ARIYA OS **DILL DUFFER** complete 14.12.13

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

It was so sweet pankhuri dear

Riya got so emotional

Ab ye arjun kahah Hai ?😕

Loved it

Thanks for the PM

N Continue soon 😊

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dreamyrose

@dreamyrose

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

superb start its sweet that all are safe looking forward to the next part

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henna33

@henna33

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Woow awesome start
Loved d way etf welcomed riya
Waiting for more updates

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Shahela

@shahela15

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Nice start, all are alive, update the next part soon and thanks for the pm

Edited by shahela15 - 11 years ago

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ishita

@IshitaRocks015

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

alleeyyy..inna chhotu sa??
plz jaldi update..plsh..

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Shweta Gupta

@ll_megha_ll

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

It was awesome and amazing update dear.

Just loved it.

Continue soon.

And thanx for the pm.

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Pankhu,it was really awesome.
Kaash,Riya aur puri ET aaj sach mein(in the show) zinda hote,toh kitna accha hota.
Par iss CVs ko kaun samjhaye.
Anyways,loved it a lot.
Finally,Riya came.
The concern and care which Ayesha,Shree,Chotu,Liza and Rathod had for Riya was beautiful.
Wow...
Riya promoted to the rank of Sr.Inspector.
She is happy.
Yeh Arjun kittho hai?
Arjun toh Riya ko bhi lene nai gaya,toh phir gaya kaha?
Rathod bhai ko kiska message aya?
Eager to know abt the message.
Continue sooonish... :)
thanks for the pm.

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piyal

@Pankhuri96

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

LAST PART

Shree:sir,main ria ke pass jata hu...

Sameer:no...usse thodi dair akela rahne do...

Shree:ok...

Ria enters in her cabin...

The room is fully decorated...behind her chair there is a big photo of ETF team...there is flower vase with her favourite flower night queen...she comes to her chair...there is another two picture photo fream...(hope u understand) ussme ek taraf ria ki pic thi...aur ek taraf khali...

Ria:aare...yeh khali kyun hai? Yeh kya hai?

There is a letter...

WELCOME TO ETF...AGAIN...PLZ STAND IN THE CENTRE...THERE IS SOMETHING FOR U...

Ria:wow!! Yeh zaroor shree ka kaam hoga...per mujhe kuch azib lag raha hai...khair chhoro..centre me khari ho jati hu...

Ria goes there...

Light goes off...

Ria:dekho shree...tum...tumhe ppaata...hai na ...mujhe andhere se kitna dar...lagta hai...light kyun off kki...

Suddenly one hand comes from behind...hold her wrist...

Voice: sshhh!!! Kitna bolti ho...

Ria: arjun sir...

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piyal

@Pankhuri96

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Arjun:tumhe kya har taraf shree hi nazar ata hai?

Ria:nahi...aysi koi baat nahi...woh ek wo hi hai jo mere sath franks karta hai...isiliye...

arjun:welcome back...

ria:thanks...

arjun :yahi ruko...

ria:per...

arjun:main yahi hu...

ria:ok...

achanak se lights on hui. rose ke petals ria ke upper girne lage...she was stunted...she can't imagine arjun can do this all...

arjun:kaisa laga?

Ria:(with extreme excitement )bahat achchha...ek dam mere sapno ke jaisa...mera raajkumar ayega...mujhpe fulo ki baarsaat hogi...sirf woh aur main...woh mere paas ayega...aur kahega...

Arjun: I LOVE U.WILL U BE MINE FOREVER?

Ria: ha...per aapko kaise pata?

Arjun:yeh mera jawab nahi hai...mujhe mera answer chahiye.

Ria:kiss ka?

Arjun:jo maine abhi tumse puchha...WILL U BE MINE FOREVER?

Ria:aap sach kah rahe hai?aap...

Arjun:ha..ria...main sach kah raha hu...I LOVE U...

Ria:per...

Arjun: bahat pahele hi mujhe samajh jana chahiye tha..ki main tumse pyar karta hu.per meri itni achchhi kismaat kaha?jab woh blast hua...maine socha ki main firse sab kuchh kho dunga...firse main akela ho jaunga...

Ria:per bappa ne aysa kuch hone nahi dia...maine kaha thana..ki bappa hai...woh sabki baat sunte hai...

Arjun:aur shayad meri baat unhone bahat der se suni...

Ria:nahi...unhone meri baat sabse pahele suni...apko meri zindegi me bhej ke...

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piyal

@Pankhuri96

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Arjun: toh tumhare sapne ko pura kare?
Ria:mera sapna?per woh toh apne pura kar dia?
Arjun:abhi sapna pura nahi hua hai...
He leands his face down.claiming her lips.she was shocked.she was'nt reply back.arjun bits her lower lip.she opens her mouth.he get the chance.he explore her mouth.both r lost in each other.

On the other side-
aisha:sameer,apne shree ko jane kyun nahi dia?
Sam: iss liye.
He shows the sms...
Takes one step forward in life.don't disturb us.
Aisha:sameer,hum sab ka nah,DILL DUFFER hai.dil ki baat bahat der se samajh ati hai.
Sam:hmm,sahi kaha.chalo,hum vi chalte hai,unka toh sab set ho gaya,humari vi kuchh setting kar do.
Aisha:uske liye toh ghar jana parega.
Sam:toh,chalo...

THE END

u hav full r8 to throw jute,chappal,sade tamatar etc.

Edited by pankhuri96 - 11 years ago