Sameer Rathod OS: Teri Parchayee *completed*

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Posted: 11 years ago
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"Diya,apne Paa se kahiye hum unse baat nahi karenge.."

"Par,kyun Maa? Paa ne aisa kya kiya jo aap unse baat nahi karengi? (turns towards her Paa) Paa,aapne kuch kiya? Maa ki baat nahi suni aapne?"

"Woh... Woh... Beta.. Paa ne apni dawai nahi li.. Paa ko kal se bukhar thha.. Kaam ke wajeh se Paa ne dawaai lena bhul gaye..." Sameer says to his 4-year old daughter,in a scared tone.

"KYAAA?????? Hum aur Maa aapse baat nahi karenge.. Aapne dawaai kyun nahi li? Abhi chaliye humare saath? Hum aapko dawaai dete hai... Jabtak aap dawaai nahi lenge,tabtak hum aapke aakhon ke saamne se nahi hatenge,Samjhhe ya samjhau,Paa?"

"Yeh dialogue aapne kahaan se sikha,Diya beta?" Ayesha asked.

"Arjun chachu kehte hai,Maa... Ab se yeh hi kehke Paa se har baat manwaungi... Chaliye,Paa... Have your medicine..."

"Jo hukm,meri Diya..."

*Flashbacks ends*

"Paa,apne dawaai li?" Diya asked.

"Haan beta,humne dawaai le li aur khana bhi kha liya... Ab hum aur aap dono walk pe chalenge..."

"Behtar hai,Paa... Aapne pura khaya na?"

"Haan beta,humne pura khaya hai... Chaliye.. Aap ready hojaiye... Hum bhi ready hoke aate hai..."

"Chaliye,Paa... Jaldi taiyaar hojaiye,warna Maa humein daatengi..."

"Haan... Agar Ayesha dattne pe khari hogayi,toh,meri khaer nai.. Chalo..."

"Haan,Paa..."

After getting ready,Diya and her Paa,National ETF Chief,Sameer Rathod,went for a walk in the nearby park.. Before leaving,Diya and Sameer went to the terrace and gave a flying kiss to Ayesha,who resided in the sky... Aayesha dies few years ago because she suffered from acute leukaemia.. Since then,Diya and Sameer became each other's support and took care of each other...

Diya has inherited all the good qualities from her mother,late DCP Aayesha Sameer Rathod,that's why.Sameer doesnt feel that Aayesha has left the world... The way Diya looks after the whole house and her father,it makes Sameer feel that Aayesha is alive,in Diya...

~The End~.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Zebbie ji...log update ki wait karing!🤢
Jaldi jaldi postwa kari dio!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: MriduB

Zebbie ji...log update ki wait karing!🤢

Jaldi jaldi postwa kari dio!


karungi,Mridu darling.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved it Zaibee
this brought tears in my eyes😭
Loved diya n bonding with her father n chahu
Thanks for the PM
Awesome OS 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG that's quite senti yaar...!!!!
The way Diya sys Sam was superb...!!!!!
Loved how Diya took care of her paa...!!!!
Awww Aisha died coz of leukemia...!!!!!
Loved it...!!! thanks for pm dr...!!!!
Beautiful ending...!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome OS..i really didnt understand until i read it full..it was beautiful..😳😳

do write something like this again😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful Zee Doll...loved it!!! ❤️❤️ Love Diya!! ❤️ Thanxx fr pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice ending...
Aisha died...😭😭😭
Liked Sam & Diya's bonding...
Thanks for PM...
Plzzz plzzz can u write Raesha plzzz
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fantastic zebi di
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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rula dia anni...
its so touching..
plz updt soon

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