Arakshi Os:A flicker of hope :) - Page 5

Originally posted by: nicky13

👏 wonderful Story BF g and Love you hai ji aap ko bhi and Meri Sautan g...Welcome to the Writer's world...haan-2 I know ke Saku has helped you for this...But firr bhi ji aapka Naam ke under ek story aa gayi hai...Superb Idea and awesome concept...Sakhshi was telling them ETF Heroes story...wow that was so sweet...and later on Arjun joined them and tell them about Sakhshi was really beyond my Imagination...Love it sachi mein...From Dil Se re...Dil se ...Love you too and woh bhi Poore Dil se Re Dil Se...aage bhi aap kabhi-2 apni deal break karti rehna orr punishment paati raho...achha likha hai Likhti Rehana...😉 Love you so very much❤️🤗

Originally posted by: varunD

Lovely. Very nice

Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali

😊 nice and beautiful story it was

Originally posted by: Shamsad1607

Are you sure its your first !!!

Beautiful...lovely ...awesome... & of course a praiseworthy work.

Loved it...Will expecting more works from you.

Originally posted by: life93

hey bhaarthi🤗...

congo dear for your first OS👏...

HMMM i loved each and every word of this ...

arjun and sakshi went to same orphanage to celebrate diwali with kids😃...

then sakshi's introduction of etf members was too lovely!...

and kids were mo less !😆...

and so dreamer...😉

loved it!...

Originally posted by: gujjupari

Yo! Just came back form an exam, and my brain is officially more fried than it already was😳.. Two more to go

Lovely Lovely Lovely Lovely OS! A perfect Diwali-wala present!!! Loved the connections between the super-heros and the real-life heros... I too love avengers (am desperately waiting for avengers 2, slightly off track but yeah😎)

Loved the ending of the OS and Arjun's "confession" of sorts😉... You should continue this!! Make it into a SS or even a FF!!! Just do it 😈!!!

This line though, "Yeh ladki bade hoge, bade tarkde mare gi"🤣 🤣... COuldn't be more precise 😉!!!

Write more and conti this one 😈...

Originally posted by: shaleenrocks

OMG OMG OMG...my sis and partner wrote OS together..sorry for commenting so late..

The OS was absolutely brilliant..Loved it will just be understatement...The concept was so nice..The backdrop of Diwali was beautiful and then I loved the orphanage part so much..

I loved how Arjun saw Sakshi..first he heard the laughter and saw her...

All the kids are so cute and then Sakshi talking about ETF and comparing them with superheros👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Finally Sakshi talking abt Arjun ...so cute..akdu kadoos..lol...

Finally Arjun explaining importance of Sakshi in their lives..brilliant beyond words..I loved how he explained the importance..even and every point were mindblowing..just loved it loved it..

Beautiful Dreamer..awesome name...

finally the ending..both wishing each other diwali and Arjun realizing that he actually felt bright and happy Diwali..

awesome awesome awesome awesome..loved it loved it loved...superb job sis...love u loads dear...hugs and kisses..🤗

Originally posted by: ritu_24

Hiii Bharati! OMg that was so awesome😳

you write so well!! you should write moreee..and PM me when you dooo😃

Loved how Sakshi was speaking to the kids! and akdu sadu lool😆 that bit was awesome too!!!

and then how Arjun comes up from behind and speaks about her sighhh😳

the ending was brilliant too!

it was really well written..short but very sweet!

Loved it!😳😳😳

Originally posted by: ...Mithuz...

Nice OS Pooh!

Loved it..

Originally posted by: _Nikita_

Awwssmmm OS