Shree SS: Chahoon Mai Ya Na - Pt 7 Pg 28, 27-Feb - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Meself

I m so sorry my doosri dido! It took me real long to come over and post it out! Haa...I so loved the update. it indeed was predictable that Sameer would lash it out! I mean the 'damnit' chief had to let out all the anger that was bottled up. But thank heavens that at least Aayesha understood! Anyways Sashaa is a rockstar. Getting the first hand information and then pulling out that criminal and literally saving the day! Way to go girl!!

Next the mandir meet! I think Shree is smitten! Precap made me smile a lot! Beta Sashaa Aayesha ki behen hai. Jungli sherni ki behen sherni hi hoti hai!!
P.S. I have the same request to you as well. Pull your work out of IF and bring it over to a blog! What if someone lifts your work and show it off as his/hers??? Murder hi ho jayega mere hathoon!!!

Thanks dear 😊...
Awww... sweetie pie...no worries 😊
Well... Chief has high hopes from his team...and it really frustrates him when something like this happens...😉
Sashaa... jungle sherni 🤣 (Aisha-Sashaa... are u reading this 🤣 )
Blog...hmmm... good idea... will try to do it 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: sasha007

heylllooo didz!

sorry for the late lateefness*
I honestly told you the reason na

i am a bit more in love with my shree because of this story now.
the start was simply chumeshwari. shocked? ha ha ha
jab arjun mere shree ko dantta hai na, to mujhe bohot gussa ata hai, but agar Sammy usse daantta hai na, to accha lagta hai, i simply love his innocent brooding face before his chief. just feel like kissing him over his cute round cheeks.😳😳
isiliye kaha, chumeshwari start!

aww. i was indeed feeling guilty. though it is a fiction, but now i understand why dii feels what she writes, because she gets connected to it, just like i have got a connection with my fiction character.

i should thank you to have portrayed me as such a chaaloo Chaplin. 😊😊
waise main aisi hi hoon bhi. 😆
barabar aisha and sameer se sashaa ne sab nikalwa liya.
i am really an ace when it comes to 'khabar nikalo kaam'
tabhi to i've choosen the journalism line 😃

haye kash aisa hota ki mai dii ka phone check karti aur mujhe usme shree/ siddy ka no. mil jata. *la la la la la la*

the sammy and shree part was really cute. my shree is such a golden heart na. he respects his chief so much.

even i got relieved after knowing dat sammy is now happy vid shree

ab to mai har tuesday ko mandir jaungi. kya pata kabhi kisi roz mujhe shree mil jae 😆😆😆


thank god shree ne sashaa ko maaf kar diya!

PRECAP! dil garden garden ho gaya
bhawra bagiyan me kho gaya
dill garden garden...garden garden...


waiting for next installment!

bye didz


Hey... Sweetie pie ... Thanks ... yaha padharne ke liye aur comment karne ke liye 😊
Yes I understand... and the reasons that u gave were valid 😊
So Sweet... but so sad... tum usko kissy nahi kar sakti 😉
Good ... now don't make fun of ur Di...when she is emotionally attached with her stories 😉
But u don't need to feel guilty... Sashaa ne sab theek kar diya ... she helped Shree 😊
Chaloo Chaplin 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Ur Di needs to be very careful... and specially hide her phone when u r around 🤣🤣🤣
Sameer and Shree... hmmm... Mera Sameer hai hi itna cute 😉 ... and fir dono hi bahut jaldi Kapoor family k damad ban jayenge ... unki relationship to achchhi honi hi chahiye 😉😉
🤣🤣🤣
Tuesday ko mandir ...ye meri story ka Shree hai... par try kar ke dekh lo... shayad mil jaye Shree tumko 😉
Haaye... itni pyari Sashaa ko Shree maaf kaise nahi karega EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Usko to Sashaa pasand bhi aa gayi hai... 😉
next part aa raha hai 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83

