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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Congo for the New thread dear 🤗

Amazing update n beautiful one

Loved the SYS session of arjun to rathore

He played a big role to unleash the loin in him to good 👏👏

Loved Aishas entry too

chalo dono dost case ke bahane kareeb a gaye 😉

OMG aishas Accident 😲 ab to sameer chodega nahin that sushma 😡

Continue soon

n thanks for the Pm 😊

N before I foget

Banner is awesomne👏

Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago

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ariyabestfan

@ariyabestfan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Congratulations for new thread.. The update was awsome.. Love the way arjun samzaoying sam.. They found that sam is weekness of sush..n she want that sam leave this case.. What the..??aayesha's accident..? Plz continue soon.. Thanks 4 pm

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rimi

@rimi_invisible

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Radhikerani
Congatulations For The New Thread ! The Update Also Was Very Beautiful !

thanks dear...stay tuned 😊

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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Congrats for the new thread
Awesome update
loved it
loved Arjun-Sameer convo
I hope Aisha is fine
waiting for the next part
continue soon

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kunchu

@kunchu

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

congrats for the new thread
liked the way how Arjun brought back Sam
par Sakshi kaha ja rahi hai?
waiting for next part

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Maya

@Harshamara

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Superb updt.
So sameer is not leaving d case.
Luv Samjun convo.
Omg aisha's accident...
Cont soon.

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misakiscarlet

@misakiscarlet

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

first of all the new banner iz awesome ...
update was amazing..
omg ayesha met with an accident i hope its nothing serious
at last sameer undrstood his importance in d case...
arjun smiling would have been wondrfull...
overall loved the update..
thnx for pm

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Bhavna Antriwale-Gargate

@bgargate

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

The part where Sameer opens up about his past with Aisha was nice 👍🏼... But I believe it had a lot of scope for detailing because Sameer-Sushma's past is the base of this entire story ... it is the foundation on which whole story rests... the case, the clues, the answers of all the questions are hidden in this part 😊 ... I guess at least one more layer could have been opened here, may be something that Aisha catches which could be useful for the case ... 😉 ... but again there is a flip side... u cant reveal too much at this stage ... else the suspense might go off ... so its up to you how you want to reveal it ... layer by layer slowly ... or with a bang giving a single zor ka jhatka 😉

Now this is interesting ... very interesting 😉 ... Sameer trying hi best to go away but finally Arjun and Aisha convinced him to stay back 😉 ... at once I found it unbelievable to think The ETF Chief Sameer Rathore as a weak person ... but connecting with his past ... it was convincing ... just to add the effect... u could have added some flashback scenes flashing in Sameer's mind 😉

Overall good going 👏

But ye kya... Aisha's accident? 😲 ... was it deliberately done?

waiting for next part 😊

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

like button not working di..
ty for d pm..
check ur too lolz..
update it..
congo new thread..
Samjun bro rocks..
beautiful frndship..
missing...
ayesha too gud!!
Sushma upto..

Tiger back in action ..

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rizwanaa

@rizwanaa

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

congrats for new thread
the update was awesome
Arjun n Sameer convo was amazing
n also wonderfully written
glad Arjun made him realize the importance
of his involvement in this case
n also Aisha's encouraging words
were superb as well
so finally the chief is back in action
but last sequence was scary
hope Aisha get wells soon
thanks for pm
cont soon

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