Arakshi FF: Ajeeb si daastan.. Chapter 18C - Pg.101 27/4 - Page 47

awesome update avni...
loving this sakshi so much...
how i expected her to be in show am seeing her as ur sakshi character...
waiting for next...

Awesome update
the flashback scene of young Sakshi with her father was amazing
Arjun Sakshi scene at the school was good
Arjun went to the hospital to meet Sakshi...she was glad to have him there
loved the way Arjun was supporting Sakshi
dinner moment was cute
Aisha is back and is shocked to see them both having dinner together
interesting precap
continue soon
thanks for the pm

First of all, talking about Mr. Khanna and Sakshi's relationship, they share more a father-daughter relationship.She neither had to talk in her defence nor clarify about herself being innocent in front of him.Their relationship was beautifully potrayed.Glad that her Mamaji is out of danger now, his presence and comforting support is her strength to fight all the ups and downs in her life and stay sane & strong.
Shree has been feeling guilty for the mess he has landed Sakshi into unintentionally, his acts proves him to be a genuine gentleman who accepts his mistake and apologises for the same.Arjun too has apologised and taken responsibility of the mistake of his, even if he isn't at fault he was the one to give orders.Him apologising to Arjun's uncle with so much honesty and not much ego, it was such an gentleman act from his side.
Arjun-Sakshi's convo, it was as if I too was there nearby hearing them..I know ki dusro ki baatein sunna bad manners hote hain, but what to do?? 😃 The convo between them was so beautifully penned down.
Then, the chat flashback, even without meeting eachother just hearing about them they became such a good friend and also respected eachother.Their talks gave them the courage and strength to move on.
They are there right in front of eachother but don't recognize them, unki dimaag ki batti kab jalegi??
The chat, that was so sweet, I read it umm..I forgot how many times but yeah a lot many times.They were both unknowing taken back to their past memories where they had eachother to trust.
That was a beautiful update as always.
Loved every bits of it.
Will read the next part too soonish.
P.S. Had been away for a while so wasn't able to comment on the previous chapter.Sorry for the delay.

I have never been to Dhanualti and having been living in terai region neither have I seen snow other than on TV but the way you described it, I felt as if I was right there playing with the snow..kash main bhi waha snowman bana rahi hoti!! 😃
"If magic existed for real, this was it.."
This must have been true as it really seems magical.
Despite everything that happened, Sakshi didn't lose hope and there she was again in the school helping out the little kids.Even Arjun had a smile on his lips recalling his childhood memories.
"Aap barf mein bhi jog pe jaate hain?"
And Arjun's casual reply, they are getting more comfortable around eachother.
Trivedi might have been upto something bigger and it isn't so easy to make him open his mouth.He will try everything possible to keep silence but our ACP Rawte is no less, nothing escapes his eyes and ears, he will find some way to bring out the truth and provide justice to Sakshi.
Jay's worry is evident, he seems to be trust-worthy helping out Sakshi in the time of need.
Mr. Abhinav Krishna, he seems to be an hard-working and inspiring person giving chances to the new comers and working to aware the people, Sakshi was lucky to have him as a mentor.
Sakshi work life was described in a brilliant manner.They way she would go deeper into every matter and the fact that she had become popular in such a short time and her articles being liked by all is even more great.Her articles are still in demand and her mentor is looking forward to bring her back.Will she accept the offer and return to Delhi?Will she go back to doing what she loved?Or she will leave it and focus on her current work?
Arjun going to the hospital and staying with Sakshi throughout the surgery was such a sweet gesture.Glad that he went to her, it had been really tough for her too.Imagining the loved ones in the OT undergoing the surgery is itself dreadful.Even after being in medical field, I too fear to imagine somebody close to me undergoing it.So, Sakshi's tension and turmoil can be related to.Finally, he's out of danger, that's such a relief.
Aisha is back and she's right in time to see her two most favourite people dining together.But there's also a lot that she's unaware of.
That was another beautiful update.
Loved every bits of it.
Once again thanks for the PM.

wonderful updated..
wriiten beautifully👏👏
since summer is going on i could feel cold near me and could imagine snow...it was amazing
thank god mamaji is okay.
sakshi and arjun having dinner😲😲 and ayesha watching them😆😆
contd. soon
thnx for pm

