ArAkShI FF:Stages Of a Relationship..Anybody interested in Updates? :) - Page 16

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Posted: 11 years ago
hey dear
First of all big sorry was inactive since long
reading this story all togther
OMG this is super duper hit must say love arjun and sakshi in this new roles infact whole ETF team and they way you included my all time favourties from KMH nd SS omg i never imagined you will include them as sakshi's sis and jiiju honestly that was my first and most fav. TV show on investigation
Thank you so much

Well courious to know whats in that CD

PLz plz update soon and thnks for all pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey its really good and i finished it in one go, if possible please pm me also😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
pls pls update soon and
do pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Maha-Srk...

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awsum update
lovely edit & veri beautifully written love Aryan n shaina m 2 big fan of SS thanx u includes them in ur story love their wonderful relation wd each other sakshi is just a chatterbox now has develope undrstanding 4 each other w8tng 4 next n thanx 4 pm



Thanks a lott...for liking everything...hope u like as the story proceeds...

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Posted: 11 years ago

thanks a lot...

Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali

Was nice update god iss ladki ka naam sakshi nahi basanti
hona chahiye tha kitna bolti hain but i guess uske isse baat
pe arjun fida ho rahan hain 😆
Sakshis di and jiju were good i saw them in special squad
series
thanks for pm


yeah in dis story of mine she talks a lot as per now...
Thank you very much...m happy u liked dm too...

Originally posted by: Snehajain

Awesome update...

Mein bhi Aryan-Shaina ki fan hu...Thanks for including them...🤗🤗🤗 🤗🤗🤗 🤗🤗🤗 🤗🤗🤗 🤗🤗🤗 (I wish kash SS serial mein bhi unki Love story dekhate...😭)
Loved Aryan-Shaina...
LOL...Sakshi...isske pet mein koi baat nahi rehti...😆😆😆
Hawww...Sahina ko doubt ho gaya about why Arjun did all this...😲😲
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...



M really happy u liked them...
Hmm me too wanted d same but...
na na...its just her cop instincts...ul gt 2 c arjun n their bond in d coming up stories...hope u like it...

Originally posted by: PoohLover

Sakshijiii tussi neh update kiya...yeh me doing bhangra

Awww sakshi the chatterbox is shooo cute and innocent 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
Haha she said everything and then realized that she should not 🤪
Arjun and sakshi convo was too cute and love arjun pov in that 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃
Haha sakshi is sooo funny..the kalyug wale baat 🤣 🤣
Love the edit and sakshi sis and jiju 😛 😛 😛
Do contniue soon ji...being a bit selfish by asking that as i know tussi bohot busy ho 😳
Nahiin nahiin take your time..studies come first always
Love you heaps ji 🤗 🤗



Hello bil ji...hope u doing great...
yeah ull gt 2 see some more traits of sakshi as the story proceeds...
m happy u liked it...
m happy u liked d edit aswell ...u not selfish bil ji...i know u better...
yeah wl b updating soon...HOPE SO...
Love u yoo bil ji...!!

Originally posted by: magati

awesome update dear

loved her sis and jiju...
continue soon ...



thanks for liking it...
m happy u liked dm...

Originally posted by: coolRD

awsme upd8!!! mza aa gya!! luv u 4 addng Aryan-Shaina in d stry 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗 I'm a vry big fan of dem

nevr thot dt u'l mke sakshi sch a big chatr bx 😆😆 apni bak-2 se marwayegi kisi din sb ko 😆 bt I likd hr view 2wrds life 😊
stry is goin really gud.. waitng 4 ur nxt upd8 😃
nd thnx 4 d pm 😊😊



Thanks a lott for liking it...
M happy u liked their inclusion...
yeah as per now she talks a lot...
hmm...just wanted to show how perfect her life is presently according to her...n acc to arjun as well...
hope u like as d story progresses...

Originally posted by: anu91

awesome update sakshi...

edit was cute...
loved it...



thanks a lot for liking...
means a lot...

Originally posted by: PavithraKrish

hi sakshi

awesome update 👏
shaina & aryan are lovely couple 😳
i luvd the edit 😊
sakshi itni bakbak karti hai ki kisi ko bhi vishwaas nahi hoga 😆
luvd the trio's bonding 😃
thanks for pm & cont soon 😊



hello...hopw u doing great...
thanks a lot fr liking it...
m happy u liked d edit also...
yeah she talks a lot as per now...
hope u like as it proceeds...

