ll ArIya SS:YOUR LOVE IS MY CURE ll update pg-90 03 MAY PM LATE - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
nice start...
cont soon and thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
aweome start
aww arjun said she is burden for him & rejected her love that's so harsh poor riya
everybody is possessive about riya after bacteria incident that's lovely
arjun cares for her so much but doesn't show it to her
i don't get he loves her or not it's confusing
my poor baby is crying so much😭😭😭
cont soon

Edited by madmadona - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
mast update
poor riya arjun scolded her
cnt soon ad thanx fr pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
mast update
poor riya arjun scolded her
cnt soon ad thanx fr pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
Awesome update...
Feeling bad for Riya...
If Arjun doesn't love her than why he kissed her forehead...😕😕😕
If Arjun doesn't love her than why he married to her...😕😕😕😕
Yeh toh cheating hai...aise beach mein koi update stop karta hai...
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
Ok guyes I update the next part.

Hope you liked it😉
Edited by ll_megha_ll - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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[RED]PART-2[/RED]



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[BLACK]Riya comes out of her memory when she heared her cell phone ring. She immediately come washroom and attend the call.
[/BLACK]

[BLACK]Riya: hello
[/BLACK]

[BLACK]Caller: jai hind riya..
[/BLACK]


[BLACK]Riya: jai hind sir..
[/BLACK]

[BLACK]Commissioner sir: riya mujhe tumse kuch zaroori baat karni hain kya tum abhi mere office aa sakti ho?
[/BLACK]


Riya: jee sir..


Commissioner sir: theek hain adhe ghante main mujhe report karo.


Riya: jee sir.


Commissioner sir: jai hind riya.


Riya: jai hind...


Riya dressed herself and locked her house and goes to catch cab. She sits on the cab and again remembering her flashback[/BLACK]


[BLACK]FLASHBACK---
[/BLACK]


[BLACK]Riya runningly goes to her house and directly goes to her room and fell on bed and started crying very badly.


Riya: kyun hua mere saath aisa? Why?? Main to unse pyaar karti hoon or unhone mujhe yeh kaha ki yeh mera crush hain. How could he says this?


Suddenly riya cell started ringing. She wiped her tears and sees her dad is calling her. So she composed herself.


Riya: hii papa aap kaise hain?


Riya dad: main theek hoon mera baccha tum kaise ho?


Riya: dad main bhi theek vaise aapne itni raat ko phone kia sabh theek hai na? She ask worryly


Riya dad: vo beta tum Kolkata aa sakti ho hame tumse zaroori baat karni hain please tum ghar aa jao.


Riya: theek hain papa main kal hi Kolkata aa jati hoon


Riya dad: apna khayal rakhna..


Riya: jee good night papa.


Riya dad: good night..


Riya cut the call..


Riya: mujhe rathore sir se baat karni ho ghi.


Riya dialled rathore number...


Riya: hello sir


Rathore: haan riya


Riya: sir mujhe two weeks ki holiday chahiye..


Rathore in concerned voice: sab theek hain na riya tumhari tabayat vo to theek hain na?


Riya: jee sir sabh theek haim. Vp actually mujhe kal Kolkata jana hain mere parents mujhe miss kar rahe hain or vo mujhse milna chahate hain.


Rathore: theek hain lekin agar koi problem ho to mujhe zaroor bstana.


Riya: jee sir.


Rathore: bye riya good night


Riya: good night sir


She cut the call and called airport for bookimg ticket.


NEXT MORNING---


Riya took flight and go to Kolkata. Pm the other hand arjun reached etf and was searching for riya but he could not find so he asked Rathore


Arjin: Rathore riya kaham hain? Aaj office nahi aaye?


Rathore: rawte riya two weeks ke liye Kolkata gaye hain apne parents se milne.


Arjun: ohh and goes from there


Arjun(MV): kahi riya kal ki vajah mujhse dur rehne ke liye Kolkata to nahi gaye. He thinks that and become sad but dont know why?


TO BE CONTINUED...


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Edited by ll_megha_ll - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
Awesome update dr but too short...!!!!
Why commissioner called her...????
FB was so senti...!!!!
Awww Riya was cmpltly shattered as Arjun rejected her proposal...!!!! 😭
Why her dad suddenly called Riya to kolkatta...???? 😉
Loved Rathod's concern for her...!!
Awww Arjun felt bad whn he knw about Riya..!!
Loved his MV in the end...!!!!
Can't wait to read more...!!!
Contonue soon...

Edited by Aks13 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
awesome part..
Riya gets call from commissioner..
She gets ready to go..
She remembers the day when a riya gets call from her father..
Her father called her urgently..
She calls rathod for leave..
She gets ready to leave..
Arjun comes to office..
Arjun feels guilty for behaving rudely with riya..
Arjun misses her..
Loved it..
Continue soon dear..
Thanks for pm..
Edited by unishaz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
superb update.
chote se update mein bohot se twist hai..


will be more interesting to read..


thanks for the pm

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