Fiction Arjun: Reborn from Ashes. Chapter 22, p.50 - Page 32

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Posted: 11 years ago
wow kya action drama tha 😃
first part was nice sam and shree trying to find identity of the chief but still have'nt succeded
but best was second part some one trying to kill DI in karan's garage 😲
thank god for anjali who called arjun on time and he saved both of them
arjun scolded DI 😉
and anjali also giving SYS to DI 😆sangat ka asar 😛
thanks for pm but chief ka raaz kab khulega ❓🤔

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsm update
disha k bare mein CB mein koi baat kyun nhi krta...nf uska name bhi nhi lete...clear dis mystry soon dear.
Dat car vs send by Anik ri8?...aisa 3rd class kaam wo hi ktskta h...monstr.. . 😡
Thankgod Arjun vs der to save dem on tym 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Horror update esp. The last part of it..
Thank god arjun was there varna pata nahi kya hojata ..
Anik ka hi kaam hoga.. Ya usne khud kiya hoga ya kissi se karvaya hoga...
Coming to CB
why no one talks about disha aur aisa kya huva tha ki disha left CB
shree aur rathore apni poori koshish kar rahe hain dii ke baare me jaane ke liye lekin CB members are quite good at keeping secrets 😉
contd. Soon
thnx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank God Arjun saved her!
Par yeh Di character abhi bhi nahi samaj aa rahi hai mujhe
I still don't get it as to who she is...
Mystery yaar mystery!
Aur woh car!!!!
Aur yeh Shree aur Sam ke team members!
Arjun ka past always haunts him - kuch toh choot raha hai...
Mere dimaag se toh sab kuch choot raha hai!🤪

Jokes apart - really a damn good update!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Shree & rathod are trying really hard to know Chief's real ID
Something horrible happened with the team & Di was the only one who stood against it while everybody else abundant her...Let me congratulate you. Firstly I thought Humour is your "thing" But now I think you are best at suspense too👍🏼
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which Msgs Fernandes was talking about??
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Forensic report is finally here. I am wondering why Di didn't assigned Anik's case to her team??
Team bonding is praisable. But of course it is very much clear that something is aloof.
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DDT means Dichloro Diphenyle Trichloroethn
in short...it eats up brains.🤣🤣🤣
kitni baar pochon Kahanse lati ho ese Ideas?????
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Attack on Di.😲
That Anik is getting on my nerves. Now di & Arjun will not spare him easily.
Anjali is save & Di needs a Doctor. Hmmm Kuch to chot raha hai😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome atisha...shree and rathod trying to extract info about chief...but they failed miserably...everyone is hiding something i guess...even the gamekeeper..usse shree ko pakarna chahiye..😉😉

so anik knows about their visit and thus the attack on di..

it was discribed brilliantly buddy...👍🏼

di with a torn shirt?? arjun helped..arree wahh☺️☺️

loved anjali's threat..continue soon...thank for the pms..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 16:
interesting update..all 3 went to Mr. Mukherjee's home and got many details..
Anik is so cunning..and such a ..umm don't know what to say..
pocket money cancel kardi uski..very good..
but why will he put himself in trouble by killing Di..?😕
but nice part..thanks for pm.
Chapter 17:
Awesome update..loved the team convo..
but chief..what happened that 4 years are not to recover..? mystery mystery..😕
Garage scene was nice..pyar umar dekh ke nahi hota..jaise i love mr. Arjun..so sweet Anjali.. so the reports are here and proof that it was a planned accident..
shooting range convo was funny..and that line youtube se download kiya..🤣
Disha was attacked..who is behind this?thankfully Arjun saved both of them..hope she is fine..
thanks for pm and cont soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update!⭐️
Both shree & rathore are trying to get information abt the chief..👍🏼
the garage scene was beautifully depicted.. i could imagine it all happening... superb! 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
This anik is too sharp
direct marne bhej diya
but right girls kahin bhi shuru ho jati hai
waiting for next
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter Eighteen

In lounge.

All were present except Fernandez & Rathod. Sen & Banarjee joined them. As they settled, Veenita came with their coffee, and served everyone except Rao. Aiyar picked up his coffee & served him, he thanked her, making a grim face to Veenita.

