Ariya: Chori Chori Chupke Chupke~T-2.part 13: pg 20; note on 24 (1/10) - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
I read all the updates in one go. This story is really interesting.
Could you please pm me once you update next?
Good job once again👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
Waah waah kya baat h
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Awsum updt
Ariya romance
Ohhh freak sam saw both of dem
Ab kya hoga.
Updt soon
Thanxx fr pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
Superb update yar. ...
Poor arjun hurt n now ariya can't even live together coz sameer took arjun to his house...
But loved how liza understood their problem n helped rii in spending some time with arjun...
Ariya moments were lovely. .. but feeling bad for arjun.. poor guy is in so much pain n seeing his pain rii is hurt...
Woahhh.. sam found them in romantic position😉 ab kya hoga??? Ab the secret will be out or not???
Continue soon. .
Eagerly waiting for Sameer's reaction😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
Really good story! Keep it up!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75

Hey everyone...

Dis is a reply post ;) loads of hugs and kisses to all who have liked and commeneted... XOXOXO

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Sam ne in donon ko dekh lia to kya hua hoga??? Khus next part mein dekhlo ;)

Thanks for reading n liking di.. mwah


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* Vampire-queen: sacchi VQ I missed you... romance shomance to hote rahenge aur unme maza kab aayega agar ye tadka na ho?? ;) aage aage dekha hota hai kya!!!

And rishtey, I am working on it. Mere sister ke ghar mein I was writing this story only so I am bit late. I will post it soon as well...


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there i go... next part in few minutes... zyada der nahin karungi pakka..

Edited by princess_pari - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
hi everyone,... here is part 12 B you were waiting for...
oh yeah... i loved all the comments and thanks for being patient with me...
here goes part 12 B:

Sameer was about to call them when he heard riya's soothing voice.

"aap yahan baithiye. Main tablets leke aati hun. Bas 1 minute" to which Arjun just nodded and tried to lean back but again winced. Riya held him again and turned around to find a way to reach the tablets holding Arjun..

That's when she saw sameer standing there with his mouth open, anger in his eyes and palm in fist.

"sameer sir..." riya whispered and Arjun tried to lift his face from her stomach anticipating his friend angry outburst but groaned loudly this time due to pain. The effect of medicines had totally worn off and he was unable to move properly. Riya quickly composed herself and turned her head towards sameer.

"sameer sir. Wahan table ke corner mein Arjun sir ke tablets hai. Aap denge?"

"tum khud jaake kyun nahin leti riya?" anger visible from his words. He was looking at the INTIMATE' pose in which both Arjun and riya were made him forget Arjun in pain. Riya looked at him with fuming eyes and told him in stern voice.

"agar mujhse lene hota SIR to main aapse nahin kehti. Arjun sir peeche lean nahin kar pa rahe hai so I was trying a way to get medicines. Agar aapse medicines dene ke liye nahin hoga to I suggest ki aap yahan aake Arjun sir ko pakde ya phir bahar jaake kisi aur ko bulae jo meri madad kar sake. Samjhe ya samjhau?" by the end of the tirade, she was visibly fuming and Arjun smirked again her even when he was in pain.

Arjun MV: aagayi mrs.raute in action. Ouch... Agar mein dard mein naa hota to... Sameer ke bacche... pehle hi wo pareshaan hai, gusse mein hai aur tu aag mein ghee dalne ka kaam kar raha hai. Kaccha kha jaayegi wo tujhe.. aarrrghhh... mujh akele raute ko handle theek se nai kar paata aur wo to paidaishi mukherjee aur meri wajah se through and through raute hai. Isse kaise sambhalega tu beta. Uuughhh...

"o..ok...main deta hun" sameer shuttered. Why did she sound so much like...like Arjun!! He thought.

"wahan table ke end mein hai tablets. Jaldi haath nahinn chala sakte hai kya aap? Wo nahin. Dusra waala tablets. Haan. Jaldi. Paani wahan hai. Dijiye yahan" she almost snatched the tablet from his hand and helped Arjun lift his head and have tablet. "paani to pilaiye sir? Kya ye bhi mujhe aapko sikhana padega?" riya said in low tone making sameer wonder who the boss was.

