Arakshi FF: Tumhare pass on hold till july :(

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misakiscarlet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#211

awesome update
loved it...
contd. soon
thnx for pm

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_shadesnature_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#212

hey please cont soon n try ur best to give long updates

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Sakthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#213

right here is mine :

WE or I need more comics for one.

then thrill for sure.

then the climax with a marriage or a proposal at least.

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anushka

@arakshifan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#214

hey guyzzz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ok before you start the questions, i just wanted to say that , for me, its easter break. so

i was at my friends house so i couldnt update...sorry!

will update tomorrow...

ill try to make it long

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anushka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#215

hey... when i tried to post the update it said there are some invalid words and it wont post.

help!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Ritu Dang

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Posted: 11 years ago

#216

sry bt evn i dn't knw nythng abt dis

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Preethu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#217

sorry dear evn i don't knw wat to do

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Devangana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#218

Update soon dear waiting for the next part.

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Sakthi

@greensakthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#219

try to post again once and try to verify that u didn't add any banned words in it.
hope it 'd help dr!

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anushka

@arakshifan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#220

Hey guyz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! M back...with part 12...now this isn't that long but its not short either...thank you all for your comments...and the lovely welcome back...and a special thanks to all the other people who actually gave me some advise with the plot. And people have been telling me that I need to add some comedy in it. So...this story has a lot more funny parts😆

Shree and Sakshi entered the bedroom and the first thing they saw was a giant picture of Sakshi and abhi.

She wimpered...

...

Sakshi fell to the floor. Shree gasped and caught her.

"arjun sir...ayesha...sakshi!!!!" he screamed.

They all rushed in and arjun lifted her up and placed her on the sofa.

They all stared at her. Shree just stared at her thinking. How he missed her smile. He would do anything for Sakshi to smile again. She was his best friend.

He smiled.

Shree whispered something in chotu's ear and chotu smiled.

They rushed to the kitchen and came back with a heavy bucket, shree holding one side and chotu holding the other side. The stood right next to Sakshi and poured the bucket all over Sakshi. Everybody stood in awe.

Edited by arakshifan - 11 years ago

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