Here comes the part 3

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Shree reaches office. Chhotu and Aisha catch him smiling to himself staring at the blank screen of his laptop. They go and tease him.
Chhotu: kya baat hai Shree? ye akele akele muskura rahe ho...agar koi khushi ki baat hai to hume bhi batao ... hum bhi khush ho jayenge
Aisha: Kya Chhotu... itna bhi nahi samajhtey... ye akele akele muskurane wali baat kisi ko batayi nahi jaati... ye to kisi aur hi baat ke symptoms hain...(winks)
Chhotu: matlab?
Aisha: arre... mai apne experience se bata rahi hoon... aisa sirf tabhi hota hai jab kisi ko kisise pyar ho jata hai...
Chhotu: ooohhh... yani humare Shree ko pyar ho gaya hai
All this while Shree was alternately gawking at Aisha and Chhotu but he snaps out at this last sentence.
Shree: Kya tum dono bhi ...aisa kuch nahi hai...
He gets up trying to avoid them and goes to the coffee machine and Aisha and Chhotu follow him there.
Shree: tum log mere peechhe peechhe kyun aa rahey ho?
Aisha: humein bhi coffee peeni hai...
Shree is avoiding eye contact with them and looking at his coffee mug being filled and is lost in Sashaa's thoughts.
Aisha: waise... naam kya hai us ladki ka?
Shree(in trance): poochha nahi!!!
with this he realises what a big mistake he has committed and he closes his eyes. Aisha and Chhotu have got their first clue.
Chhotu: matlab sach mein kisi ladki ka chakkar hai...
Shree(makes a crying face): jao na tum dono... mujhe pareshan mat karo
He picks up his coffee and goes to his desk. Aisha and Chhotu too get their coffee and again go to Shree's desk.
Aisha: Kya Shree... ab tak uska naam bhi nahi pata tumko... tumhari love story aagey kaise badhegi?
Shree: arrey meri Maa !! koi love story nahi hai... wo... (takes a pause) wo us din wali ladki mujhe aaj fir se mili thi...mandir ke bahar... mujhse sorry bolne aayi thi... aur us din sirf galat fehmi huyi thi... wasie wo buri nahi ladki nahi hai (smiles remembering her)
Chhotu: tu kuch chhupa raha hai... tu keh raha hai ki tujhe uska naam bhi nahi maaloom... aur wo ladki tere bare mein ye bhi janti hai ki har Tuesday ko tu subah mandir jata hai... aur wo waha tujhse sorry bolne aayi thi...usko tere routine ke barey mein kaise pata ... [Arjun style] ... kahin kuch to chhoot raha hai...sach sach bata... baat kya hai?
Shree is surprised that how he missed that.
Shree: arre haan yaar Chhotu... tu sahi keh raha hai... maine to ye baat sochi hi nahi...
That is when Sameer calls them to the conference room for case discussion. Aisha and Chhotu are disappointed because they missed a chance.
Later in the evening.
Shree (thinking): Maine to uska naam bhi nahi poochha... aur usko kaise pata ki us criminal ka naam Babloo tha ... aur usne kaha tha ki wo mujhse sorry kehne aayi hai... usko ye kaise pata tha ki mai aaj mandir jaunga... wo mere barey mein itna sab kaise jan sakti hai... hey bhagwaan... ye sab kya ho raha hai...
Aisha and Chhotu keep teasing him and refuse to believe that Shree doesnt know anything about that girl who knows a lot about him. And Shree is all the way confused.
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After a few days.
It was Arjun and Roshni's wedding anniversary, so they organised a small party and invited all ETF members with their families.

Sashaa was scared that Shree will definitely be there. She tried to avoid going but Roshni had insisted that Sashaa comes for the party.
For some reason she was excited to meet Shree again but was scared about what will happen when her truth comes out.
While getting ready for the party, she had strewn most of her dresses around the room, and was not able to select a dress.

Aisha saw the condition of the room and was surprised because it never happened with Sashaa. She was the one who never cared about the looks and clothes and just
believed in being herself.
Later Aisha was shocked to see her beautifully dressed up in lovey pink Kurta-Churidar with a matching dupatta with a bit of make up, matching funky jewellery. Sashaa's moom forcefully kept this dress for her to wear on some festival or a special occasion.

Aisha: Are u OK princess? tumhari tabiyat to theek hai na?

Sashaa(nervous): ya!! i'm... ok... kyun... kuch problem hai kya? mai achchhi nahi lag rahi hoon kya?

