Ariya FF : Ajeeb Dastan. CHAPTER 21 UPDATED 21/02/15 - Page 16

Originally posted by: benaz

Heya! Thanks for the PM. Hehe totally liked reading this update😊 Hmm for one sec there I thought something was gonna happen with the Josh guy😉 And her interaction at the end with "Logan" hehe so nice.

Continue soon!😊

Originally posted by: Aabish_02

Awesome part
love it
cont soon

Originally posted by: sdutta

i am so so sorry for not commenting on ur story 😭

plz forgive me 😊

Originally posted by: Aks13

OMG Jo... Just see it dr... 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

So sorry yaar I don't know how I missed it... 😭 😭

It's won't happen again...anku promise... 😉

Originally posted by: zubiya92

Awesome update
Love it
Cont soon

Originally posted by: Aks13

As always an incredible update dr... 👍🏼

Great going gal... 👏 👏

Loved how you created a suspence regarding that mysterious guy...!!!!!

No talkings in btwn the meals... poor gal... I couldn't live without talking even while eating for a minute n always got good scolding from my mom... 😆 😆 I hate those unwritten rules... asey karo asa mat karo... uurrggghhh...😡

Sorry back to the story... 😳

Her encounter with Josh was adorable... 😉 Was she drooling over him... 😉 😆

Although she was enjoting the change but still looked a bit restless...!!!!!

Awww the guy liked her... 😉 Wow Riya seemed quite frustrated whn she couldn't call her friend...!!!!!

That Logan guy seemed a bit scary too me... Their confrontation was mind blowing...!!!!!

Thanks for pm dr...!!!! Continue soon...!!!!!!

Originally posted by: MeeraSam

No its not lke that many of them read but don't comments ...
Its amazing story ..

Sorry for being a silent reader

Originally posted by: Live-life

Finally I read your update...as I told you I was moving slower that a sloth 😆

Now coming to the update...hmm...now how to describe this...For one there was a lot of suspense and mystery going on right now, which makes it even more interesting to read! heheeh! And Omg Josh ki entry ho gayiii (😉 matlab teri entry hogayiii)

@BOLD: MERI ENTRY?😕 nAHIII!! I'm a girl. Yeah I know Jo and Josh sounds familiar. It's my cousin's name shush!😉 And very few know, My name is JONASHI.

Tune maari entriyaan re dil mein baji ghnatiyaan re tan tan tan tan! 😛 I lubh that song!

What an encounter for a first meet. Pehle hi mulakaat mien Riya thinks he is gorgeous Lol...Pehli bazar mien kya jadoo car diya...and I can see that he has quite an effect on her even though it's their first meet! ahem ahem now...Do I see something angling here???? 😉

He in my story is very English in looks. Toh koi bhi flat hoga na?😆

And I think that even Josh was hitting on her in that indirect way...being all gentleman like 😆 And then I won't be surprised if he turns into a sweet talker...huh...I have met one and trust me they are like hyenas in disguise of a sheep 🤣 wow I am so good at comparison!

Oh Lord! Really? Hyenas in disguise of a sheep. Haha yeah can't beat that!😉

Awww and then when she came back to the room the birdie's ran away...that was kinda sad but they always run away whenever someone comes near them. it's ok!

Lord! and Then she starts drooling over the "guy" again! Lady...you need to control your hormones! 😆 and wohooo! what was that? Is this going where I think it sis???? 😉

He too kinds mesmerised by her gracious looks. Riya yesi hi hai na. Hope the beast falls in love. Although I have no intention to bring in fairytale story but Arjun is kinda beast here. Typical Agressive and rude fella.

and awww She was so desperate to call Ambs so cute! Heheeh...situations where you are desperate to talk to a friend...haahah I know what those fee like! 😛 hehe!

And when she climbs that hill and encounters the mystery person...hmmm...suspense butterflies in my stomach god! and Hayeee! he sounds sooo cexy (Cute + Sexy) 😆 Lol yeah just like Logan! 😛

@Black Bold: Ah that word! 😳

You know who LOGAN RIGHT? the wolverine fellow, the one when the story began Riya was dreaming about? Many didn't get it here!😕

And then he starts with the lecture...but i LIKED rIYA'S comeback...wohooo go girl power!

but then again...she should have apologized for that accident!

@BLACK BOLD: She is not aware of him as the person who was on the road. She thinks he was an old man. So that why on that refrence of AN OLD MAN. they was a sly smile creeping up on his face but he held it and showed indifference.

btw...is he really the lord???? or is it who I think it is... WHO you think he is?😉

Omg...Now I can't wait for the next update!

More curiosity butterflies in my stomach! 😆

That was a awesomely Fantabulous update Jojo! LOved ittt!

Thanks for the pm and please please continue soon!

Love youuu

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