After few minutes arjun's pain subsided and he leaned back on the chaise closing his eyes.

"aap thik ho?" riya asked him tenderly.

"thanks riya, and sorry... meri wajah se tumhe khamakha takleef..." Arjun said eyeing at sameer, trying to gauge his reaction.

"arre nahin. Aisa matt kahiye. Mujhe aise situations handle karna acchi tarah se aata hai au raise logon ko bhi(glaring at sameer). agar aapko kuch chaiye to koi bhi bekaar logon ko bulana matt. mujhe ya shree ko call kijiyega. Liza lab mein busy hai. To... main abhi chalti hun. Take care" riya smiled at him and again glared at sameer muttering in low tone just enough for sameer to hear

"insensitive jerk kahinka. Khudko sir ka dost kehte hai par unka dard samajh nahin aata. Aur hamesha mujhe daant te hai aur taunt maarte hai ke maano iske liye inko extra payment milta ho. Khadoos kahika. Shaitaan rathod"

All sameer could do was just stare at her retreating figure and turned towards smirking Arjun sporting a look of disbelief.

""ab bol saale... pata chala ki kyun kabhi ladkiyon ke muh nahin lagna chahiye? Aisha se shaadi ke baad bhi tu ye nahin samjha kya???" Arjun taunted at sameer shifting to a more comfortable position on the chaise. Sameer helped him out in doing so and spoke

"abbe yaar main bas tum donon ko aise dekh ke shock hogaya tha. Matlab tu use aise hug kar raha tha maano...

"maano ki dost ko gale laga raha tha"

"no. yaar sach bol. Riya tujhe pasand karti thi na? fir achanak uska aur shree ka relationship, aur tu itna casual behave kar raha hai, aur aaj tum dono itne intimate position mein the... I mean things don't really add up you know...aur tum donon ko aise dekh kar mujhe gussa aagaya tha. Sooo"

Arjun MV: aagaya saala apni aukat pe. Koi chahe kuch bhi karle rathod se uss police waale ko koi alag nai kar sakta. But yaar main agar tujhe chakma na doon to mein naam change kardoonga.

"arre yaar... yes main manta hun ki I am comfortable with riya and she is a real good friend with whom I can share my mind. Aur rahi baat un donon ki mujhe bhi nahin pata tha but I am really happy for them. Rahi baat aaj ki, to she was just helping me. And no need of seeing things otherwise. As I said I was in pain aur she was comforting me alright!! Agar tub hi uski jagah hota to shayad main aise hi karta aur shayad you would have freaked out" he smirked knowing fully well sameer's mind was set now to his made up story.

"jaisa tu kahe yaar.par tu ab theek to hai naaa?? Dard to nahin hai naa?"

"ab nai hai. Painkillers are really working well. Tu jaa yaar. Koi kaam nahin hai kya tujhe? Aise hi hume salary nahin milti hai samjha? Jo bhi time tu office mein rehta hai to tu sirf idhar udhar ghoomta hai yaa fir aisha se romance karte firta hai kamina"

"shut up yaar. Kya tu bhi laga rakha hai. Beta tu bhi shadi karle phir main bolunga aur tu sharmayega. Chal m going. Kuch chaiye to call kar. Mujhe aur aisha ko meeting mein jaana hai"

"meeting? Kahan???? Pantry mein, akele ya ghar mein?" Arjun teased again.

"tera replacement hai wo iss meeting mein samjha?"

"hai raam? Tu mere saath??? Chee... Tu shadi shuda hai aur main seedha saadha. Aisha kya sochegi. Sameer tu aisa nahin tha!!!!" Arjun made a mock horror face and teased him again.

"kutte teri to main..." sameer curled his fingers around his imaginary neck and made action of strangling him. Arjun laughed out loud and motioned him to go.

"bye sam. Enjoy the meeting"

Sameer just shook his head and went.

*

It was almost 6 and all the work in ETF for the day was done and both sameer and aisha had not returned from the work. Riya decided to take Arjun to her house but she was not sure about sameer's reaction that too after what he saw in the cabin in the afternoon.

