ArAkShI FF:Stages Of a Relationship..Anybody interested in Updates? :) - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
hi sakshi
nice cs 👍🏼
do cont soon 😊
thanks for pm 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Arjun and Saakshi stories are always welcome

Please do continue.

Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oye hoye new FF..kya baat hain 😳
Im always ready to read your work..soo continue soon 👍🏼
All the best 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Concept is good
But please do continue soon and regularly basis
It's make story more interesting
If update after long time
It ruin excitement and sometime you forget
Where you stand
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice concept ... Continue it soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello freinds...me back early just for one reason...to know your openion...as this one is new for me..as in its totally different from the show so I was bit restless...to your openions...Please DO lemme know your views...AND also because of the note at the bottom...see ya...!!! No proof reading done...ab tak to aap logo ko bhi meri mistakes ki adat ho gai hogi nai ?? 😆

(Banner banaya tha but save nai hua...😡 coz of net...so jab i'll get bored from my kitaabs...i'll make one and upload...wich will again depent on my net..)


Stages of a relationship...

Chapter 1...

'Yar i'm soo excited...aj college ka pehla din...!! Wow...kitna maza aega nah...!!!' exclaimed Sakshi

'Maza?? Kya khaak maza aega?? Yar mujhe to dar lag raha hai...' replied Liza

'Dar?? Aur vo kyu ??' said Sakshi getting up from her bed...

'Aur nahi toh kya...college ka pehla day matlab...Ragging bhool gai kya ??' said Liza taking her clothes to go for shoew..

'Pagal hai kya..?? Koi ragging wagging nai hogi...We are in a Law and Jounalism college...yaha ragging hogi tab to ho gya ...!!' said sakshi making it obvious...

(I know we have different colleges for both these courses I guess lekin Arakshi ko sath lana hai toh inko toh sath lana hi hoga nah..!! 😆)

'Haan haan tu toh aise bol rai hai as if...Deen se permission leke ragging hoti hai...chup chup ke har college main ragging hoti hai samjhi nah...!! said Liza from the washroom...

'You are mad...aisa kuch nai hoga...aur vaise bhi tu mere sath rehna...mai sambhal lungi now come out fast...warna we will get late...Mujhe bhi taiyaar hona hai...!' said Sakshi..

Arjun's House...

Yar Arjun..ye college kitni jaldi start ho rae hain yaar...!!' said Shree

Jaldi ??Picle 2 mahino se tu vallay giri kar raha hai..!! Aur kita rest chaie tujhe haan ?? Its time to get serious dude...ab ye masti thodi kam kar de...!!' replied Arjun combing his hair

'Usey vallay giri nai masti kehte hain mere bhai..!Aur tu keh raha hai now its time to get serious? Tu toh hamesha hi serious mode me rehta hai...!!' said Shree

'Use serious nahi Silent mode kehte hain dude...' said Arjun

'Haan haan vahi...!! said Shree getting into the washroom..

'Yar jaldi kar Shree...kitna time lega..!!' said Arjun getting impatient

'Dude college ka pehla din hai...we should look perfect...! Kehte hain na...first impression is the last impression...' said Shree from inside

'As if I care...!!! Arjun shot back...

'You don't need to mere bhai...school time mein bhi sari ladkiya tujhpe marti thi...it yaha bhi there wont be any different...' Shree said coming out..

'Please dude...dont say that...pagal ho gaya tha school mein toh..I really hope college main aisa kuch na ho...' said Arjun taking deep breath

'In your dreams mere bhai ..in your dreams...!!' said shree

'Chal chaleing ab...? Ya aur 10-15 kapde try karne hain tujhe??' Said Arjun grabbing his Bike keys...

Sakshi's PG

'Sakshi jaldi kar na...kitna time legi...!! Late ho jaenge pehle hi din..!!' said Liza

'Abhi toh 20 minutes hain Liza...! Hum araam se pohoch jaenge...!! said Sakshi

'Oh really..!! Yaha se college pohochne mein almost 20 minutes lagte hain...!'said Liza

'Oho don't worry ..Lizi...mai hoon na...hum time pe pohoch jaenge...Chill !!' said Sakshi grabbing her bag

'Yeah right jab tu itni rash driving karti hai na...toh main apne aap chill ho jati hoon...!! said Liza


'Usey rash nai baby fast kehte hain...aj tak kabhi bhi car mere control se baha gai hai? Nai nah...so just relax...How am I looking ?? said Sakshi looking herself last time in the mirror...

'Gorgeous as always...!! Ab chalein...!! said Liza dragging her out..

