Arakshi FF: Ajeeb si daastan.. Chapter 18C - Pg.101 27/4

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Shreya

@shreya09

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#681

brilliant update Avantika 👏👏👏👏

it was simply perfect

the real reason behind Arjun's absence at the time of his mentor's death... his anger, pain, guilt, helplessness & fear to lose Sakshi's trust... Sakshi's pain yet unconditional love & support for the man she wanted to blame... she just cant watch him in pain...

excellently written

every emotions both of them felt... it touched my heart... it was sooo nicely written.

beautiful and touching.

waiting for more 😳

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#682

*whispers* Shree ko bata doon, meri aur gundi ki adhoori si dua ke baare mein? 😛

finally! Matlab kuch toh baat hai! *me dancing* *evil laugh*

*running*

Yeh bandhan tooo...
Pyaar ka bandhan haaiii
Janmo kaaa
Sangam haiii

Han ji... paidash se hi aisi hoon... LOL... khoob jamega rang jab mil beithenge teen yaar! *yeh woh ad waala dialogue tha na?*

Chalo... iss duniya main iss laachaar, bechaar, abla naari ke sahayta karne ke liye koi toh aage aaya...

Sniff... aur baaki sab - janta maaf nahi karegi!

Aap ke liye aashirwaad for the helpings me!

Dudo nahayo puto phalo,
Rose water nahayo putri phalo...
Rose milk nahayo twins aur triplets phalo!

Bas... isse zyaada aur mat phalo, India ke abaadi kuch zyaada hi acchi hai 🤣

Ha ha... I don't know why saat samundar padh ke... ek hi gaana yaad aa gaya...

Saat samundar
Par lagake
Peeche peeche aagayi
Oh tere peeche peeche aagayi... 🤣🤣🤣

Okay I have officially lost it!(my mind)🤣

Yeah... laal peeli Ritu... bechari thodi angry face dene ki koshish karti hai... but she falls into the all to cute adorable zone...

Aur jab bhi gussa ho jaati hai sirf ek hi cheez bolo... Baba Rituanand ko shant karne ke liye -

It has something... or maybe loads of things to do with Aakaash! 😉

Cheh! Bachane nahi aayi... sheh sheh Rituuu... aur jab main problem main thi... toh I remember somebodies - yeah H n R laughing their heads off due to one confusion of name!

Yeh zaalim duniya!

Oho... you were born in the month of love! Updates padh kar hi shak aa raha tha... LOL...

Ab woh shak yakeen main badal gaya... hahahaha 🤣🤣🤣

Btw the way... Miss H... love you tooo

P.S : Ritz... check PM ka comment really soon... trust me you would end up being redder than any of the Kashmiri apples available ;)

Aur haan... jo main bolti hoon woh main definitely karti hoon...

Aur joh main nahi bolti hoon... *evil grin*

Toh abhi se statutory warning le lo bhai, mere ander ka Mephistopheles jaag utha hai... buhahahahahaha... *evil grin*

Haww.. 😲
Hehehehe *chuckles sheepishly*
*whispers to self* - Hey devi maiyaa.. isne toh seriously le liya.. sautan will fry me alive.. *shakes head*

Kuchh bhi nahi, Shree.. *sumdi mein milo* 😎
O btw.. laachar, bechari abla, who? *taps cheek* 😛

Haaan bagpiper.. 😆😆 aap main aur bagpiper 'club soda' 🤪

Hey bhagwaan! 🤪 kya aashirwaad hai..
Itne saare phool.. na baba..
Phal nahi phail jaaungi.. 🤣

Bwahahahaa.. Shoitaaan.. *peecha chudakar aa gayi..* 😆😉

True that!! She is an adorable angel.. Gussa bhi karti hai toh pyaar se.. 😆😳
Ahaaa.. I see.. will keep that in mind.. But I have a tool in my arsenal - a masterstroke jiske baad gussa uddanchoo ho jaaing and your dearest ritz is still laal as a tamatar..
Oh wait! You know what it is.. 😆

Yes yes ji.. the month of louuuvee.. ❤️
Tch.. tch.. sorry ji! Hum apni eklauti sautan ko no dhoka deing.. 😎
Kahin kissi roz agar zaroorat padi, toh I shall find you.. 😉

Point noted.. Bring it on!! 😎

Edited by Fantasia_junkie - 10 years ago

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#683

Originally posted by: Fantasia_junkie
Haww.. 😲
Hehehehe *chuckles sheepishly*
*whispers to self* - Hey devi maiyaa.. isne toh seriously le liya.. sautan will fry me alive.. *shakes head*

Hihi... aapki Devi Maiyya jab KKGSR ko answer nahi de payi, aapko kya answer degi... LOL

Nahi nahi batane ki zaroorat nahi hai... LOL... I will try to drill it out of her... buhahahahahaha...

Kuchh bhi nahi, Shree.. *sumdi mein milo* 😎

Sumdi... sumdi ki matlab ka hai???

O btw.. laachar, bechari abla, who? *taps cheek* 😛

*cough cough* c'est moi *puppy eyes* 😛

Haaan bagpiper.. 😆😆 aap main aur bagpiper 'club soda' 🤪

LOL... woh ad itna baar dekha hai ki woh mere dimaag main chipak gaya...