Originally posted by: _Nikita_

Awwssmmm part
loved it
Supperbbb...
loved Aryan-Shaina...
cont sooon
thanks for PM


thank u soo very much for liking the update..
m happy u liked dm too...means a lott..



thanks a lot...means a lott..


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: yams.s

Wonderful Update

Unexpected entry of Aryan and Shaina. I have to admit Aryan was one of my favorite characters. But I would have preferred Deepika over Shaina

Anyone awesome

Continue Soon



thank u sooo much for liking it...
oh..sorry for disappointing u dre...hope its fine wid u...
thanks a lot fr liking it...

Originally posted by: zainabhassan1

awesome dear love it
shaina and aryan are so sweet
nice edit dear



thank u soo much fr liking it...
m happy u liked it...dm n d edit...
thanks

Originally posted by: sweetpari4u97

amazing update.

aryan and shaina are too good. loved their bonding with sakhi..
thankx for pm.



thanks a lot for liking it...
m happy u liked dm...hope u like as it progresses...
thanks

Originally posted by: Aisha.Vashishth

first things first...!
Thanks a ton to take Aryan and Shaina on board!
i jst loved them!
Special Squad was...and always be my fav crime thriller show!

though i liked Aryan and Deepika more...but i even loved Shaina!

now this story has become more special fotr me...
i m so mch missing th whole SS team!

if u ever decide to write on them... plz do pm me!

Arakshi ws also very nice...
bt sorry to say...i couldnt give attn to thm...as i ws fully into Aryan and Shaina

continue soon

love
Aisha



M really happy u liked it...!!
Yeah mine to...loved dm...
sorry 2 disappoint u dre...but hope u still liked d update...
i know...n m happy u liking it as well...
i would love to...may b after my exams...n wlll let u know for sure n would love to get ur feedback...till dn hope u like dm here...
i can understand me too...which was visible in update...more of dm as compared to arakshi bt it ws imp 2 show their equations wid sakshi...
hope u like as the story progresses...

Originally posted by: Rehana25

Oh my god what a edit my my I love Aryan shaina and whole team of SS it's show similar to Arjun but end is really bad
I feel very sorry for Aryan and entire team of SS
I am afraid that could be same happen with our beloved Arjun
But very nice-update I really enjoy the convo between them
Love it yaar. Do continue soon



m really happy u liked them...
yeah much similar ...but end was ...
I feel worst for Kuljeet ma'am...and SS as well..
i hope not...though m ready to take anything now...n will take out d juice of positivity for wt ever dey show in d last epis...
m really happy u liked it...means a lot...


Originally posted by: Anjali.Mital

Very nice update dear...
An interesting one...

I was not a follower of that show...
So I am not familiar with those characters...
But I really loved them in this as Sakshi's di and jiju...

Sakshi was so cute in this...
Cont. soon...
Thanks for the pm...



thank you soo much for liking it...
i hope my writing helps u a bit in understanding...n m able to do atleast a % of justice to their character as well...

m happy u liked dm d way i potrayed..means a lot...

Originally posted by: jahanvi111

this update was awesome
aryan and sakshi as jiju saali was great 😊
and also i saw aryan and shaina in special squads
but there was less arakshi
in nxt update pls let it be only arakshi
update soon



thank u so much for liking it...

m happy u liked them...
i know there was less ..sorry for that...but just wanted to put forward d equation dey share wid sakshi n later arjun hopefully...so was necessary...n only arakshi...may be not dt possible in d very next update but yeah as d story proceeeds ul get more n more of arakshi n at a point only arakshi...hope u like d way i have thought to go forward wid it...
but sorry for disappointing you...will try my best though n wl keep in mind...

Originally posted by: snehalovegurti

hey dear

First of all big sorry was inactive since long
reading this story all togther
OMG this is super duper hit must say love arjun and sakshi in this new roles infact whole ETF team and they way you included my all time favourties from KMH nd SS omg i never imagined you will include them as sakshi's sis and jiiju honestly that was my first and most fav. TV show on investigation
Thank you so much

Well courious to know whats in that CD

PLz plz update soon and thnks for all pm



hey welcome back...n no sorry pls i understand...nt to forget i did miss ur feedbacks...
m really very happy i didnt disappoint you,...yeah earlier i thot just 2 include karan a kittu...i never saw KMH but my mum used to watch dt show so i knew bt dn saw dm in a show on V...but dn i wanted to write abt SS as i was missing dm 2 b honest...so all of a sudden thought 2 include dm..m happy u liked dm...