IN THE COLLEGE

'Sameer aj toh freshers a rae hain..we need to be careful...Tum college ke GS ho...so its your responsibility to take care ki koi bhi misbehave na kare...' said Ayesha

'Haan Ayesha I know...and its even your responsibility firstly being AGS and secondly my girlfriend...!!' said Sameer winking at her

'Yeah right...but let me tell you agar kisi ne ragging karne ki koshish bhi ki...toh no warning haan...direct action...we cant be lenient towards them...!' said Ayesha in a serious tone..

'I know jaan...but you control yourself...you wont take action...let the dean decide OK..!!' said sameer warning her

'Fine i'll try my best...waise aj toh Arjun bhi join kar raha hai na ?? That guy jo tumse courses ke bare mein puchta rehta hai...he is quite studious types I must say...!!' said Ayesha

'Haan studious toh hai...but masti bhi bohot karta hai..!! said Sameer

'Really?? Lagta to nai hai ?? Humesha hi serious types dikhta hai...' said Ayesha

'Haan hai serious...but jab friends ke sath rehta hai...i mean mere sath rehta hai..then he is totally different...I mean full of masti and mischief and Pranks I must say...!! Actually real Arjun is really different from what you or others have seen...' said Sameer smiling a bit.

'Thats interesting...and what about that guy with him...jo uske sath uske ghar pe rehta hai...He is really cute and sweet I must say...' said Ayesha

'Acha Shree...haan vo Arjun ki jaan hai...his buddy cum brother...uska bachpan ka dost...Heis quite opposite Arjun...but they both get along really well...1he is also his saviour you can say...! said Sammer taking the coffee mug Ayesha brought

'Saviour?? As in??' said Ayesha settling down

'Yeah...vo Arjun ko ladkiyo se bachata hai..!! Or you can say apna chance marta hai...' said Sameer laughing

'Hahahah...thats cool..!! Ek teer se do nishane haan..!' said Ayesha sipping her coffee

IN THE CAR

'Sakshi dheere chala...please...!!!' said Liza getting panicked

'Oh ho Lizi chill..!! Tu hi toh keh rai thi ki late ho raha hai...time pe pohochna hai..!!' said Sakshi speeing up

'Haan keh rai thi...lakin college jane ke liye ...upar jane ke liye nai...vaha jane ka time abhi nai aya hai...!! said Liza

'Lizi tu aisa kar close your evey...aur dekh tere akh kholte hi we will be in college aur tujhe pata bhi nai chalega..!! said sakshi

'Haan close my eyes taki phir kabhi khule hi nah...right..!! Aur mai kab college ke bjae upar pohoch jaunhi mujhe bhi pata nai chalega..!!! said Liza

'Chal a gae...vo bhi one piece main...say thanks to me now..!!! said Sakshi

'A gae..?? Thank God i'm still alive !!' said Liza getting down

'Oho mai god nai hoon Liza ! I'm Sakshi Anand...dear !!'said Sakshi with a smile

'OH !!! To aap Miss Sakshi Anand hain..??' said a voice from behind

Both Liza and Sakshi turned aroud...

'So Miss Sakshi...I mean Miss Fresher...kaisi hain aap ??' said the boy

Liza got scared and grabbed Sakshi's hand tightly...

'Mai toh bilkul theek hu...aap kaise hai...Mr who so ever...aur aapki padhai kaisi chal rsi..?? Aur ghar mein sab thek thak..?? Aunty kaisi hain ?? Aur uncle?? Sab badhia nah...??" said Sakshi non stop

'What the...!!' he was about to say when she interfeared...

'Bad manners...!! Apne juniors ke samne ye example rakhege aap??' said Sakshi

'Zada smart banne ki zaroorat nai hai samjhi nah..!!' said a girl from behind

'I know aur kitni smart dikhungi...?? Bhagwan ne already inta smart bana ke bheja hai...aur ban gai to ap logo ka kya hoga ...so don't worry..!! replied Sakshi

'You...!!!!!' the girl came forward to slap sakshi

'Dont you dare Anamika...!!!!' came a voice from behind

'They all turned to see the person standing behind...

