Vignettes: what my heart speaks!! updated pg 8-arjun 26/11 - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
hey my friends...
aaj no bakwas or no vignette...
i think i am going to go mad now.
do din mein exam hai ie on wednesday aur me... pagal... mein to time pass kar rahi hun bhai ke saath... lol :)
lol:)
well i dont think any one need any introduction to my craziness...
haha:)
i love you guys... have i mentioned it before?
yeah!!!
no problems..
baar baar dil ye gaaye... i love you all my behnas and bhabhi's and bhaiyya's...
and yeah... happy deepavali to all of you...
a bucket full of chocolate ice-cream with choco chips and swwetest chocolate syrup to you all... muah :D
aki... i could not reply individually so replying here in one post...
special thanks to Sumu4JayD for the beautiful banner she made for this vignette thread,...
a special cup cake with xtra sweet icing for you and a jalebies ;) muah dear...

pari <3

P.S.: i ll read all the stories once i am done with exams and i get pc to myself...
that will be on 10th night of november...
tab mein aapke stories pe reply karoongi...
tab se karna bohut mushkil hai and i dont get that in my hands more...
tab tak ke liye sorry...


@zebbie0504:
zee di...thank you...
aww... its you all who make me write, inspire me...
thanks again..
i am happy that you liked this...
i ll send pms di... no worries...

@laila 1994:
thank you dear...
your words mean a lot...

@Sumu4JayD
sumu dear thank you...
and banner, i ll update now...
bhai hai to no pc for me.. ;)
uss din net gone when i was writing...
aaj i ll post that :) thanks for such lovely banner honey...

@Snehajain:
nai rote sneha... ;)
and thanks ton dear, for your appretiation makes me write more...

@Payal_156:
DIDU...
dekho...i posted an emotional one ;)
pehle, browser crash hua, then powercord of modem khar ab hua tha aur ab bhai hai ghar mein ;)
so thoda late hogayi thi post karne mein...
and i am so happy that you liked it...
muah!!

@unishaz:
thank you unisha...
it was bit difficult to write roshni POV...
it means a lot...

@..sweetchilly.. :
thank you...
that means a lot...
and yeah... rosh pov is much more emotional than the earlier ones...

@_Nikita_:
thank you dear...
hope you like even the ones in future :)

@pinkerbell:
pinky di, thank you...
hehe... i never knew i could even write before i came here...
its the love and support i received here that makes me write...
i just let my heart rule when i write emotional stuff...
thank you again...

@anu91:
thanks dear...
glad you liked this...

@IshitaRocks015:
aww... nai rote yaar...
sorry agar itna rula diya to...
but main chodungi nai rulana ;)
thanks bunch dear... :)

@Aisha.Vashishth:
thanks aisha...
this concept was on my mind from the day i wrote walk alone...
i brought it to reality now...
thanks again...

@Shivi 1997:
yeah true shivi...
i just imagined what i would have done if i were roshni and saw them from far, yet close...
thanks dear...

@kriyaansh_visu:
thank you...
these are just fragments, which do not connect with the previous or the next vignette...
yeah...if clubbed in a carefull manner, they may make an entire story...
thanks again dear...

@pihu_angad:
thank you... ;)
Edited by princess_pari - 11 years ago
Payal_156 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
Beautiful banner lovely sumu dear
pari all d best dear
Happy Diwali to u too ..
daydreamer... thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
this was so touching...roshni's pov was very well written...her love, her pain, her longing...everything was visible...loved it!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
hey all... i am back on this thread!!!

Vignette 5:
Sleep

~Arjun

I still remember the warm lap of my mother where I would keep my head and sleep. She would run her fingers in my hair when I could not and lull me to sleep. I never saw sleepless nights till I was out of the protected cocoon of my mother. I felt peace when I sought refuge to my tormented being in her, my wife. My days were content and nights blissful. World was in my hand when I would hold her hand and sleep being content. But fate is cruel enough to snatch those moments from me. I was left alone with a bruised heart, hurt soul and night without sleep, laden with nightmares. Every time I try to sleep, her final moments run in front of my eyes. I want to go back being the same boy who would cozy up on mother's lap or be that loving husband who would doze off happily beside his wife. But I know I can be neither. I just wish I can get some peaceful sleep, with no nightmares, at least one of these days. I would not mind if its eternal sleep...because I just want some peace...


Hope you like it...

next time i will try to give some one else's words, or a little scene...

emotional or romantic or serious, i am not sure..

but i think i ned to venture other's POV...

thanks guys..

pms soon


Edited by princess_pari - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
unres
This is so heart-touching.
And painful😭😭
THis is Fabulous👏👏
Edited by laila1994 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
Awwssmmm
lovely
beautiful...
cont sooon
thanks for PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
OMG...
It was really emotional.
Feelings were beautifully described.
Could actually feel it.
Continue sooonish.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
That was heart-touching.
Loved the way you potrayed it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
phr se rula dia!!!

beautifully depicted sweety!!
actually isse agey kya bolu pta nhi..u alwz leave me speechless!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
fabulous pov yar.
Loved it.
Loved the way u described the feelings of arjun..
Superb..
Thanks for pm..

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