Aisha: nahi .. problem nahi hai... par tum aaj kuch alag lag rahi ho

Sashaa is again nervous but Aisha changes the topic.

Aisha: but u r really looking good...mujhe to pata hi nahi tha ki meri jhalli si lagne wali princess itni pyari bhi lag sakti hai... kya baat hai? (smiles)

Sashaa blushes.

Sashaa: Kuch nahi Ashu Di... chalo ab... party ke liye late ho raha hai..
Aisha chuckles looking at Sashaa. Aisha wished to tease her more but Sameer had come to pick them up and was honking the horn to call them.

Sameer is shocked to see Sashaa.

Sameer, Aisha and Sashaa leave for the party and Sameer and Aisha tease Sashaa on the way.
Sameer: Aisha!! humari princess badi ho gayi hai... hai na?

Aisha: Haan Sameer... aap sahi bol rahe hain

Sameer: lag raha ki iski bhi shadi karwa di jaaye

Sashaa snaps out.

Sashaa: Jiju... please...

Sameer: arrey... kya galat bola maine?... aur ab tum hi bata do... koi ladka pasand karke rakha hai hai hum dekhe?

Sashaa blushes.

Aisha and Sameer chuckle.
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At party venue.
Sameer, Aisha and Sashaa enter and Arjun and Roshni welcome them. Sashaa gives Arjun and Roshni a gift and a bouquet.

Sashaa looks here and there but couldn't spot Shree.

She is relieved. She sits in a corner quietly as she didn't know anyone else in the party while Sameer and Aisha mingle with their friends.
Sashaa is staring at the entrance waiting for Shree but after some time she gets bored and walks towards the window to get some fresh air. She was standing there with her back towards the entrance.
Within a few minutes she hears Shree's voice as he was busy in some silly argument with Chhotu while entering the party. Shree enters with Chhotu and greet Roshni and Arjun and give them gifts. And he chit chats with Aisha.
Sashaa was listening to all this but she couldn't dare to turn and look at Shree. her heart was beating faster and she just closed her eyes hen she heard Ayesha calling her to introduce her to Shree.
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So how was it?

Pre-cap : Shree - Sashaa romantic dance

Enjoy!!!!
Bhavna
Edited by bgargate - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
kabhi socha nahi tha ki apni hi behen ki love story ko padhungi...wierd feeling...bt its nice too :-)

poor shree...chotu and aisha to koi chance nahi chod rahe uski leg pulling session ka...lolz

so finally shree ke dimag ki batti jali..hw come dat unknown gal knws so mch abt him...sochte raho...

haww...sashaa wearing kurti chudidaar..can only imagine this...rukku baby hamari princess ko samjhaona ki ye sab bhi pehena kare...cute lagegi by god!

so finally face-off on th way

continue soon

love
Aisha
Edited by Aisha.Vashishth - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
I have quality comments!!! I do...I swear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
olalalalaa ...😉... pyaar insaaan ko badal detaaa hai ...romantic dance ...... continue soon 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Really nice dear Bhavna
Ab to maza aayega
I will love to see shree n sasha encounter
Thanks for the PM Bhavna
Awesome update
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88


Now this is very sweet😳

Finally the face off!😉 Wonder what will happen to Shree when he comes to know who Sasha is😆 Bechare ka heart fail ho jayega😛

Loved the nok jhok bhara episode👏

P.S: In real life too people dance at small parties kya?😕 I always thought it was a filmy situation! Just asking! Not been to many parties😛
Edited by -Carrie- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@Zuby

well zuby...in the parties i hav attended so far...there are dances on soft music..bt they r not always romantic dances...

jst i remember one of th parties where all th couples were asked to dance...nd i ws damn perplexed abt wat to do...hope u undrstnd...

bt in the social gatherings we even dance with the uncles and aunties...lolz
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
unresed my cmmnt on pg 12

precap!
O emm jeee!

romantic dance of shree and sashaa...ye padhke kahi meri chotisi princess behosh na ho jae...one thing is for sure...

ab iske baad to sashaa ki fav writer on forum tum hi ban jaogi... :-D

i m waiting to see her happiness and blush dripping face whn she reads this!

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