sHALEEN ss : Teri Meri Love Story UPDATE PA 9PG 17 NOV 30

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hmmm.. after lot of thinking i start this..
Thx to my Buddies PInkerbell & Piya... they finally nail to Caffin.. šŸ˜‰
PART 1
He just look at Him , & comes to Corrider & update his Tweet..
" Great Feeling... OMG he is tooo CUTE.. Muhha to him... "
within a minutes he receivce lot of tweets..
"Who? "
" whom are u talking abt Shaa?"
" Plz tel us na?"
" Plz we are waiting 4 ur ans?"
"Hey ans us plz..."
He smile at that & open his Camera & see just cliking pics of him .. he is so tiny , so cute... She give him best gift ever on this Diwali...
After half hour he check his Tweet A/C..
"Hey Congratulations New Daddy... Eager to see Him" His one of frnd tweet him..
" I want to see Him , plz... can i come ?" His one of the long last Feamale frnd ask him
" Sure u can come to meet him..." He replays his Female frnd
" Thx Bandar, realy Great Diwali Gift..." Shaleen ans his frnd..
Within a minutes he receives lods of msgs..
" What daddy??? but ur not married na?"
" How can it possible??" 😭
" U brock my Heart...😭 when u r married?"
" Who is that Lucky girl??"
" Plzzz tel us otherwise w are faint here..."
" Congrats New Daddy in Town... plz post baby's pic..."
" Heartious Congrats.. hows Baby.. it Son r Daughter??"
" Thx all , but can't post his pic , he is too small for that , let him enjy the wrld with his Parents 😊 " Shaleen replies & comes in room..
She just open her eyes & look at him..
Shaleen comes near her & seat beside a Chair..
He just hold her hand & kiss her palm
"feeling better now ???" he slowly ask her
She just nods
"Gosh im damn worried abt you , jab vo Shanta Bai ne bola tha ki tumhe pain ho raha hai , mai to soya bhi nahi just shoot se aaya & aagya aapke paas.." he said in one breath..
She smaile & forwards her hand , he bent down but she tell him " come closer na "
He fully bent down to her.. now his head rest on her shoulder.. she just careesing his hair..
She kiss on his ear.. " Ghar jaao & aaram..."
She can;t complete her sentence bcoz Shaleen immeadtly get up
" Manali are u mad? yaha koi nhi hai tumhare paas , mai kaise? and ha Mom& Dad sham tak aa jaayenge... aur ha mujhe koi Nurse vagara.. u know na i dn't like it.. mai hue na.. vaise bhi i have Hoilday Tomorrow.." He just starts yelling on her..
" U know what thst why I Luv U.." she says with tierd smile.. He immeadtly seat next to her & caressing her hair softly..
" Tumhe hamesha kaise pata chalta hai shal, that i need u?" she ask him..
"Shush..." he says & withing a minutes she agian drifted to sleep..
IF U LIKE THGEN PLZ COMMENT OTHERWISE STORY CONTINUE NHI HOGI..
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DivineDarkness thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ah ha Mannu...ahem ahem
Nice start... continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow yr mannu !!!!

bilkul different angle se likhkha hai

Bravo !!! bravo !!!

plz go ahead & update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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mind blowing update..
title superb hai.. piya's suggestion of title supern..


waiting for more..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Unres-
mujhe nahi pata tha..
manu ko dhamki deni bhi aati hai...
janab kiska asar hai kahin mera to nahi🤣
waooo grate start..
shaa finaly father ban gaya vo bhi babu boy,
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Ohye hoye romance n care loved ittt
poor female fan dill toot gaya sabka...lolll(me to)
Update soon wanna to read more...

Edited by ll_piya_ll - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aage ka kahan h...awesome update.
continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: pihu_angad

Aage ka kahan h...awesome update.
continue soon..


The same here manu baki ka kahan hain..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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De u r fab no doubt in tht
Awesome ,mind blowing starting

Update soon

Thanx 4 pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow manali šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘...
great startingšŸ˜‰...u n shašŸ˜‰...not bad !
sha hs got a baby😃...
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow...
Amnu di and Shaleen together...
Not bad,huh.
It was really beautiful.
Wow...
Shaleen and Manu have a baby boy...
Congoo Shongo...
Loved it.
Continue soonish.
Dont forget to pm me,please.

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