Os: a true luv story

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Posted: 11 years ago
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guyz aj kuch aisa likhne jaa rahi hu jo meine apni akho se dekha hai .ek sachchi kahani .i know tum logo ko thoda boring lagegi bcoz this is not an ariya story .but usme kya ???? ariya story to fiction hai ...par aj to ek sachchi luv story likhne jaa rahi hu .kyu na aj ek sachcha pyaar ka namuna hi dekh le 😊

Frnds baki logo ki pata nehi par mein kav v ye sachcha pyaar ki existance par believe nehi karti thi .mein hamesha sochti thi ki aisab pyaar ki kahani sirf film,serial ya kitabo me hi hote hai .real life me haar insaan apni swaarth ka piche bhagta rehta hai .usk liye dusro k liye sochne ka waqt kaha .par jab meine apni cousin(meri mousi ki beti) ko dekha mujhe ehsaas ho gaya mein kitni galaat thi .

Aur jyaada bakbak nehi karungi .chalo dekhte hai akhir kya hua tha ...

[Sabse pehle bata du i m not going 2 use the real name .mein jo v likhungi wo mujhe meri behen ki diary se mila ]


Its a story of a girl & a boy .


Chracters :

Tanya :my cousin sister .23 years old .student of IR 3rd yr .

Akash :tanya's luver .24 years old .student of IR final year .

Archi :its me .

Tanvi:my another cousin sister .tanya's younger sis .


Its about 1 year b4.

The day of valentine's day ...

every year the university observes this day with great festival .

Tanya came 2 the university wearing a red & white coloured salwar suit .having her matching jwelleries ,shoes looking just an angel .

She entered into the college campus .

Her frnds came 2 her & praising her 4 her beautiful looks .

They started teasing her as she was so blashing 😳

After few minutes she bcame desperate as she still didn't meet him

Tanya (MV):ye akash kaha reh gaye ??? Usse to ab tak aajana chahiye tha

Suddenly her phone started ringing

She looked at the caller id & a big smile appeared on her face 😃

she picked up the phone

Tanya :akash tum kaha ho ??? kab se mein tumari intezaar kar rahi hu .sab log aa gaye .par meri bf hi gayab hai . 😡

Akash :achsa baba i m sry .actually jam me fas gaya tha

Tanya :par ab tum ho kaha ????

Akash :mein university gate par hu .

Tanya :to tum campus k andar ayi kyu nehi ???

Akash :kyu ki meine tai kiya aj hum ek saath tym spend karenge .sirf hum dono .campus k andar to hamari baki dost v rahenge .hum ek saath tym thodi hi bita payenge .wo log to jab dekho hum dono ko tease karne pe busy rehti hai .aur aj ka din ka mauka to chodega hi nehi .tum ek kam karo campus k bahar chale ao .dhayaan rakhna kisiko shakh na ho .mein campus k bahar hi hu .

Tanya :ok mein aa rahi hu 😊

Tanya came out of campus & found him standing wearing a white color shirt & a cream color jeanse ,a sun glass in eyes just looking like her prince charming .

She came 2 him

Tanya :wow akash !!! aj to bade ranvir kapoor ki tarah style marke aye ho ...

Akash :tum v to dipika padukone ki tarah lag rahi ho 😉

Tanya :just shut up !!! Ab bolo plan kya hai ???

Akash :filhaal chalo koi resturant pe chalte hai .

Tanya :ok 😊

They went 2 a resturant & having their lunch

After that they went 4 a long drive

when they returned 4m long drive its almost afternoon

They again came back 2 the university & going 2 enter in the campus

But akash stopped

Akash :tanya ,just wait 4 five minutes .i m coming

Tanya (shouted 4m bhind):par tum jaa kaha rahi ho .

But akash already went quite away

He crossed the road & went 2 a flower shop

He bought a red rose bouket & returning 4m the opposite side

Tanya saw the red roses in his hand & a big smile appeared on her face

Tanya (MV):ye totally pagal hai 😃

But in a second every thing set destroyed

Akash was hit by a bus when he crossing the road

Tanya was totally numb 4 a while

He was lying on the road .

The road was covered with his blood

tanya rushed 2 him .he was unconcious

Ambulance immediately came

In ambulance ...

Tanya holding his hand

In other hand he still holding the flowers

He got his concious

Tanya looked at him with teary eyes

He just smiled

He forward the flowers 2 tanya .tanya took the flowers & started crying badly

Akash :hey tanya ...plz don't cry .tum rote hue bilkul ek dayaan ki tarah lagte ho

Tanya didn't respond him back 2day

She still crying

Akash slid his hand in his shirt pocket & brought out a little gift box

He gave it 2 tanya

Akash :khol kar dekhoge nehi ????

tanya opened it .it was a beautiful ear ring set .tanya just smiled & akash also smiled back

But pain was totally visual on his face

He took her hand

Akash :hap..py ...valen...tines ...da ...y

Saying this he just took his last breath

In a second their world destroyed


After one week ...