'Dont you even thing about doing something like that..!! Or else you know what I did with you last time...1 month ka suspension bhool gai kya?? said Ayesha

'Hey Ayesha stay away...' said rahul

'Achha?? Leeme see who's saying so?? came another voice

'What's your problem haan...tu apne kaam se kam rakh ok..!!' said Rahul

'Vai to kar raha hu dude...apna kaam...and tujhe bohot maza ati hai na..mujhe kam karte hue dekhne mein...jaha jata hai kuch na kuch aisa kar hi deta hai...ki mujhe apna kaam karna hi pad jata hai...so ...aj bhi vai karne ayah u...lunch break mein a jana ...dean ke office...apna suspension letter lene...2 -3 mahine ke liye to gandagi bahar fikwa ke hi rahoonga is bar...' said Sameer smirking

'Achha ?? Aur vo sab to tab hoga na...jab koi mere against complain karega...yaad nahi last time jis chasmish ko maine peeeta that u uska rakshak ban ke aya tha...aur usne rondu ne koi statement hi nai diya dean ke samne ?? Aur tujhe dean se kitna sunna pada tha ?? 'said Rahul smirking this time

'Uski chinta app mat kijiga...Mr who so ever...! Ill manage that...infact mai inke sath khud jaungi apki complain karne ...you relax haan..! said Sakshi

'You'll have to pay for it !!!' said Anamika

'Oh so tumhara boyfriend bikau hai ?? said Ayesha

And they all had a good laugh...!!

Rahul and Anamika retreated before giving a hard look to everyone especially to sakshi who in turn gave her million dollar smile...!! To which Ayesha and Sameer passed smiling glances...!!

'Hii...I'm Sakshi Anand...!!!' said sakshi forwarding her hand towards Ayesha

'We already know that...aur naam hi nahi hume ye bhi pata chal gaya hai ki you can be a member of our group...what say banogi ?? said Ayesha shaking her hand

'Apka group ?? said Sakshi

'Dont let go that opportunity Sakshi...Ayesha aise hi kisiko humare group mein entry nai deti...she might really be impressed..!! Waise impressed to mai bhi hu...!! And Hello I'm Sameer is college ka GS !'

'Oh wow..!! App GS ho!! said Sakshi in excitement

'Haan aur ye AGS...' said Sameer pointing towards Ayesha ...

'Wow..!! said sakshi

'So you in..??' repeated Ayesha

'Of Course..!!!! and this is Liza meri bff and roomie...and a darpok..!!' said Sakski pointing towards a frowning Liza

'Hey Liza...!! Dont worry darne ki koi zaroorat nai hai...hum sab hain na..!' said Ayesha shaking her hand

'Haan Liza...vaise bhi Ayesha hai to sab ki zaroorat hi nahi...' said sameer and they all laughed...

To Be Continued...

PRECAP : Arakshi meet...!!!

So guys...DO tell me how was it ?? Did I stood up to your expectations ??? I'm bit nervous...as this one is bit different for me so...please lemme know how you felt...

Thanks


PMs to the next update will be sent to only those who comment...NO NO update wont be through PM just PM for thew update...nai nai i'm not khaying bhav...😆 I know i'm still new here toh if i'll khao bhav you people will ...?? Pata nai synonym nai aya to ignore...😃 BUT the reason is my internet khaos bhav...ALWAYS...and my buddy list has exceeded 50...toh I have to send 2 PMs...which is veryyy time taking...toh i'll PM to those who comment ...SORRY guys but cant help...DIL..Ki Awaaz...ke PM will be sent to all...!!!!!! Bore nai hue humari bak bak sun ke??? I know hm bhi ho gae sooo Tadas...!!

Take Care

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Edited by SAKSHI.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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S2!! Its ah-mah-zing! How did ur exams go?
Edited by Sakuu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Shay !!! I just read my own update...
KITNI ZADA MISTAKES HAIN...!!!!

How do you people read and UNDERSTAND??? I was like itni mistakes ??? It was as if i dont know the E of english...got really embaressed ...!!

Dont worry guys...next time se ill try my best to proof read it...m not editing just now cz its taking a lot og time to upload it...so...next time ill give der se hi update but not before proof reading it...

Sorry for language torture haan...!!!

(Sorry applies to all except some...huh..!!! )
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sakuu

S2!! Its ah-mah-zing! How did ur exams go?


Hello..!!! Sis ji...Test was good enough...aj surprise test le liya hahhaa...toh sabki batti gul ho gai thi...but it went nice...thankfully...!!

P.S I have unressed my comment on BILji's n urz story tell hr...cz we are hardly online at the same time so...

PSS: ------------ for liking it haan...!!! Means a lottt always...>!!
😊

Edited by SAKSHI.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
hi sakshi
awesome start 👏
loved it to the core 🤗
sakshi is so bubbly par lagta hai bechari lisa fas gayi 😆
arjun yahaan bhi serious par frnds ke saath masti...thats great & shree-the flirting king 😉 😆
loved sam & ayesha...aate hi sab ek group mein gul mil gaye!!!! 😃
precap is so interesting
plz cont soon & thanks for pm yaar 😊

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