FF: Their Dark Battle - Hiatus - Page 2

wokay
i m hooked to dis story already now
wat a perfecto cs
wid thrilling start
law breaker n fuller
interesting very well
no mid line btw hate n love awesome claps
very well written
lovely
beautiful tiltle
waiting
do continue soon..

awesome part dear
very well written 👏

starting lines so apt ⭐️

so arjun bro like dis cos of circumstances..
avantika sis
n
she is a frnd of nandini cool
perfect plan 😉

u r one of d amazing writer here
thanks for d pmm
waiting to mystery unfold..

i m in love with this story already...!!!

i guessed it right before...every carefree cruel person has a kind heart...at times whch beat kindly for others...

awsm update...

so avantika..the sister of arjun is now nandini's best friend...like it..

so steadily the characters are gaining a relation...

hey...i loved ur characterisation of the new character Nandini.

can u pls give us a face for nandini..it would b easy to visualize her...as she is th main female lead in th story

continue soon

love
Aisha

Awesome update

Awesome👏

awesome update...
every cruel person has a reason for what they are and a very kind heart which beats as usual just they hide it through their cruel deeds...tats nandy...
arjun's pain also shown extrememly well..
avantika.. so she is thr to play n very important part...also waiting for her meeting with arjun..
and offcourse the race...but before that waiting for a nandy-arjun face off...
continue very soon...

thanks for the pm dear...

awesome start

Loved the confrontation...
Wondering Wat will happen...
👏