Originally posted by: shymali

hey its really good and i finished it in one go, if possible please pm me also😊



m really happy u liked it...
will do so for sure..bt hope u in my buddy list..cz dn it becomes easier...n thanks fr liking..

Originally posted by: jahanvi111

pls pls update soon and
do pm me



wl try to do asap...
n wl surely pm u..hope u r in my buddy list..it becomes easier so...
thanks fr liking...

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Posted: 11 years ago


Stages Of A Relationship

Hello friends me back with another part...Hope you like it though...I have this time replied personally to all of you maily because it was long I dint do so and secondly I wanted coz your feedbacks were realted to this close to me part...I mean SS...especially Shaina..N m really happy u enjoyed it...and an apology to those I disappointed...Hope you like but...will be looking forward for your feedbacks...thanks...

RECAP

What has kyu rahe ho..!!' Sakshi said in irritation

Kuch nahi abhi tak yakeen nahi ho raha ki tum actually unki behen ho...' he said

Soon everyone came...they talked to the doctor and he discharged Arjun...

...

CHAPTER 9

In The Car

CD mili ? Kyat ha usmein ??' Arjun asked Shree in his ears

Tu khud hi dekh lena...' he said and gave him the CD...

Aur un logo ka...?' he asked

Itna bhi bevkoof nahi hain ki tere gusse ke liye chod de...they are suspended ...for 6 months...!!' Shree said and winked

Bas..??!!!' Arjun said in anger

Haan dude this was maximum we could do ...because us CD mein as such bhi nahi tha...and vo toh Sameer ke gusse ke karan dean sir man gae..He said he wont leave them if no strict action is taken toh dean sir ko college ki reputation ke karan unhe suspend karna pada...' Shree said and Arjun nodded though unsatisfied

They all left...Sameer and Rishabh decided to stay with Arjun and Shree ...

They dropped the girls at their places...

AT NIGHT

Arjun's House...

Shree CD laga nah...!!' Arjun said lying on the bed for 5th time

Yaar kal dekh lena nah...aisa bhi kuch nahi hai...relax...' Shree said

Vo mai decide kar loonga ki kuch hai ya nahi...mera laptop discharge ho gaya hai...ya to apna password bata ya CD chala ke de...ABHI..!!!' Arjun said

Yaar tu toh peeche pad jata hai..! De...!!' Arjun gave the CD...

Sakshi's House

Lizi..you know what...Uss..Arjun ko di and jiju ke barein mein sab pata chal gaya hai...agar usne sabko bta diya to auro ka pata nahi but di zaroor mujhe mar dalegi..you know vo kitni protective hai and is mamale main toh jiju bhi mera sath nahi dete..he is even more protective than her...' Sakshi said

Oho..worry not Sakshi ...Arjun itna bhi bura nai hai jitna tu ussey samajhti hai...Tujhe nahi pata usne...' Liza stopped in the mid way

Usney kya...???' Sakshi asked

I maen he is not that bad yaar...infact vo bohot achha hai...he is actually very genuine...!' Liza

Achha ji..!! Tu toh uski side ho gai..!! Umm...waise tu theek bhi hai...he is not that bad...theek hai...I mean not THAT bad...chal ab sotey hain...morning mein college bhi hai...!!' she said and both went to sleep

He is actually very good Sakshi..tujhe nahi pata bina kuch jane ki us CD mein kya hai...usney tere liye kya kiya hai...that too when he disliked you ...' Liza thought and went to sleep

Arjun's House

Damn...!!!! Uski himmat kaisi hui...How dare he...!!!!' Arjun said watching the CD

Arey dude...ab kyu gussa kar raha hai...and shukar mana aur kuch nahi tha...warna...' Shree said changing the channel

Toh tu kya chahta tha..haan...for a girl even this is too much samjha tu..!!! Meri aur Sakshi ki pictures click ki and uspe ek ghatiya si presentation ! And how conveniently they hid the actual conversation and replaced it with words and captions..! !!' Arjun barked

Easy dude ..jo hona tha ho gaya...shukar manao hum time pe pohoch gae warna...' Sameer said

Samajh nahi ata log inta gir kaise sakte hai...' Arjun said keeping the laptop with a thud

Dude log gir gae hain..toh tu mera laptop kyu gira raha hai...!!' Shree said picking his laptop

Tujhe apne laptop ki padi...!!! Seriously...??' Arjun said

Rishabh asked Shree to stay calm...

