T2- RNP- Pt 41 - Pg 60, 10-Jul - Page 27

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36 A

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Arjun had settled in his flat and was adjusting with the situation. He had stopped fighting within himself and with Sameer and Annu close to him he felt at peace.
But the fire within him was still raging and he had not lost his focus.
He had found a new friend and confidante in Annu and he admired her a lot. He remembered how Roshni had predicted that Sameer will get a lovely life-partner and her words came true.
Sameer was happy that Annu and Arjun bonded well. Though he was sceptical at times fearing that Annu might remind Arjun of his past and which might send Arjun back to his shell, but he decided to give them their own space. In a way it was good for him that Arjun was getting involved in other things too which kept him away from Sameer's secret mission.
Annu sympathised with Arjun and took utmost care not to hurt him because she knew this would not only hurt Arjun but Sameer too. She knew this matter was very sensitive. She knew it was unfair that Sameer kept Arjun away from Sikandar's case, but she also knew that Sameer was doing it because he cared for Arjun. She also made sure not to mention anything about the case or Aisha to Arjun.
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As Sameer and Rishi had discussed, they had to wait for monsoon to get over and let the gang make their moves. Because any kind of action of trying to get information
from Mandwa or Pathan's inner circle would raise suspicion. So it was best to leave the situation the way it was and make Pathan and his boss feel that no one is on
their trail. And once the gang came into action, Rishi and Aisha were there to take a stalk of situation and inform Sameer.

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Now with Arjun doing fine and Aisha being safe with Rishi, Sameer decides to take a break and go for his honeymoon which he had to postpone.
He calls up the travel agent and fixes the dates and informs his parents.
Suman was very happy to know this.
Next week Sameer and Annu leave for their honeymoon to Kerala.
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Edited by bgargate - 11 years ago
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Part 36 B

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Away from all this, he was sitting in a small fishing boat at Mandwa Jetty looking at the Gateway of India from his old pair of binoculars thinking about many things
at a time. This was the place he used to spend hours sitting and looking at Gateway of India in his teenage years and dreaming to make it big there. There was a wicked
smile on his face. He thought he had actually made it big, but in reality, he was inching closer to his doom.
Many things flashed in front of his eyes.
No one is born evil, nor was he. He was born in a poor fisherman's family. He was the only child and was pampered by his parents. They named him Vijay. Although they
were poor, they still tried their best to give their son all they could afford. They just wanted him to continue in their family profession of fishing but Vijay wanted
more. He wanted to try his luck in Mumbai.
Vijay was determined to go there and his parents had to give in to his demands. But what he didn't know that in reality, the city of dreams, Mumbai, was very cruel. He
was one of those unfortunate young men who fall prey to greed and lust for power and don't even realise that it is taking them closer to their destruction.
Very soon he was trapped in the world of illusions and got involved in criminal activities for quick money, from pick-pocketing to small time drug dealings. What he
thought was fun and timepass giving his easy money was actually taking him to the darker alleys of criminal world and he never knew that one day he will be the king of
this world.
His parents warned him when they realised what their son was up to, but he didn't pay any heed to them. The poor couple didn't have a choice but to watch their son
turning into a monster. Their dream of having a happy and cozy family with their son had shattered and they passed away hoping that their son would realise the truth
one day and will come back to them, but it never happened.
He started working for a gang in Mumbai, was involved in gang wars, contract murders, got lucky in few encounter attacks by police. Very soon, a simple village boy
Vijay Nakhwa became Viju Sharpshooter and became a headache for Mumbai Police.
And one day, he killed his own boss to become the boss himself. But he knew what he did to his boss, can happen to him too. And he knew he cannot trust anyone in the
criminal world. And to keep his position intact, he first eliminated his boss's loyal members and finished the old gang. He had a plan in his mind, but for that, he
needed someone whom he could trust for lifetime. That is when he met Pathan Lala. Pathan was another unfortunate and disillusioned young man.
Pathan was an orphan and was raised in an orphanage. As a child, he was a victim of rebuke by orphanage warden and this made him a rebel and he ran away from
orphanage. He was exceptionally sharp and was in need of money and Viju took advantage of this.
Viju offered Pathan an equal partnership in his business and kept him in front and recruited new gang members, which were similar greedy young bys who were ready to do anything for quick money.
Later Viju planned his own fake death and as per police records, Vijay Nakhwa was dead and the gang was being run by Pathan. Vijay returned back to Mandwa and assumed the identity of Sikandar and put up at a secluded beach which was known as a haunted beach among locals and no one visited it. He also changed his look to scare people so that no one ever came close to him.
He was in touch with Pathan Lala instructing him on gang operations. Pathan too obeyed all the orders from his boss and never betrayed him because he knew Viju was
ruthless and would not hesitate to eliminate him if he found anything wrong. He knew, Viju, now known as Sikandar, had contacts in police department, who helped him
prove him dead as per records and can use them anytime.
No one from his gang or his contacts from police department ever interfered in his business. His activities were going on in full swing when he suffered a major
setback.
A new police officer had created a mess for him. He challenged his rule. Even Pathan found it difficult to deal with him and in one of the shootout, this new officer
shot Pathan Lala in leg and left him handicapped for life. This enraged Sikandar. He gathered all the information about this new man.
Arjun Suryakant Rawte was the name of the man who dared to stop Sikandar. He personally threatened Arjun, but Arjun did not take him seriously. Sikandar was in fact happy that Arjun chose to ignore his threat which made things easier for him.
His men kept a watch on Arjun on that fateful day and kept him informed about his whereabouts. Of course he knew that there was only one man other than in Arjun's
life, who would do anything to help Arjun, Sameer Rathod. He knew Sameer would try to help Arjun personally and this was the reason, he did not forget to tell his men
to puncture Sameer Rathod's vehicle. And things happened as he wanted them to.
And when he was about to kill his enemy, he saw his weakness, his wife and chose to kill her in front of Arjun and leave him alive to live in fear and resentment. And
later eliminated Joint Commisioner Kapoor too.

