FF: Precocious Rawte. chapter 26, p.67 - Page 36

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Posted: 11 years ago
Ch 14

Mele addu ko kitni asani se utha lia ...
ab dekhna iska natija...
n turkey kya?? har type k dance k liye ready ho jao kidnappers!

ekbar revenge ka bhoot chadh gya addu k sir pe to kuch nai kar paoge tumlog...

Addu..well done buddy..he dropped clues!

Hope they find them soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
ch 15

arey meri hassi ruk hi nai rahi...
i kept laughing in d whole update...
Aa gya mela Addu form me...

Abhi to bas shurwaat hai...agey agey dekho..hota hai kya...

Goga n billu...maza a gya...sidhe 3rd floor se ground floor..arey bapree!

keep it up addu...
chalo..etf v a gyi work mode me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Roshni's outburst...amazing!!!
mai has has k pagal na ho jau..
it was wonderful...
poor mom...can understand her state well...
Now the team is hellbent on finding addu...
great...ab to aadu ko mom ne permission bhi de di...

ab ye bacha prove karega..k bachchon ko sambhalna..bachchon ka kam nai hai...

great goin addu...ab aja asli form me
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Posted: 11 years ago
i m in love with roshni's blasting off sessions ...
sachi..ek no ke gadhe hai..
nipple ko pirrce nai kia..n dudh pila rahe hai..
dumbheads!
addu peed on his face... hot geyser... awesome!

Addu ko godi lene ka man karta hai...
he is so smart...
ab chala phone lagane!

but call connected?? how??
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Posted: 11 years ago
addu addu addu...
i love him so much...
kya aag lagai seene me goga ki...

ye pakka bada hoke rawte family ka naam roshan karega...

well...seriously...smoke karte karte koi kaise so sakta hai...

Hmm..sad...but ab etf ko kuch plan karna hoga lala n cash ke liye...
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Posted: 11 years ago
ch 18

a well balanced chapter... fun..plus a bit touchy...
haha.. this tym addu ke bina kuch kiye hi bahut kuch ho gaya...

Jasmine..n d cockroach...

hotel ka manager agli baar in logon ko hotel se bahar fek dega...

gud for them...bar bar yelog notice me a rahe hai...ETF ka kaam asaan ho jayega...

Arjun roshni..they r so much worried...beta hai afterall...its really a horrible feeling to think that ur kid is in danger..
but the team cheered them well..
n then the jasmine's part... very touching..
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ch 19
Addu...hatts off to u my baby!

Kya maze kara rahe ho tum..
aww..rosh ko samajh a gya k cockroach incident uske bete ka kamaa hai...
haye bhagwaan..

ab spider...yaiks..Addu ne phn tod dia..hehehe...

is baar bhi hotel wale bahar a gye...good abto sabko doubt bhi ho gya hai...

maza ayega
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh em gee...

billu goga n jasmine ki halat pe hassi a rahi thi mujhe. ...

addu ne khoob sataya...

ab ETF ka kaam v almost done ...

addu ne sleeping pills daal diye... great...

ab ayega maza...

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Posted: 11 years ago
whoa whoa...

Aadu made them dance to his tunes so well..
Jasmine arrested. ...gud...
ab ayi goga ki baari...

roshni ke sweet addressals mujhe hasa hasa k pagal bana dete hai...

but potty n susu command q dilaya?
goga...saree ...hahaha...
billu...n uska sona...

all thanks to our darling addu...

plz update soon...
n add me in ur buddy list too...
n do pm me wen u update...
yesterday sneha di asked me to read this...n trust me..i loved it...
u r just an awesome writer...

BTW...u bengali? read rimi di's last cmmnt..dats y i askd!
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Posted: 11 years ago
@ Ishita...congratulations for reading this...& thanks a lot for your chapterwise feedback...& for loving it too.
I tried to make a story on an intelligent kid...so this story came up. Kids are generally cut and adorable...so is our Addu.
But you are too lucky...you have your own bundle of joy...you can shower all your love to him, which you want to give Addu...just imagine he's Addu.
And stay with my Addu also..he's growing up.

And yes, I'm bangali.

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