Theek hai beta ye sawal mai uss din poochunga jab tere pas teri gun hogi...' Shree said and went to sleep

Everyone went to sleep...

MORNING 7 PM...

Arjun's phone buzzed and he picked up in one call

Hello...' he said

Shaina : Not bad...!! Ek hi ring mein utha liya...Punctual haan...

Arjun : Aap hi logo se toh seekha hai..and aaj toh dekh bhi liya...exact 7..

Shaina : Haha smart boy haan...well Aryan told me about you...Impressive haan...hope to see you soo in our department...!

Arjun : Thank you ma'am...a compliment from you and Sir actually means a lot...

Shaina: Well you totally deserve it..so mention not...ok..coming to th point...what is the other side of the story...?

Arjun told her EVERYTHING...well how could he lie to someone he looked up to...and that too when she was actually acting so sweet with him..as he knew ACP Shaina was someone not to mess up with EVER...Aryan was also listing to him...

Aryan : What the hell is the name of that boy and group ...mai abhi ata hoon...

Shaina: Aryan...in logo ne sab sambhal liya hai...now leave it...(to Arjun) Well you actually deseve a thanks from us ...especially Sakshi

Arjun : No ma'am please ap log thanks bolege to I wont feel good...please...and Sakshi usey ye sab na hi pata chale to better hoga...Its a request...

Aryan : Lekin...

Shaina : I guess you are right...Pata nahi kaise react karegi...I mean un logo ka muh todegi ya...

Aryan : Vo meri sherni hai...mooh HI todegi...!!

Sahina: Haan to bhi problems badhengi hi...! So leave it...jab vo yaha aegi to samjha denge...

Arjun : Ji ..actually thats the best idea i guess...tab tak lets forget about it...

Aryan : Well thanks gentlemen...meri princess ka dhyaan rakhne ke liya...now I know mujhe use din 10 baar call karne ki zaroorat nahi hai...She is safe with you people..

Shaian: (to Aryan ) You call her 10 times??? Aryan had hoti hai...i call her just 3rice ..!! Aur bigado usey...She needs to grow up...pehle theek tha...ab she needs to know how to handle things on her own...!! (to Arjun ) Well thanks Arjun...thanks a lott...pehle us din washroom mein and now this...thank you very much..To you and to each one of you...Waise how are you...pain and all toh theek hai nah...??

Arjun : Yup...perfect..infact thode time mein college jana hai...And aap log bilkul bhi chinta mat karna...she is safe with us...haan mujhe kuch ho jae...toh I assure you investigate karne pe Sakshi hi murderer niklegi...and I will expect justice from you people...!

Aryan :Sorry ..mai toh apni princess ki side hi loonga...no matter what..

Shaian: Dont worry Arjun we will make a good team..!! Chalo rakhti hoon...Sakshi is calling ..uska journalist ka keeda jag gaya hoga toh 50 sawaal puchegi...It was really nice talking to you Arjun and also knowing the ACTUAL Arjun...Take Care

Arjun : Same here ma'am...aap dono se baat karke mujhe bhi bohot achha laga...

SOME MONTHS LATER...

COLLEGE

Arjun and Sakshi though fought like before but yet...they didn't HATE each other for god's sake...Everything seemed heavenly with those devils resting in their houses...

Arjun also kept in touch with Aryan and Shaina...especially Aran who now called many times to Arjun to know about his princess...Though Sakshi taunted him for forgetting her..but he knew very well to deal with his Princess...and Arjun just smiled witnessing this beautiful bond between them... Arjun so much wanted to meet them...but he knew law students got no holidays... even in vacations they had to do internship for their benefits...So Arjun was sad...but when he talked to Aryan he suggested Arjun why not take internship under their legal team...as Sakshi was also doing the same with their technical team...and well not everyone got the opportunity to do intership under THE BEST investigative team...may be that was the reason it didn't click Arjun...but when Aryan told him he was very excited...