Rao (Veenita) : Fernandez and Rathod ar working on some case files..they'll join us later.

Ansari : Where's Khan?

Rao : He's out... aaj Doctor ke saath appointment hain...

Sen : Anything serious?

Rao : nop...regular checkup ...tumhara kab hain?

Sen : Next week..

Rao (Veenita) Accha.! Mera vi hain..dono saath chalenge, ok?

Shree was surprised a bit, because she never goes out with others except Rao. No matter what, that couple always stick to each other.

Sen : With meee? why? Rao saath nahi aa raha?

Rao (Veenita) : Nahi..aaj se main iske saath kahin nahi jaungi!

Rao : Really? Someone pinch me please! Aiyar! Check my pulse...& my ears also...maine sahi suna na!

Rao (Veenita) : itna drama karne ki zaroorat nahi...kal toh khud hi keh rahe the na, mera babysitting karna tumko accha nahi laagta...toh yahan aur vi log hain mere khayal rakhne ke liye. What say, Ansari?

Ansari : Anything for you, yaar!

Rao : Oy! Tu friend hain..friend bane reh..sharam nahi aata tujhe? Mia-biwi ke beech main bolta hain?

Ansari : Main bas aapi friend ko support kia..

Rao : Haan...karo..tumlogone hi isko sarr pe charake rakha hain...jhelna toh sab mujhe padta hain na!!

Shukla : Correction, rao..hum log nahi..hum toh friwends hain bass masti karte hain...lekin vaaw deke aapni sarr pe to tumne charhaya na...aab tumse aapni biwi nahi saamhaalta toh...

Roa : Saalon! Karo karo...iski tarafdaari karo..meri friend aa jaye na toh tum sabki hawa nikal degi... Aur Ansari, tum..shadi karlo..phir pata chalega..aaj subha se ek cup coffee naseeb nahi hua..

Aiyar : Banake toh laayi hain...

Ansari : Lekin serve toh kisi aur ne kia na!( he winked)

Sen : Oh! Toh iss baat pe aap dono...

Rao : woh baat nahi hain..

Aiyar : Toh kya baat hain?

Rao (Venita ) Kuch nahi! (scolded Rao through her eyes) mujhe kuch reports digitize karni hain...Banarjee..I need your help...mere lappy main kuch connectivity problems ho raha tha..

Banarjee : Yup, let's go.

They left to the R&D section.

Ansari : Kis baat pe phir aap dono shuru ho gaye?

Rao : Nothing...it's just..

Shukla : Plz Rao, we all know you..you've always accompanied Khan for his health checkup..& today you missed it...kuch toh serious hain!

Rao : Kuch nahi ...

Shukla : Arre friends se kya chupana...bolo na!!

Rao : (flared up)Tum log sirf Veenita ki friend ho..mere nahi... (inhaled sharply & calmed down instantly)..choro... bohot hogaya personal baatain... Sen...

Sen : Kaam ki baat sirf mujhse hi kyun shuru hota hain!( made a face)

Rao : Informers ne kuch hotels ka naam dia hain...kuch bookings suspicious hain...dekhlo.

Sen : Main!!

Shukla : I'll do it...Sen will see the phone calls...

Rao :OK.

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Karan halted the car in front of his garage, and he was evidently surprised. He & Simi rushed inside and found the place deranged, only a chair, on which Arjun used to sit was remain entire, and Di was sitting on it, waring Arjun's jacket. Arjun and Anjali a sitting on a tire, and Arjun was besmearing antiseptics on her bruises.

Karan : Yeh kya hua!!

Di : tere garage ka satyanash!

Simran : Di..tum thik ho!

Di : Haan..chal ghar...I've to change.

Karan : You are hurt Di! Aab ais..

Di : plz..chang hi toh karna hain..aur yeh dirt vi clean karna hain..phir le jaan jaahan jaana ho..Simi! come.

She tried to get up..but this time Arjun didn't let her, he picked her up into his arms and asked Karan to drop Anjali at her home.

Karan : Ok..you guys be ready...I'll come back in a minute. Come anjali.

