

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Posted: 11 years ago

#347

Originally posted by: Shamsad1607
Replies :
@ Sneha...nahi bataunga😛...Arjun asked Karan na...phir vi nahi samjhi?? ek kaam karro Arjun se hi puchlo😆

Mujhe abhi bhi samajh nahi aaya...😕😕😕

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laila

@laila1994

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Posted: 11 years ago

#348

It was a hilarious update.

First part was more of a filler.

Second part was Damn hilarious.

Karan-Arjun's dialogues were out of the world.😆😆

Billah: Another guy.

I am still not getting why you added this case in your FF. will it lead to something or was it random choice?😕

I believe in first one. I will wait & see.

Third part was superb.

Arjun's care for Di & simi felt natural & humane.

I must say you are the most sensible writer I have came across on IF.

The way you describe human relations without using any cheezy scene & dialogue is one of the things which holds me captive to your stories😊.

Fourth part:

Yayyy. Rathod missed Arjun😃

Poor guy is still confuse about Sakshi's existance.😆

Devil is giving a hard time to Shree-Rathod😆

If I am not wrong The other man on the beach was Raghu sir. Afterall he was the one who used to come on beach to see RR.😳

last part was really funny.

You always leaves the punch line in the end. It's your trade mark😆😆

PS. Now I have to read my all previous comment to know what have I revealed.

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prachi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#349

Hey
Hope u r njoyng new job...😊
nycupdate
nw rathore nd shree gonna b theif .. Chief ki info. director k cabin se nikalne k liye ...hehe
well dishari k bare mein humein tk samajh agya..hope Arjun nd rathore vll also knw abt it soon.
Nd wait...who's d third prsn on beach???!

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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

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Posted: 11 years ago

#350

great part
loved it
Sam is still concerned about Arjun
So ab Sam and Shree are planning to steal the info about Devil
LOL police chor ban gaye😆😆
waiting for the next part
continue soon