So guys...kal se vacations...kaun kaha ja raha hai...?' Shree asked

Humari aisi kismet kaha...Its just for this year batch...they have planned something for us here only...' Rishabh said

Liza tu chal na mere sath...!' sakshi said

Nai yaar you go...I need to go to Bangalore...cousin ki shadi hai...so socha internship bhi vahi kar loongi...mom dad bhi vahi honge...toh delhi jake kya faida...' Liza said

Tune kya socha hai bey..! Dont tell me tu ye vacation bhi waste karne wala hai..!!' Arjun asked Shree

Haan yaar socha toh vahi tha...aur mere in nek irado ka kisiko pata chal gya toh usne bachho ki tarah complain kar di..!!' Shree said glaring Liza

Matlab ?' Sakshi asked

Matlab...Rishab ne mujhse poocha toh I told him about him and myself ..toh he called someone and the very next day Specky got an intership offer from the SAME company where I was going..!!! Mujhe kya pata tha mai apne hi pair pe kulhadi maar rai hoon...!' Liza said glaring back

Yaar tere ye contacts atey kahaan se hai haan...jab dekh koi number dial karta hai aur evil smile de deta hai...!!' Sameer said

Padhai likhai toh karni nahi hai janaab ko...poore time contacts hi to banate rehte hain...and guys all because of uncle...you know him nah...' Shivani said pressing the collar which was standing straignt on Rishab's Jacket...

Tu nah..uski poori tarah se dho deti hai...!! Kabhi toh bechare ko limelight le lene diya kar..!!' Ayesha said

Seriously Ayesha kabhi kabhi toh sochta hoon...dost hai ya dost ke roop mein jaani dushman...aise dost ho toh Rahul ki kisey zaroorat...hai na Arjun ?' he said to Arjun who was relaxing and stood straight ..while others just smiled looking at him...

Waise guys I want to tell you people something...' Sakshi said in a serious tone

Haan bolo Sakshi..' Sameer said

Actually guys...I know it wont make any difference to you..as abhi tak itna toh mai tum logo ko jaan hi gai hoon..but still kal I asked my di and she said ki I can tell so...'

Arjun smiled at this...as he knew what she was going to tell..and also Aryan told him that she will tell everyone today about them...

Tum phir has rahe ho...problem kya hai tumhari haan...? Jab bhi mai kuch batane jati hoon...tum free ki smile dete ho...and aise toh poore din mein ek baar bhi smile nahi ati haan ??' she asked

Achha toh tum poore din mujhe hi notice karti rehti ho kya ??' he asked a smile still forming at the corner of his lips...infact everyone smiled looking sakshi at loss of words...

Oh please I have much better things to do..! Okay..!!! she shot back

As in...?? Arjun asked with much interest...

Umm...as in...as in ..tumhe kyu btau tum mere jiju ho ya boyfriend...??' she said at an instant

Now arjun was at short of words...was she so unpredictable???

Um..no...no way please...mai aur tumhara boyfriend in your dreams..!!!!!' he said

Oh...please not even in my dreams ..!!! Tu jaisa boyfriend ...not even in my dream...!!!' she said

Tum jasa matlab ???Nai what do you mean mijh jaisa??' Arjun shot back

I mean tum jaisa khadoos...akdu...karela types !!!!' she said making faces

How dare you...!! Mai khadoos..akdu aur ...aur karela jaisa hu ???? Arjun said baffeled

Of course..!!! Kadwa karela..!!!!' she shot back

Achha..!! To tum khud ko kya samjhti ho...sweet and innocent..??Well let me clear this doubt...tum na..bilkul...bilkul...mirchi jaisi ho...vo bhi teekhi wali..!!!' he said...

Achha aur tum...tum...!!!!' she said

Guys guys... kya tumlog bhi she aur liza ki tarah ladne lage...' Rishabh said

Humne kya kiya ?????' Shreza said in unison...

'All because of you..' they again said together...

Okay okay ...stop it all four of you...' and asked Arjun and sakshi to sit...

Forget it..!! Haan to guys..mai ye keh rahi thi ki...' Sakshi said after giving HIM a hard glare which was returned with same intensity...

She told them everything...Liza knew everything so kept adding her piece of information...Thoug it didn't make any big difference...in so many months they were best buddies now with some special exceptions...but yeah they were in awe to know about Shaina and Aryan especially Sameer who also admired SS though was not as much into research work like Arjun...

To Be Continued...

Hello friends hope you like it...Please do give your feedbacks...they mean a lot...so ...do lemme know how you found this particular update...

Thanks

Take Care

😊

Edited by SAKSHI.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow!
That was a great update!!
Fantabulous job dude!!!
Love it to every word! 😃
Continue soon!!
and thanks for the pm!
😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome
update dear
love it
thanx 4 pm

Edited by ...Maha-Srk... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb dear u wrote awesome
love the cute fight between arjun and sakshi

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