Arakshi FF: Ajeeb si daastan.. Chapter 18C - Pg.101 27/4

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Shezi19

@Shezi19

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#311

Oh god I had tears in my eyes
I love the way Arjun save her
And beat that bas***d
Oh ho Liza entry wow so nice
And the way she talk with Arjun
Love it
Poor sakshi bare lot of things but
When Arjun come to know that she is his mentor
Daughter I am waiting for that time
Impatiently
Do continue soon dear

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PoohLover

@PoohLover

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#312

Hellooo helloooavni..first i have to apologize for not reading soo long...blame my inbox for having soo many unread message and me for being lazy to start by reading one by on..but but am finally here...wont ever miss the beautiful updates of yours though late😳😳

Secondly yoohooo new username...i looove it...suits you😃

Chapter 6:
That trivedi is such a 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡
How can he do that...wanted to punch him sooo sooo much
Love sakshi for staying firm on her decision despite all what she had to go through👍🏼
In all a very interesting updateee and very well written ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

Chapter 7:
Yes yes arjun cameee arjun cameee to rescue his lady love...hmm would be lets say😉😉..samee samee hain nah😉
Love the way arjun peetho that not a man trivedi

And yes yes he deserve it to be arjun private punching bag..bring it on😎

Seriously after reading the two updates consecutively...all i want say is that you are a superb writer...and surely one of the story i would love to read anytime 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Thank you sooo sooo much and pleaseee take care of your health 🤗🤗

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Anjali.Mital

@Anjali.Mital

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#313

Wow...one action packed emitional update...
And it was very nice...

The way Arjun treated that Trivedi...I just loved it..
I think he well deserved it...

And Sakshi...Poor girl..
To overcome this mental trauma, it wont be that easy...
Hope she will be alright soon...

And nice username dear...dp is the same old one...right..???

Anyways...please continue soon...
Thanks for the pm...

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#314

Awesome update Thanks for the pm

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Devangana

@Devangana

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#315

Trivedi deserves all the punches Arjun has for him. Arjun dealt with Sakshi so caringly and so did Liza. Waiting for more. Thanks for the pm and looking forward to the next part.

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Shreya

@shreya09

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#316

it was sooo painful 😭
poor Sakshi 😭
would love to see Arjun giving special dose to that Trivedi 😡
"She heard them say that his body was badly mutilated; several bullets were ridden into him, one being shot straight through his head." 😭
i am speechless 😭
but brilliant update 👍🏼
superb 👏

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kunchu

@kunchu

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#317

The pitayi shuru... yuhooo

aur maro... aur maro...

he deserved it

Trivedi made himself a punching bag...

Sakshi's state was pathetic.Poor girl.

What frightens me more is how the village people is going to treat her

for anyone who see her in that state will make her life pathetic again.😭

But I am sure Arjun will have a hard time in future

Liza bhi agayi... Doctorni tho full on dabang hai...

I liked it.

the last part was really sad

What happened to Sakshi's dad and her fears.. well said my dear.

waiting eagerly for next, but you know what I am actually waiting for.😳

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#318

Awesome update B2

Good that Arjun thrashed that pervert Trivedi and also got him arrested. that was a quick move from Arjun and good that they knew abt his involvement in the illegal smuggling.

Hope Sakshi's dad gets justice soon...whatever happened with him was too sad...

Lisa is in too...loved her character.

precap looks interesting...cont soon

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Nethravathi Jagadish

@Nethravathi

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#319

Uss Trivedi ne hamare Sakshi ko itna torture kiya. Thank God Arjun sahi time pe aagaya apne Sakshi ko bachaane ke liye. Arjun took her to the clinic & Dr.Liza treated her. Mujhe uss waqt ka intezaar hai jab Arjun ko Sakshi ki real identity ke baare mein pata chalega