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Rathod was waiting for Rao near a road side tea stall. He has done his bit of investigation and send the findings to Rao, who replied "wait for 10 minutes, I'll be back in 20" but its almost 28 minute & Rao didn't show up. He was looking around, sipping his coffee, when he saw an antic dealer, sitting with a boy of early twenty's and discussing something. It was an argument more than a discussion. That boy looked frustrated, and that dealer was upset with him, may be he was threatening the boy. He ignored that spoiled brat and concentrated in his coffee.

Sombody patted his shoulder & he looked up.

Rathod : You are late.

Rao : Nop..I'm just in time...I said wait for 10 & I'll be back in 20..total makes 30 na? see the time...I'm here within 30 minutes, sharp.

Rathod : You are impossible!

Rao : I know...my Mrs. also says that. anyways...( he gestured the vendor to bring coffee) worked enough for today..now we can relax for some time na?

Rathod : hmm..found anything?

Rao : yup...set some watchers...if intelligence report is right, then we'll be lucky.

Rathod : We have another task in hand...case 1035...

Rao : Don't worry...I'm all set with my planning...bas meeting place confirm ho jaye...Khan's informer didn't call na..

Rathod : If you don't..

Rao : what are you ant to ask? About that Informer?

Rthod : No..khan told me...her name is Devil... weird nic name..

Rao : (smirked)She is more than weird, Rathod..ek number ki shaitaan hain...

Rathod : Yup I heard...She was in I &E...you saw her na?

Rao : hmm...those days...best days of my life...Anand sir & Dirctor Banarjee ka naak main dum karke rakhte the hum...specially Devil..but aapna kaam itna efficiently karr leti thi ki unhone kuch bolte vi nahi...lekin hum sab phas jaate the. She was a disaster..but puri team ki jaan thi who.

Rathod : Aisa kya hua ki she...

Rao : (sighed) purani baton se sirf purane zakham hara hota hain Rathod...jo vi hua..nahi hona chahiye tha... specially Farhaad ke saath...

Rathod : Farhaad?

Rao : Khan... he still loves her...inspite of knowing she won't return, he still does...Anyways...let's return...and Rathod yahan aas paas koi flower shop hain kya?

Rathod : Huh?

Rao : Meriwali ke liye hain...subha se nakhra karr rahi hain..manana toh padega na!

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Arjun put Disha down on her bed. She was under sedation. Doctor bandaged her fresh wounds..and checked the old ones...those werr not that bad, because of the bandage. Karan asked the doctor to give Di sedatives as she won't take rest, and doctor agreed, he gave her high dose of painkillers, antibiotics and Sedative.

Simran tucked the bedsheet neatly around her. Arjun was standing near the window. Karan was sittind near di's leg.

Karan : Chalo..aab kuch der ke liye shanti mill gayee!

Arjun was thinking about the whole incident, he was recalling the attack he saw..& Di's condition...how she jumped to save anjali..then rolled under that shutter, as if she does it everyday..and the most pricking thing is..he felt something at the back of her neck...a mettalic thing...and his training & experience says...but how is it possible? She is a civilian!

Arjun : Karan? Di ke paas gun hain kya?

Karan : Haan...uski dad ki gun...but tu suddenly gun ke bare main kyun ?

Arjun : Nothing..come, let's go...teri garage ki haalat vi sudharna padga ..

Simran : Are you twe gonna stay there at night? (to karan)tera toh pata nahi..sadakchap hain..kahin vi reh lega... Lekin Arjun? Tum aapne room main kaise jaoge? Staircase toh toot gaya na?

Karan : Aur koi option hain?

Simran : Guest room hain yahan...main ready karr deti hoon...

Arjun : Let it be Simran..we'll manage..you take care of Disha. Come Karan.

They left.

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Karan and Arjun was trying to figure out the damage that car did to their garage.. the gate was half crushed, a wall had a deep fault, and the lower half of the staircase is broken.. they have to climb like monkeys to reach upstairs.

Karan was moving broken things aside..to clear a place to sit,Arjun also was helping him, while they heard a honk. They looked at the car and Arjun was shocked. That car returned!

The driver came out, it was another man in drivers uniform.

Drivr : Yeh garage ko kya hua?

Arjun : ( held that man by coller) Kya hua!! 2hrs before this car did this..& you are asking what happnd? Bol!! kyun kia yeh hamla?!

Drivr : Attack! Nahi nahi...there is a mistake..

