ariya: hold me: complete me for ever last part pg 29(completed)

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abhya/akanksha

@Aks13

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Amazing start dr...!!!!

Awww Arjun loved her but avoided her coz of his past...!!!

OMG Ariya got stuck in the basement...!!!

Loved the way Arjun comforted her...!!!

Awww thy both fell asleep in eachother arms...!!!

Loved Arjun's MV about her...!!!

Wow she called him just by his name sub-consciously...!!!

Loved it so much...!!!

Thanks 4 pm dr...

Continue soon...

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rizwanaa

@rizwanaa

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

awesome start
the case is interesting
ariya trapped in basement
n riya scared of darkness
but arjun supported her
and managed to come out the trap
thanks for pm
cont soon

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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

nice start
interesting case
loved ariya
cont soon

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Rumpa Majumder (tani)

@tani.m

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Awesome start :) love it cont soon

Edited by tani.m - 11 years ago

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Anjali

@AnjuRish

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

amazing start pinku

will the gal sonia be tied up ...sad for her

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Faruheer

@Faruheer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Ahan nice strt...
Thanx for pm
Waiting for nxt...

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Suryatapa sengupta

@1993.ssg

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Superb update Great concept Love it Thanks for pm Pls conti soon

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Mdmadona

@Mdmadona

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

lovely start
arjun loves riya but maintaining distance coz of his past
he thinks she deserves a better person than him
oh no ariya got trapped in basement
loved the way arjun comforted riya
aww they both were so close to each other
& she called him arjun loved it
cont soon

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Lvly start dr loved it very much...
case seems interesting poor ariya traped in basement,..
all ariya scence is so beautifly written. waiting for more update soon...