In midnight my phone started ringing .i was studying in sleepy eyes .i took the phone & looked at the caller id .

It was tanvi

Me:hello tanvi ,kaisi hai tu ???

Tanvi :not gd archi .di is still in shocking state .kuch kha pee nehi rahe hai ,kisi se bate nehi kar rahi hai .bus chupchap apni kamre me baithi rehti hai .

Me :don't wry yr .hota hai aisa .dheere dheere sab kuch thik ho jayenge .wo akash ko v vul jayenge ...

Tanvi :i hope so 😕


After 6 months ...

i went 2 visit them & found her normal as b4

I took tanvi in a corner

Me :hey tanvi di to bilkul pehle ki tarah normal baan chuki hai

Tanvi :ha yr .but mujhe thoda weird lagi .i mean wo achanak se hi ek din subha uthkar sabse pehle ki tarah behave karna suru kardi .but we r happy she is back 😊

Me :shayaad unhe ye ehsaas ho gaya hoga ki kissi k liye kisi ki zindegi rukti nehi .ek din koi aur unke zindegi me ayega aur wo sab kuch vul jayegi . 😊


But after 3 months ...

My phone started ringing .

It was tanvi .

Me :ha tanvi bolo ???

Tanvi (cryingly):archi ,di ... 😭

Me :Kya hua di ko ??? 😲

Tanvi :unhone suicide karli .she is no more .

I was totally shocked

Yes ,she did suicide jumping 4m 16th floor .


After one month ...

i was just checking my emails after long tym

Suddenly my gaze fall on .one email .

It was 4m tanya di .

She sent it 2 me b4 2 hours ago of her suicide .

I immediately opened it & started reading .

"Archi ,jab tum ye email pad rahi hogi tab tak shayaad mein iss duniya se jaa chuki hongi .tum soch rahi ho mein apni marne se pehle tumhe ye email kyu veja .dr ,tum meri one of fav cousin ho .mein janti hu tum mujse bohot pyaar karte ho .uss din meine tumari aur tanvi ki convo suni .tumari nazariya se tum bilkul sahi the .par mein chahkar v usse vula nehi paya .bohot koshish ki par hua nehi .jo hamari jeene ki wajah hai agar hum unhe hi vul jaye to jeeyenge kaise? par uske bina v to jiya nehi jaa sakta .issi liye mujhe ye rasta chunna pada .bcoz mein har chuki hu iss dil aur dimag ki khel me .plz mujhe maaf kar dena .aur yahi dua karungi ki tumhe kav kisise itna pyaar na ho .alvida ..."

a long tear drop fell 4m my eyes .



Guyz i don't know par mujhe bohot guilty feel hota hai ye sochkar ki meine unki pyaar ko na samaz kar kitna insult ki .kav kav ye sochti hu ki shayaad ye email mein ussi waqt padli hoti to aj shayaad di hamare saath hoti .mein unse sry keh pati .meine yeh story aj likhi bcoz aj unki barsi hai .agar meine tum logo ko hurt kiya to plz forgive me

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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
It was really heart touching hunny
it was really touching to read such stuff
it will be more heart wrenching for u as today is her barsi
but thats true jo aapke jeene ki vajah ho wahi chala jaaye to aap
yahi kar sakte hoo 😭😭😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this is vry sad n heart touching real life story...i wish no one goes through this phase in life.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
Dua karungi ki kisi aur ko yeh sab sehen na karna pare.
U r true.
''Agar jeene ki wajah hi khatam ho jao,toh jee ke kya fayda?''
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5
Sachi bolu toh im a very emotional person n after reading dis i literally hav tears in my eyes 😭 dis is soo sad..i wish aisa kisi ke saath na ho...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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aww it was so heart touching may ur counsins n her bf's soul rest in peace really a true luv story jo aaj kal nhi dekhne ko milta hope sab itne lucky hote
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow wht a heart touching love story...!!!
It's impossible to find such kind of love anymore...!!
May their souls rest in peace...!!!!
Raginishana thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#8
So sweet so heart touching really beautiful
Asapom thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#9
i don't have words to express
it's awesome !!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#10
omg i feel very sad for you
i will surely pray for her
i know it hurts if you love someone and lose him you feel suffocated but i haven't stopped living
may their souls rest in peace

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