"riya, agar tu unke bare mein zyada sochegi na, to tu sir ke saath time spend karne chod de. Ek kaam kar. Sir ko phone kar aur bol kit u Arjun sir ko apne ghar leja rahi hai"

"par wo..."

"poori baat to sunn meri maa. Unse bol ki Arjun sir ko tu apne ghar le jaa rahi hai aur tere saath shree aur main chal rahe hai. Arre baba(looking at her fuming face) main aur shree bhi isi bahane thoda time spend karenge yaar. I promise ki main aur wo aap donnon ke beech haddi nahin banege. Ab tu phone kar"

"par sir agar agaye to?"

"sir nahin aayenge aur naa hi aisha. Unki meeting der tak chalne waali hai aur shayad kal bhi continue ho. To fikar not and call him..."

Riya just nodded at shree and liza and dialed sameer's number glancing at Arjun,shree and liza who were giving her encouraging nods.

"hello... sir?"

"haan riya bolo" sameer said confused. What work did she have to call him at this time? God's sake he was busy in meeting.

"sir main Arjun sir ko apne ghar le jaa rahi hun" riya was precise and curt.

"what? Why? I mean no. main aake Arjun ko apne ghar le jaaunga samjhi?"

Riya's mind was set on fire when sameer said those words about keeping her and Arjun away from each other. Maana ki sameer aur aisha jaante nahin hai par...phir bhi yaar do pyaar karne waalon ko juda karna paap hai. She huffed and spoke

"sir, if you have even an ounce of thing called brain functioning in your head, then I advise you to check the time and I am not asking you if I can take him, but telling you that I am taking him home along with shree and liza. Sir already car paas hai aur hum teeno milke sir ka khayal rakhenge."

"riya listen. You are unmarried and it's not good to take Arjun to your home. Log kya kahenge? No"

"sir log kya kahenge iska mujhe parvah nahin hai aur naa hi aapko hona chahiye. Aur haan. Ye decision maine, shree aur liza ne milke liya hai aur mere ghar mein shree aur liza bhi honge mere saath jab tak sir mere ghar mein rahenge. To sir, take care and aisha aur chotu se bhi kahiyega goodnight."

And with that Mrs.Riya Arjun Rawte cut the call of ETF Chief Sameer Damsingh Rathod.

Shree opened and closed his mouth like a goldfish trying to formulate words at riya's outburst. Liza smirked at her and gave a thumbs up to Arjun who was openly grinning at her.

"ri, ye kyat ha? Wo humare boss hai yaar aur tu unhe hi aise..." Shree tried to put his feelings in words.

"shree, usne aaj sameer ko zinda choda hai wohin badi baat hai. Jaante ho aaj dopahar jab riya mera bandage change kar rahi thi, sameer ne hum donon ko hug karte hue dekh liya tha." Arjun grinned.

"Arjun sir aur riya?? Phir kya hua?"

"I was in pain aur sameer ne ek second ke liye madad nahin kiya. To riya ne uska rang utar diya." Arjun said laughing when riya helped him in the passenger seat.

"maine kuch nahin kiya Arjun." Riya said with a pout and a frown.

"haan shree,liza... siwaye sam ko glare karneke, insensitive jerk, khadoos, raavan rathod kehneke, aur kuch nahin kaha haina riyu?" Arjun laughed and riya just huffed and puffed at him and shriza who were laughing.

*****


kya laga??? itni jaldi sameer ko pata chalega??? as arjun said, riya is mukherjee +Rawte. itni aasaani se koi uske saamne kaise tikega bhai??? ;)

accha laga??? then like and comment please :D

to be continued soon...


P.S.: next part readers discretion advised.

Edited by princess_pari - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome.. Love it.. Mrs. Rawte ne sameer ki chutti kardi.. Really quite funny.. Sameer was damm confused.. Interesting.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awwwsssmmm part
Loved it
Supperbbb...
Poor Sam...
Cont sooon
Thanks for PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Go riya go

Go riya go

This is the real mrs riya arjun rawate...

Jo sam ko bhi bachhe ko jaise datate hai waise daat sakati hai...

I love this..*evil smile*

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome fab fantastic update
loveitt
thanks for pm
cont soon

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