Ariya FF : Ajeeb Dastan. CHAPTER 21 UPDATED 21/02/15

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laila

@laila1994

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: Jo_Pinchy

*chuckles* Atleast that brought you out in the open. A warm welcome Meerasam. Lovely name. It comes from movie Cocktail right? 😉

This is what i meant. I want silent readers who come here and go; to not only read the story but like it too and acknowledge it. I might sound a despo who wants like and comments...but no. To be honest i feel like no one reads it and I'm shooting it at blank walls with no aim. Quite philosophical eh?. 😳

Yeah so that discourages me. Even a one liner comment will humble me and feel Yeah members here too read the story.

Hope Silent readers and other members come in. Till then no update.

P.S After so much blabbering not one will comment. I'm certain!

Sorry not a reader of this story.

But can't stop myself from giving Free advice 🤪

If you want your silent reader to comment threaten them by PM update. They will surely come out.😆

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Jonashi

@Jo_Pinchy

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: laila1994

Sorry not a reader of this story.
But can't stop myself from giving Free advice🤪
If you want your silent reader to comment threaten them by PM update. They will surely come out.😆

Haha thanks Laila.
Btw i don't even know who the silent readers are. Their existance defined or not. So whom to threaten.

p.s- NO.MORE.UPDATES. I put a lot of time into it and getting no appreciation led me into this.

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APRIL14

@APRIL14

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#143

i am so so sorry for not commenting on ur story 😭

plz forgive me 😊

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abhya/akanksha

@Aks13

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: Jo_Pinchy
Kahan ho sab?
No one likes my story?

😭 guys pls comment karo. Itni mehnat and time i put into writing this and getting no replies is discouraging. 🥺

OMG Jo... Just see it dr... 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

So sorry yaar I don't know how I missed it... 😭 😭

It's won't happen again...anku promise... 😉

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abhya/akanksha

@Aks13

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#145

As always an incredible update dr... 👍🏼

Great going gal... 👏 👏

Loved how you created a suspence regarding that mysterious guy...!!!!!

No talkings in btwn the meals... poor gal... I couldn't live without talking even while eating for a minute n always got good scolding from my mom... 😆 😆 I hate those unwritten rules... asey karo asa mat karo... uurrggghhh...😡

Sorry back to the story... 😳

Her encounter with Josh was adorable... 😉 Was she drooling over him... 😉 😆

Although she was enjoting the change but still looked a bit restless...!!!!!

Awww the guy liked her... 😉 Wow Riya seemed quite frustrated whn she couldn't call her friend...!!!!!

That Logan guy seemed a bit scary too me... Their confrontation was mind blowing...!!!!!

Thanks for pm dr...!!!! Continue soon...!!!!!!

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Live-life

@Live-life

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#146

Finally I read your update...as I told you I was moving slower that a sloth 😆

Now coming to the update...hmm...now how to describe this...For one there was a lot of suspense and mystery going on right now, which makes it even more interesting to read! heheeh! And Omg Josh ki entry ho gayiii (😉 matlab teri entry hogayiii)

Tune maari entriyaan re dil mein baji ghnatiyaan re tan tan tan tan! 😛

What an encounter for a first meet. Pehle hi mulakaat mien Riya thinks he is gorgeous Lol...Pehli bazar mien kya jadoo car diya...and I can see that he has quite an effect on her even though it's their first meet! ahem ahem now...Do I see something angling here???? 😉

And I think that even Josh was hitting on her in that indirect way...being all gentleman like 😆 And then I won't be surprised if he turns into a sweet talker...huh...I have met one and trust me they are like hyenas in disguise of a sheep 🤣 wow I am so good at comparison!

Awww and then when she came back to the room the birdie's ran away...that was kinda sad but they always run away whenever someone comes near them. it's ok!

Lord! and Then she starts drooling over the "guy" again! Lady...you need to control your hormones! 😆 and wohooo! what was that? Is this going where I think it sis???? 😉

and awww She was so desperate to call Ambs so cute! Heheeh...situations where you are desperate to talk to a friend...haahah I know what those fee like! 😛 hehe!

And when she climbs that hill and encounters the mystery person...hmmm...suspense butterflies in my stomach god! and Hayeee! he sounds sooo cexy (Cute + Sexy) 😆 Lol yeah just like Logan! 😛

And then he starts with the lecture...but i LIKED rIYA'S comeback...wohooo go girl power!

but then again...she should have apologized for that accident!

btw...is he really the lord???? or is it who I think it is...

Omg...Now I can't wait for the next update!

More curiosity butterflies in my stomach! 😆

That was a awesomely Fantabulous update Jojo! LOved ittt!

Thanks for the pm and please please continue soon!

Love youuu

🤗

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laila

@laila1994

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: Jo_Pinchy

Haha thanks Laila.
Btw i don't even know who the silent readers are. Their existance defined or not. So whom to threaten.

p.s- NO.MORE.UPDATES. I put a lot of time into it and getting no appreciation led me into this.

I did that many times on my work. It didn't work. PM update did😆

PS, I follow your the day he got married. I love your work.

Are you ever gonna update that😳

Edited by laila1994 - 11 years ago