Arakshi SS - The World Through Your Eyes - UPDATED Pg 33 - *Complete*

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angle1shanu

@angle1shanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

superb dear...

the way u describe the fellings...

thoughts of ...

both..are just awesome...

hope..ke sab thik ho...

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kunchu

@kunchu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

just passed across the story when I was bored.

the name caught the attention

and it went on and on...

its so smooth

nothing over the board

just beautiful lines

very good dear

want to read the next part too

continue soon

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PoohLover

@PoohLover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#103

First of all am completely fida with this line of yours " I might be her eyes, but she is my vision"

Thats sooo beautiful yaar..looove it 👏 👏 👏 👏👏 👏 👏👏 👏 👏

Awesome blossom update..am actually falling out of words because the update was fantastic ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

Please please continue soonish please please 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Thank you sooo sooo much rituuu for the update and pm 🤗 🤗

Edited by PoohLover - 11 years ago

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Ritu Dang

@coolRD

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Posted: 11 years ago

#104

it ws a vry swt upd8..

d mind views of bth arjun nd sakshi ws beautifully writn

I jst luvd it

continue soon

nd thnx 4 d pm

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Shezi19

@Shezi19

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Posted: 11 years ago

#105

I read all four part now in one go
I must say it's amazing yaar
The way you portrayed the feeling of blind person
It's very touchy
The way Arjun console her
I love it now, I curious to know what happen next?
I really looking forward them after operation
Do continue soon

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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Posted: 11 years ago

#106

And finally I'm here.. 🤗

My dear, you have no idea how overjoyed I was, when I saw your 1st PM for this one..

But curse my hectic work schedules and migraines.. Anyhow, I'm slightly better now and here I go!

Rituuu.. Honestly I'd be lying if I say Chalte Chalte was my favorite work of yours. This one takes the cake, for me personally. I know we can't be partial to our babies, but there's something about this one that makes me smile each time I read it.. 😃

And just for that, you deserve a louder applause and soo much more praise. Amidst the mushkil prem kahanis and anger-hatred turned to love stories (No offense to anyone, I love some of them to bits, including mine) 🤪, but for some reason, all your works seem like a soothing balm. 😳

I don't know if I'm making sense here, but you've transformed something so sad and tragic into a beautiful and magical tale that I cannot praise you enough ever. And trust me, I mean it. ❤️

Arakshi's relationship has come a long way since their first meet. The bond that had formed between the two strangers, later developed into friendship and very soon, they shall embrace the most pure emotion on earth, hopefully!

That's what this fic is about, I suppose. Hope and lots and lots of magical moments.

I love the way your Arjun never pities her or isn't too protective of her, despite her disability. He indeed is her pillar of strength, if I may say. And of course, her eyes through which she's been seeing the world until now.

Sakshi, just like all your previous versions is a mature girl, vulnerable yet so very strong and independent.

The last chapter gives me hope too. The way he eased her anxiety and his too, was super adorable.

I hope the surgery goes on just fine, without any complications and she's able to gain her vision back..

The story now stands on the verge of a new beginning. And I am most definitely one of the eager ones, waiting for it to unfold.

Please write more soon. Needless to say, waiting!

Take a bow, my dear. You've woven magic with this one.. 👏

Love it so far..

P.S. You have no clue what Marine Drive does to one on lonely and dark nights. Sigh! The mere sight and sound of waves hitting those huge rocks and the salty air calms your frenzied nerves.

You gotta experience it to know it. And I hope you have..

Just for that, you get one more biiig 🤗 from me.. 😳

Edited by _Mohabbatgirl_ - 11 years ago

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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

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Posted: 11 years ago

#107

Hi Ritu,
Avantika introduced this FF of urs to me & after reading all the 4chaps i guess i should thank her😃

Firstly i loved the title of your's.It actually summarizes the entire fic in just few words.You have so beautifully slated down their POVs that at some point of time it felt like the scenes are playing right infront of my eyes It was sheer magical my dear😳

The love that the two has for each other is somthing undescribing in words.Never in any fic have i read of a guy falling for a girl at first sight with beautiful her eyes.Every conveersation of his sounded so honest.Its like she sees the world through his eyes😃

There were so many 1liners that i loved for instance,
"I mean otherwise"
Him addressing the stars "They look like your eyes"
"Life doesn't say you always have to follow the rules and do what everyone else does."A very important lesson for life.
"Everything will be fine"
" I will be here. Waiting for you."

