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Posted: 11 years ago
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Whn do we get the nxt part dr...????? Can't wait to read further...do it na plzzz...
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Originally posted by: rimi_invisible



wait darling...abhi to first update ka asar khatam nehi hua hai😉


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Plz update do na 😭



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Originally posted by: khemanisarita

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Superb update
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I am really overwelmed with the great response i got from you lovely people...thank you each and everyone who had liked and commented on my work...

I know you people are waiting for the next part...so here it comes...i have tried my best to do justice to this part as well...but i am not sure how much you would like it...

please give back your reviews its really encouraging...so over to you...

next post next part...

Mona Khan and everyone else who had asked for the update here it is...

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Meri Ariya in my dreams (My Ariya srories index)


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/3823710/meri-ariya-in-my-dream-world-my-ariya-stories-index-note-pg19aug22

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Part 2:

He touched her cheek where the tear drop has left its mark and slowing grazed the whole area when there was a sound and a song started playing,

Gandi baat,gandi gandi gandi gandi,
gandi baat,


that got them back into their senses.Arjun looked at riya and then into the position both were in,then the surrounding and jerked back to his seat.

Riya too embarrased at the turn of events struggled herself back on her seat properly.She looked at the lion and saw him looking down,breathing heavily holding onto the steering.Was he angry??she didnt know.She looked outside,it was still raining but had slow down.Within next hour or so it would be dawn and they got to wait until then.Riya tried talking with him,

'sir wo...',riya started

'riya ye bakwas fm chalane ko kisne kaha tha tumhe??chup chap rehena nehi ata tumhe?hum yaha ek case ke liye aye hai,gana sunne ya masti karne nehi.abhi ise band karo warna...samjhi ya mein samjhau?'

'aree maine kiya kiya sir? mein bore ho rahi thi,aur mijhe kiya pata tha ki signal eise disturb karega??aur meine kiya kiya?ap hi to mere pas...'

Riya gulped down when Arjun glared at her angrily.He knew somewhere it was his fault but to accept it in front of her was not his style.He looked away.He was now eagerly waiting for the morning Sun so that he could get out of this place.Sitting beside the girl who had made him the weakest just few moments back has become too much difficult now.

Riya kept thinking about what had transpired between them few moments back.None was at real fault.The situation and their known and unknown hidden feelings had taken the turns in those events.She was still lost in those moments for doesnt know how long when she heard Arjun's voice,

'bhai sab yaha koi mechanic milega?gadi kharab ho gaye hai',Arjun asked a man passing by

'haan sab ek garage hai,jaganath ka,andar gao mein,waha pe bata dijiye wo ake thik kar dega,us taraf se chale jaiye,wahi mil jaiga'

'hmm,aur ye post office kaha hai??'

'us garage mein puch lijiye ga,waha se hi kuchi dur mein hai',the man left
after arjun thanked him.

Riya suddenly remembered the purpose of their visit and got back to her ETF officer avatar.

'RIya chalo hum pehele garage chalte hai,gadi thik hone tak post office khul jaiga fir waha chalenge'

They reached the garage and there a man named raju assured them to help them with the car.Arjun inquired about the post office and took the directions.Raju came with them to spot the car and saw that it was an ETF SUV.He checked into it and informed that he needs some instruments to open up the engine.He went back and Arjun riya waited beside the car.When suddenly someone hit at Arjun's head from back and he fell down.Riya tried to attack the man but she smelled choloform and fell unconcious.

When Arjun gained senses they were in a dark room.He felt a severe pain at the back of his head.Gradually he could adjust to the darkness.He checked the surrounding it was dark,a window at the other end which had been closed as well and a door oviously locked from outside.He looked for Riya and found her lying beside him at the far end corner of the room.

He went to her and tried to wake her up.But she was in a deep slumber.He stood up and tried to find a way to escape.
After some time Riya woke up but it took her some time to understand that they had been kidnapped and Arjun was also there in the same room.She saw arjun jumping here and there towards the window trying to remove the blocks from it but in vain.

'ap kudna bandh karenge sir,kitna dusty place hai,mujhe dust allergy hai',riya called out to arjun,

Arjun looked towards her and again started jumping...

'uff ye admi,mera sar dard kar raha hai,neend aa rahi hai,per itne gandhi jaga pe mein soungi kaise?'

'for your information riya hume yaha kidnap kiya gaya hai,hum yaha honeymoon manane nahi aye hai,utho aur dekho hum yaha se kaise nikle'

'apne to dekha na,mein firse kiya dekhu??mera sar...',

arjun kept trying and riya was continuing her non stop ranting when suddenly she started crying.Arjun went to her,

'riya,kiya hua?ro kiyu rahi ho??'