Arjun : Haan..it's your biggest mistake of your life...returning here with that car..Karan..call the polic...this car attacked Di...

Karan : Haan..uski pehle yeh toh pata karle shera iske piche hain kaun?

Arjun shook that frightened man.

Arjun : Bata kiske kehne pe yeh kaam kia??aur jisko veja tha woh kaun hain?

Driver : (stammering) woh..actually...it's a misunderstanding...let me explain...

Karan : Shuru kar..

Driver : My boss..he sent the car at morning...but my daughter...she is unwell...usko stomachache tha..toh main car se usko hospital le gayee...bina Sir ko inform kiye..wahan doctor ne kahan..ke appndicites hain...& they have to operat immdiatly...so I had to stay there...but car vi yahan laana tha..toh main yahan aa raha tha...raste main medicines lene roka..aur wahan mera ek nighbour mil gaya...Mangesh. He said he'll deliver the car..I should go back to my daughter...toh main car usko deke chala gaya..

Arjun : Accha? Toh aab yeh car wapas tumhar paas kaise aaya?

Driver : woh mangesh..hospital aya..aur kahan ke woh car delivr nahi karr paya..gadbad karr di..garag ki gate tod dia...car pe vi scratches laga lia...aur car mujhe handover karke chala gaya...meri beti aab out of danger hain toh..maine socha deliver karr doon...par yahan toh...meri hi galati hain..uspe varosa karke..uske haaton car vejna hi nahi chahiye tha...aab toh mere Sir vi naaraz ho jayenge...

Karan : Accha thik hain..tum car yahan chor do...

Arjun : Aur mujhe uss mangsh se milna hain..kahan milga woh?

Drivr : Avi toh pata nahi..but he's rgular in sweety bar aftr 11.00pm. I'll take you there. Mujhe vi usse explanation chahiye...itna damage kiya hi kyun usne? Mere job ko risk me daal dia!!

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Rathod was uber-curious now, something happened four years back...& nobody wanna talk about it. There must be something big...khan & Rao...both know it..but they won't say anything..Fernandz...she also refused to talk about the old team...& director..he don't expect him to open up in front of his subordinat na!! he looked at the case file that team solved...they were the best of thir times..like ETF... but hat happened...did their chife took any wrong move that made thm pay..like his team did for Rawte? Or something big? From Fernandez..it's clear that seniors also involved in that incident...

His chain of thought was broken by Shukla. He came with a file.

Shukla : Rathod, Singh..he's no more... we have to call someone to take his place.

Rathod : (Took the file) this boy..Mane..he's good. Call him.

Shukla : Ok..main Singh ka desk morgue main send karr deta hoon.

Rathod : Kyun? Aren't we gonna snd his blongings to his family?

Shukla : Haan...but it'll take time..ghar se koi aayga claim karne ko...aur baaki case fil..informations woh sab ka vi khayal rakhna hoga, upar se kal Mane join karga toh usko vi desk dena padega na?

Rathod : Hmm...but Singh ke samman morgue main? Yeh kaise?

Shukla : In our basement..officially we call it Stores & Archives...but I love to call it the morgue! Saar scraps & old stuff ka godon hain woh!

Shukla left, giving Rathod an important information. Store! ..Rathod's gut feling said he gonna get something there.

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Simran called Karan-Arjun for dinner. And informed that di asked them to stay in her house at night..until the garage was rebuit.

Arjun protsted, but Simran's continuous plading & saying that di'll make her life miserable made him to agree. Simran happily went upstairs to fed Di with that good neqs.

After Dinner, Karan- Arjun went to se Di, who was leaning against the headrest and working on her laptop.

Karan : Yeh kya! Tu rest karne ki wajay..

Di : Bas kuch files dekhni thi...waise call hi kar leti..but garage main mera phone girgaya..mila kya?

Arjun brought out the phone from his pocket..it' was broken as that car ran over it.

Arjun : It's broken...you can't use it.

Di : It's ok..give me that phone...(she streched her hand & winched in pain)..Aargh!

Arjun : Don't move much...And shut down your laptop..you need rest.

Di : Rest!..yah..you're right!

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now..buddies..you know what to do..

Thank you ladies for your feedback. Sorry..Couldn't reply all individually. Stay tuned..and.. Love you too...

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