sHALEEN ss : Teri Meri Love Story UPDATE PA 9PG 17 NOV 30

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

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Posted: 12 years ago

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" pata nhi kya soch rahi hogi mujhe dekh kar?? dekh bhi kaise rahi thi... aakhe to itni badi ki bas pura mai sama jaaunga us mai... " Shaleen thought..

" Ye Dad bhi na... sab ko bulate rehete hai... ab pata nhi Shaleen kya sochta hoga kya jarurat thi ise yaha bulane ki.. aur sab bata diya hoga ki yaha mai akeli rehungi.. mere jyada frnds nhi hai... y mai kitni bholi hue... aaa Dad i"ll kill u for that.. " Manali thinks while preparing Tea..

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

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Posted: 12 years ago

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" Vaise thodi Strong hi bana deti hue Chai... thak kar aaya hoga , fresh feel karega.. " Manali thinks..

" ye Chai aaj leke aayegi ya kal??? sare mere programme ka kabada karegi ye.. " Shaleen thinks & look at Kitchen Door..

Manali comes wit Tea.. & but she can't stand properly or walk properly... Meanwhile her Father goes inside .. Manali abt to take a further step but dis balnced herself.. Shaleen immeadtly rushed to her & catch her.. He look at her face.. She tightly close her eyes

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Her hands are clutched tightly to Tray ... like she holding very important thing in her hands... her face shows scareness.. She slowly open her one eye & look at him & shock to see that he is really close to her..

Both immeadtly leave each other.. She fowards Tray to him ' but instaed of taking Cup Shaleen takes tray from her hand & places on Small Table..

"plz baith jaaiye " he requests & she seat beside him... Manali just play with his dress design while Shaleen takes Tea & looking otherside

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Both are silent..

Her Father looks at them... & goes to them.. After taking Tea Shaleen goes to Home...

PRESENT

Manali abt turn in sleep but Shaleen hold her..

" Umm.. mhh.. " she yells..

M drip lagayi hai aur ye Madam hai ki need mai kuch pata bhi chalta hai ise?? Kumbhkarn.. ab ye sab kya Nurse dekhti????? " Shaleen thinks & look at Crab.. His child also sleeping peacefully..

" Dono ke dono aaram frma rahe hai , aur Papa yaha Watchman bane baithe hai.. " Shaleen thinks

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archi

@hunny1993

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Awsum update !!!

sry 4 late comment

Plz continue soon

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Shweta Gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

read all the parts together.

and its awesome.

i loved it.

continue soon.

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Areesha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Read all part in 1go, awsm concept, update soon and plz pm me all your stories

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

PART 3

Shaleen ko unki dosri meeting yaad aati hai..

Vo shoot se ghar aa raha tha & lift ka wait kar raha tha... Lift aati hai & Shaleen lift mai chala jata hai.. vo door band ka raha hota hai tabhi " ek min ruko.."

Shaleen mud ke dekhta hai to vaha Manali hoti hai shayd abhi Office se aayi hogi.. uske haath 4-5 bags hai... us mai sabzi aur kuch cheeze hai.. Shaleen Manali ko dekh ke smaile karta hai.. but Manali forcefully use smile deti hai & dosri tarah dekhti hai..

" Akdu kahi ki.. ab aa mere paas phir dikhta hue..." Shaleen thinks

" Ofo is bhi abhi milna tha... ek to itni thak hue ki hasa bhi nhi jaa raha , plz Baba ji koi to mujhe utha ke le chalo mere ghar tak.." Manali thinks

Lift unke floor per aati hai.. Manali pehele bahar aati hai & after that Shaleen , dono thake hai to seedha ghar mai jate hai...

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Suddenely Baby rota hai.. Shaleen look at Manali .. she is peacefuuly sleeping... Vo Crib ki aur jata hai...

" Oho.. oho.. kya hua mere baby ko???? oho aap bore ho gye?"

But baby aur jor se rone lagti hai..

" Stupid question Shaleen , baby kya bore hoga?? "

Suddenly Nurse comes in & look at Manali

" Inhe hosh nhi aaya ab tak?"

" Aaya na ab vo so rahi hai." Shaleen says

" Aap bahir jayie..." Nurse requests him..

" Vo baby..." Shaleen slowly says

" Mai hue plz... and dn't wry i m real Nurse.."

" Oo no not.. actually.." Shaleen says guiltyly

" To .. its ok.. but Baby ko feed karna hai so.."

After 20 mins Shaleen comes to room & sees Manali holding baby & talking somthing in his ear & baby also waves his hand to her & touch her face..

" Kya chal raha hai??? Secret ha.." Shaleen says

" Hmm Mumaa ki aur Vihaan ki secreat..." Manali says & kiss baby's forhead Baby just kick her

" Bilkul tum pe gya hai na..." Manali ask Shaleen

Shaleen seat near her & hold her from one side & look at their baby.

" Nahi.. bilkul hamare jaise.." Shaleen answers & wave hsi hand towards baby but baby is just chewing his Coat..

" Shal us kuch samaz nhi aayega.. his is too small..."

" Ya i know... " with that Shaleen rest his chin on Manali's shoulder..

"Manali slowly remove her hand from baby's back ( holding baby both hands) and caress Shaleen's cheek..

" Kya soch rahe ho Shal hmm?"

" Bas yahi ki agar us time mai tumhare saath nhi hota to... "

" Shush.. ab hum bahut aage aa chuka hai na , so dn't think abt past..ok.. chalo ab achi se smile do baby ko aur mumma ko.." Manali says

Shaleen smile at both & kiss Manali's cheek..

Edited by M.V.Kohli007 - 12 years ago

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

" ab rest.. sham tak Mom & Dad bhi aayenge..aur phir u know all that .."

" Ok baba.."

" Mai abhi aata hue.." with that Shaleen goes near Baby " Papa abhi aate hai.. tab tak aap bhi rest karo.." Shaleen says baby sweetly. & goes outside.

Manali rest her head on Pillow & look at her baby ...

" Mai kitni khush hue , nhi bata paaungi kisi ko... aaj tum bhi mere paas ho aur tumhare Papa bhi.. mai hamesha jo pyar chathi thi jaisa patrner chathi thi aapke Papa bilkul vaise hai... " with that lone tear falls from her eyes..

" Kitna kuch badal gya, ek responsibilty aa gye mere shoulders mai.. mai sab itni jaldi nhi chatha tha darta tha , ki mai ye sab kar paaunga ya nhi per aaj pata hai , ki mai kar paaunga kyu ki aaj tumhara vishwas hai mere saath Manali.. mai hamseha baache se darta tha lekin vo tum thi jisne mujhe ehsaas diyaya is khub surat rishte ka thx to you varna ye pal mai hamesha ke liye kho deta... Shaleen thinks .. & xcaressing his baby's pic..

At Eve

Shaleen Parents also arrive..

" Bilkul Shaleen jaisa hai na... ekdum naugthy boy... " his Father says while looking at baby.. Baby happily kick his hand & legs in air.. Manali hold baby's hand .. while Shaleen just happily look at him

" Mere pote ko nazar mat lagao tum... is to bilkul bhi bandar nhi bane ne dungi...ye to mera acha baccha banega..." Shaleen Mother says..

Suddenely baby starts crying

" Dekha use bhi bandar hi banana hai.. kyu chote saheb?" Shaleen Father bend little towards baby & ask him

Baby just look at him with teary eyes & again start his crying

' Shshu rote nhi ... ae rote nhi aise..." Shaleen try to stop him

" Tu chup kar raha hai ya dara raha hai use??" his Mother ask him & take him outside.