But did not forget him as he knew Arjun Rawte was now a wounded tiger and was even more dangerous. For all these years was keeping a track of the happenings in his
enemies' life to make sure that when his big task happens, no one interferes. He had some things to worry and some things that he thought he can take advantage of. He
was worried that his biggest enemy was returning back to his normal life. His informers told him that he was back to his home and close to his best friend.
He was also aware that his enemy's best friend and his second biggest enemy, had recently got married and his wife was a simple girl next door, just like Roshni. He
knew she would be his bait in case these two officers again try to mess with him.
For executing his most risky task he was totally relying on his most loyal accomplice Pathan Lala. Though he had doubts about new people in gang gaining prominence
but he chose to leave it to Pathan because it was more risky for him to come in front.
Things were going as he wanted them to. Pathan kept him updated about the happenings.

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So, how was it? Some shocks and surprises 😉...
Do let me know in case u find any bloopers or anything that doesn't look convincing 😊
No precaps as I m yet to draft the next part 😊
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Bhavna
Edited by bgargate - 11 years ago
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mubaraka...
akhir writer ko yaad aa gya k wo ye story likh rhi hai 😆


sorry agar apke res k bich me aayi to 😉


unres

ahaan...chalo kuch to yaad aaya k story update krni thi...finally sanu going for honeymoon 😉


annu aur arjun ki equations bhi milne lge hai...aur sam bhi unke bich me nhi padta accha hai...kyun dosto k bich me haddi ban na


ahaan sikander ki entry akhir ho hi gyi...sikander ka past...👍🏼

kaise vijay se viju aur viju se sikander bana...superb...

ye kya sikander ki nazar ab annu pr...sikander ko ladkiyon me kuch zyda hi interest hai...pehle roshni ko target banaya aur ab annu pr nazar hai...
Edited by chulbuliannu - 11 years ago
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unres...
Arjun & annu's bonding is beautiful.
Ayesha...Rishi are save & case is proceeding slowly & gradually. It's a good thing.
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Sikander's story was the best part.
Many writers skip writing on villains & their back stories.
I am glad you added that part.
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Sik is keeping track on Sam-jun.😲
He will target Annu...coz she is Sam-jun's week point.
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Finally Sam is planning a honeymoon...Yay
Edited by laila1994 - 11 years ago
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*unre*
awesome and amazing update.
Loved it a lot..
Chalo..
Update mila toh sahi...
Issi baat pe congrats to all...
Connection of samjun,aisha and sikander shown really well...
Paisa ko hi sabse upar rakhte ha,asie bohut log hai duniya mein..
When Bhai got to knw what Annu wants,he decided to give her some space...
Charecterization was awesome...
Continue sooonish...
Thanks for the pm.
Edited by ...anika... - 11 years ago
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It was a beautifully written elaborating the character was yhe best thing and luved truely kbhi kbhi sapno ko oura krte samay hunein khudh nhi pta chlta ki vo sahi hai ya glt... Aur jb pta chlta hai toh der jo jaati hai
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice. Like it.. Thanks for pm..
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Loved it Bhavna dear
Awesome chalo update to diya 😆
But really nice sikander , samjun & kapoor connection was really good
Totally justified & to the point
Finally sameer understood what annu was trying to do
& he agreed to give them space
So sikander background was well written
& thats true some people hold mony as top priority
Thanks for the Pm
Continue soon 😊😊

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