Hey bhagwaan! 🤪 kya aashirwaad hai..

Itne saare phool.. na baba..
Phal nahi phail jaaungi.. 🤣

LOL... maine kab kaha sab ek saath aap paida karogi?? Maine toh options diya tha.. aap toh zyaada hopefull ho gaye!!! Arrey agar sab saath main aa gaye toh Jiju bhi "phail" ho jaenge!

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Bwahahahaa.. Shoitaaan.. *peecha chudakar aa gayi..* 😆😉

Hihihihihihi... devil mera surname che.

True that!! She is an adorable angel.. Gussa bhi karti hai toh pyaar se.. 😆😳
Ahaaa.. I see.. will keep that in mind.. But I have a tool in my arsenal - a masterstroke jiske baad gussa uddanchoo ho jaaing and your dearest ritz is still laal as a tamatar..
Oh wait! You know what it is.. 😆

Hihi... yeshhh I do... in fact Ritz toh "faint" bhi hui hai jab maine usko ek solid sa situation diya... LOL

Yes yes ji.. the month of louuuvee.. ❤️

Aye haye 😉

Tch.. tch.. sorry ji! Hum apni eklauti sautan ko no dhoka deing.. 😎

Kisne kaha ek lauti hai.. LOLOLOL... of course ji... no dhoka deing... 😃

Kahin kissi roz agar zaroorat padi, toh I shall find you.. 😉

Moi ready!

Point noted.. Bring it on!! 😎

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#684

Originally posted by: Armagadon

Hailaaa... Shreee🤣🤣🤣

I was laughing like a maniac while reading ur comments🤣

And ahemm.. phir milenge ka badla main loongi!! Now I know ur story of *ahem* *cough cough* .. Inkaaar *ahem*... 😛😛

Did u just say "laachar bechari abla nari"? 🤣🤣🤣🤣

Says who?🤣

Hawww sautannn ..yaad rakhna no dhoka deing! 😎Tum hi ho and Humdard ki kasam, we shall stay Meerabais forever! (damnnn!! humdard type karne ke baad haath bhi nahi chalte🤪 I was actually typing words ulta.. and I am NOT joking!😆)

And ise kehte hai apne pair pe axe maarna.. I am drooling over my own siggies and I feel all messed up

Ab aur kuch bolne ke layak nahi hoon🤣

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Snehajain

@Snehajain

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#685

Happy Birthday ASD...🥳🥳🥳...Congratulations...😃😃😃

Awesome update...

Well on such updates I m completely out of words...🤢🤢🤢

Loved each & every emotion...their words...their need for each other...their understanding...their small teasing...👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏

I really liked Arjun-Sakshi convo where they were talking about Aisha...😆😆😆...Poor Arjun...😆😆😆

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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846182

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#686

And my heart beats Arakshi again.

Geez... I had forgotten the "Arjun" and the "Arakshi" feels.

Bring back good old memories.

You are going great.👍🏼

Keep this going on...❤️

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sweetpari4u97

@sweetpari4u97

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#687

amazing parts.

read two parts and loved them.

cont soon.

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Nethravathi Jagadish

@Nethravathi

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#688

Sorry ji late hogayi

Happy Birthday ASD👏👏👏

Coming to the update Sakshi misunderstood Arjun that he is the reason behind her state.

Finally saare misunderstandings clear hogaye aur Arjun n Sakshi starting trusting each other

I loved the way Arjun cleared up things. Nahi toh Sakshi zindagi par galatfaimi main hi rehti

Ab Arjun aur Sakshi milkar Sakshi ke papa ko insaaf dilaayenge. Can't wait for the update😆😆😆

Edited by Nethravathi - 10 years ago

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#689

I know I'm late but anyways Congratulations for the completion of a year.Happy Birthday!!
They had been friends, best of friends who could say everything to the other without having any fear of being judged.They shared their thoughts and fought yet they were always together bounded knowingly by her father and his mentor, who held a special place in their life and unknowingly by another unknown thread.Circumstances changed and they were separated, their relation and status everything changed. Then, in a completely different situation, they met again.Without knowing who they were and what their connections were, they became friends again.They talked to eachother and stood there for eachother everytime.
Glad that they know about eachother now, this conversation was long due.
They have started feelings for eachother and the truth has only added to it.
Moreover, they have the same mission and they can work together now.
Ayesha and Sameer, they're really great friends and glad that Sakshi and Arjun have got them in their life, the one they can look for.
After knowing the truth about eachother, though a little hesitant, they are now comfortable around eachother.That's great.
Loved this one too.
The emotions were very well penned down.
Great update.
Once again, thankyou for the PMs.

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#690

Heylooo.. 🤗

I'm updating a story, after what feels like ages!! Been suuper busy at work, and with a wedding in the family..

I don't have time to thank each one of you personally, so skipping it with a heavy heart.. Honestly, I truly appreciate all your feedback, and love for this baby of mine.. It makes me love it, all the more..

Thank you soo much.. 😃 I promise to make up for it with an interesting Chapter ahead.. 😉

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Edited by Fantasia_junkie - 10 years ago