The list is tooo long so i guess i should stop here😆So many beautiful moments between the two😃

I would love to read the end of this beautiful relationship of the two.Please do PM me the next part.I'll be waiting eagerly .

P.S:I have watched sunset at Marine drive which is the most beautiful thing to ones eyes.I used to wonder, how it will b at midnight with waters hitting the big rocks & their sounds.I guess i got a glimpse of it through your writings😃

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 11 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: ...Maha-Srk...
UnRes
res b4 pm
yay me 1st
no words dear
awesome, classic, wonderful update
kea likha hai evrithing their feelings, situations, scenes, love, care are beautifully written amazing eagerly w8tng 4 next please continue soon n thanx 4 pm

Mahaaa 🤗🤗🤗

hehe i saw your res before i sent the pm and i was like whoaaa😲

Thank you sooo much yaar! it really means a lot to me 😳 I do see you have commented twice so i am just gonna saay here - i cannot thank you enough really! all those wonderful words mean a lot to me

Originally posted by: anu91
res/unres!!!!
u nailed it...
wt a update...
am just feeling the scene in front of my eyes...
sweet update...
will sleep with sweet dreams...
gud nyt and thanks for awesome update...
both the feeling u explained chance-less...
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waiting for next part...

Anuuu🤗🤗

Awww...i hope you had sweet Arakshi dreams 😳

i m so so glad you liked it 😳 Thank you sooo much for the wonderful comment!🤗

Originally posted by: yams.s
Wonderful Update

Beautifully written

Continue soon

Heylooo!

Thank you soo muchhh🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: easha4539
Awesome update. So Sakshi will be able to see soon. Dancing dancing. Plz con soon.

Thank you sooo much for the comment Easha 🤗

I like your name - very unique!

Originally posted by: Humairaa
awsm awsm awsm
just loved the update
it was very beautifully written
update soon

Humairaaa 🤗🤗🤗

Thank you sooo much for the lovely comment!!

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 11 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: teamasadandzoya
Oh I just hope everything goes a-ok in the operation. You never cease to amaze me with your stories.

Ahhh thank you sooo much for commenting! 🤗🤗🤗

Hope you enjoy the next update😳

Originally posted by: shreya09
haww !!! u stopped here 😲 grrrhh 😡 !!!!
i want to read more
again you hv written a beautiful part...
both Arjun & Sakshi's reaction over the news... their nervousness... way of comforting and getting comforted by each other...
beautiful writing
superb 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
& you update soon 😈

Shreyaaa 🤗🤗🤗

hehehee, i had to leave it there so as to keep you waiting for the next one😉

Thank you sooo much for the comment! it means a lot 🤗

And yes, update is coming up😃

Originally posted by: jia03
Beautiful update❤️
loved the way you portrayed thier nervousness & excitement at the same time..
hope the operation is successful & sakshi is able to see😊

Jiaaa🤗🤗

Thank you sooo much for your comment! Hope u like the next update😳

Originally posted by: sweetpari4u97
fabulous update.
loved it.
plz cont soon.

Pariii🤗🤗

Thank you sooo soo much for the comment!

Originally posted by: _Nikita_
Awwssmmm part
loved it
Supperbbb...
cont sooon
thanks for PM

Nikita! Thank you sooo much for the comment dearie🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: Gurpreetasi7
Awesome
Pure
Innocent
Superb

Thank you sooo much for your comment 🤗🤗🤗

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 11 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali
that was beautifully written u do write beautifully u know that right
sakshi's reaction to know that finally she will be able to see
how she wants to believe but still does not want to but arjun makes her believe that she will see
how arjun wants her to see because he wants her to see him his love in his eyes
their fear of what would happen and then consoling each other that every thing will be fine ⭐️👏
thanks for pm
waiting for sakshi to see her love arjun not just by his eyes but with her eyes

Shefaliii🤗🤗🤗

Awww thank you sooo much for the super large comment! I loved reading every bit of it 😳

Hoping you ll like the next part😃

Originally posted by: zainabhassan1
Awesome superb loveee ittt dear

Thank you sooo muchhh for your comment🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: Areesha566
Update is beautiful... I have no words 2 discribe my felling..
Thankx 4 pm

Heylooo🤗🤗

Thank you sooo sooo muchh!!😳😳😳 It really means a lot 😳

Originally posted by: skrafty
Awesome update
just loved it
All the feelings and emotions were beautifully written
Well I am speechless
can only say
waiting for the next part
continue soon

Heylooo🤗🤗🤗

Thank you sooo sooo much for your comment!😳

That really really means a lot😃