This story always takes me to another plane..
And I would like to tell how..
Have you ever seen bioscope..
Its like that to me..
I read each word..
N I connect to it like that only..
A faded yellow something rolls on..
Its beautiful Avantika..
Other than this story I couldn't have experienced it ever..
I can see through it everything. .
The snowfall..
Sakshi's visit to her past..
The suspicion in those ladies' eyes..
Sakshi at her school..
Arjun watching her..
Their convo...probably I can see some music notes around..
Arjun in jogging robe..
Hospital. .
Sakshi waiting outside. .
Arjun talking to her...
"Something has changed" in Arjun..
Taking dinner together..
Sakshi's hesitantly opening up of her recent past in Delhi. .
Its been an awesome start of the day for me Avni..
Reading this story is an awesome n different experience for me..
Thanks..n take care...
N continue. .
I am feeling so full n happy..thanks..

My dear Avantika,

I am dismally and unforgivably late, having been stuck in Yudh land for the past over 5 weeks, but I am here at long last-- der aaye durust aaye.I was relieved to see that Chapter 11 was not up yet!

This one is really about, no, not love blossoming between Arjun and Sakshi, but something which I think is rarer - a real sense of belonging together, with all the caring for each other that comes with that territory.

It is as yet mostly on Arjun's side, for though Sakshi feels, to use the beautiful and apposite Urdu word, mehfoos with him, she is too beset with 3 separate sets of worries - about her campaign to clear her father's name, about her current assignment with Jay, and now about her uncle - to have any time or emotional energy for anything else. This is not sakshi_stargazer, at least not for the present.

But Arjun does not know why he feels what he feels and does what he does. Neither why he goes to the hospital nor why he stays there for hours on end, holding Sakshi's hand, metaphorically speaking, helping thru that long agonizing wait outside the OT. It is as yet nascent in him, this need to comfort her and ease her worries, and he is puzzled by such unfamiliar emotions. But I was relieved that he does not want to fight them, which would have been an additional complication!

You have handled this delicate transition with a very sure touch, Avantika, and have managed to preserve its as yet will o' the wisp quality. There is magic in this tentative reaching out to each other, just as surely as in the snowflakes that pile into Sakshi's outstretched palm. I loved that line of yours after Arjun follows Sakshi into the ICU, and again, he knows not why.

Something had changed in that moment..

As for the Arjun-Sakshi, a walk to remember,that the precap offers, I hope it is to the Kempty Falls. That was the in place in Mussoorie for moonlight rambles, even 40 years ago! As I am sure your grandmum would know. I hope you get on that train to Dehra Dun with her soon.

I liked the new entrant, Mr. Abhinav Krishna, a nice Tamil name, though of course these days, with the new fads in names, he could be from anywhere in India! He sounds interesting and also flexible, in that unlike with, say, Arjun, you can, if you so choose, make this AK white, black or grey. I hope it is grey!

Now some questions.

-Why is a blessedly Roshni-less Arjun so perennially agonized, so inhibited, and so afraid of any emotions at all? You say "Over the years, loneliness and the anguish contained within him had rendered him incapable of accepting a change, for fear of losing a grip over his restrained emotions; or so he forced himself to believe." But why? Is it only the calumny that besmirched the honour of his dead mentor that causes him to become so closed in? It seems a bit too much to me. Or is there something else that you have not revealed as yet?

-I shall not ask you who is the client for whom Sakshi, on a 6 month sabbatical from the India Post Enterprises, and Jay are working right now, for you would hardly want to open up that card at this point. But how would investigating or even getting to the bottom the arms smuggling racket centred on the Garhwal Police Academy help Sakshi progress with her crusade to clear her father's name?

This is besides my other doubt about the size of an arms smuggling racket where the smuggled goods can be fitted into the storage compartment of a scooty. And where would the guns come from anyway? The Academy stock of guns and ammo would be carefully entered into registers and checked every few days.

To revert, my second question arises, of course, because we are still in the dark as to how exactly Col. Anand was framed, arrested, probably sentenced on trumped up evidence, and then disposed of for good in an explosion triggered in the police van in which he was being taken back from the hospital. I hope at least some of these questions are answered in the next chapter.

Shyamala Aunty

Heylo everyone.. The next one is up! It's longer than usual but I couldn't stop in the middle.. 😛

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