'mujhe bohot bhook lagi hai sir'

'kiya??',arjun looked at her confused,'thik hai,hum yaha se nikal te hai pehele fir kuch kha lena'

'is gaon mein kiya khau,sab kitna ganda hai',Arjun got up angrily and was about leave when they heard some voices outside.Arjun jumped over riya and hid at a dark corner.But riya being the person she is was completely perplexed and started shouting on him,

'ap fir se suru ho gaye?fir to mujhi pe chilayenge.car mein maine kuch nehi kaha iska matlab ye nehi ki ap mere sath kuch bhi kar sakte hai,mein manti hu ki mein apse pyar karti hu magar iska matlab ye nehi ki ap mere sathe eise yaha kuch bhi kar sakte hai.mujhe eisa ghuriye mat mein apse darti nehi hu.mein rathod sir se complain karungi ki ap ne mere sath...'Arjun kept his palm on her mouth to stop her and she kept stairing at him with wide eyes.

The men outside went away.Arjun heared them going away and released riya from his hold.

'Utho Riya we need to unblock that window.Mein tumhe uthata hu tum wo blocks nikalo.'

Riya got up and went near the window.Arjun held her from her waist and held her up.Riya tried to remove the blocks from the window and in the process lost her balance and fell over arjun.

Again the same sensation came back.Arjun looked at riya she had her eyes closed and her face looked scared.Her face was so close to his that he could feel her breath.He heard her heart racing and so was his.She opened her eyes and looked at him.There was again concern in his eyes.His eyes conveyed what he couldnt.Her elbow was bleeding.She winced when it hit his chest.Arjun came out of his trance and held her in his arms to steady her on her feet.He took out his hankerchief and wrapped it around her wound.She kept looking at him.She could see his care but was it love she was still confused.

Both of them got back to reality when they heard the door being unlocked.Arjun held riya in his arms and hid behind the wall.

The men came in and searched for them.Arjun came out from his hiding and attacked them.Arjun and Riya tackled them well and within next few minutes they were out of that place.They directly went to the post office and enquired about the letters.They came to know of the person who had sent them.They went to his house and with a few more blows he confessed about Mr. Dixit,a potential rival,who had given him enough money to sent those letters.Arjun gave him over to the local police and took a police jeep and moved towards the city.The SUV would be repaired and sent there later.

On there way back Arjun looked at riya and found her pale, pouted face.

'kiya hua riya?aise kiyu baithi ho?'

'kuch nehi hua hai sir'

'to chehera aisa kyu hai?'

'apse matlab?kabse kehe ja rahi hu mujhe bhook lagi hai ap kaha sun rahe hai? apko to bhook nehi lagti ap kiya samjhenge?'

'kisne kaha mujhe bhook nehi lagti?khair chodo,samne us dhabe se apne liye kuch leke aao aur mere liye ek cutting chai'

The Jeep stopped,riya quickly got down and went inside the dhaba.Ordering for a food parcel for herself,she took a cutting chai to Arjun.While taking the glass from her hand a few drops of chai fell on her hand and she jerked back.Arjun took her had in his and quickly took a look.It was red and swollen.He blew into it and gently kissed the spot.She took her hand away and went and sat inside the jeep.The parcel had come and giving the glass back arjun drove away.

Arjun saw Riya silently sitting inside the jeep with a food parcel on her lap.

'Tumhe itni bhook lagi hai to khana kiyu nehi kha rahi ho?kha lo ya fir gaana sunna hai?',he asked raising a brow at her,

'mein apke liye bhi lai thi to mein akeli kyu khau?'

'par meine to apna cutting pi liya na?thik hai kha lo.'Arjun stopped the car at a side and asked riya to open the parcel.

Riya smiled and kept the parcel on the seat.Took the bottle of water and washed her hands.Then opened the parcel.Sight and smell of the food was delicious and tempting.Both of them took there turn and ate the food.

Riya was eating like a hungry beast.Arjun was watching her.Suddenly Riya felt Arjun leaning on her.A small amout of the curry had slipped from her lips and flowing towards her chin.Arjun leaned forward and with his thumb rubbed the curry on her lips and chin.She trembled and looked away.There was no one.The place was completely isolated.

'to riya tum kiya kehe rahi thi? rathore ko kuch complain karna tha na? kiya bataogi riya?? maine tumhare sathe kiya kiya?'

'Sir wo mein apko apse...'

'koi baat nehi.mein soch raha tha riya kiyu na mein kuch aur karo taki tum rathore ko aur bhi ache se explain kar sako.',arjun winked at her

riya kept looking at him with wide eyes,her cheeks already burning,hands cold and she was trembling.Arjun held her shoulder tightly.She lowered her eyes.Pulling her face up with his finger he looked at her.Pecking her forhead and then trailing down towards her lips,he kept looking at her,

'you are beautiful riya,thank you for being there,chalo ghar chalte hai'

'Ghar??',

'kiyu riya tumhe hamare ghar nehi jana?sari zindagi yahi rahenge kiya?waise mujhe problem nehi hai mein to raate car mein guzar sakta hu.par shadi ke bina ye gandi baat nehi kar sakte na??'Arjun said with a smirk

'Sir,ap?'

'Arjun riya.nam bhul gayi kiya?mein yaad dilau?',Arjun winked at her

Riya blushed and went close to him,hiding her face in his chest held him close to her.Arjun too held her in his arms.


Its a begining of a love story?no one knows,but beginning of a new chapter of their story.

And I end this here,hope you enjoy this part too...please read and give your feedback...
RIMI

PART 3A: page 21


Edited by rimi_invisible - 11 years ago

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