FF: ~!!VENGEANCE is SWEET!!~Pg 21 NoTe! - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
O-M-G!! Thank You all for sweet and lovely comments! I will definitely continue... and when I do I will let you guys know!
Oh and to answer your query, Megha, I ain't sure myself if this is going to be a Ariya or Arakshi FF but I will be writing in Riya's point of view. So yeah... wait and see! (I might surprise myself in the end. 😆)
Lastly, I love you all for liking and commenting. This is for you-🤗
And also for the silent readers (you got to like or comment, dude 🤪)
Cheers!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
In the character sketch, I deliberately missed out one character which I would like to introduce now. She is the cutest thing in the world and I think that she is more beautiful than any other character. Wait, wait, don't start bashing me yet...😆
She is Mishti

She is Riya's niece, who has been staying with Riya since the death of her parents (Riya's sister and brother-in-law). Riya does give her most of her time after work otherwise she has a nanny of her own. She is the reason why Riya did not become a ETF or Police officer because Mishti is her first priority.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww she is so cute...!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice . but please make it ariya . Iam a fan of ariya . pleaseplease . wait ye ariya per hi hiana please clarify first.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: SATRISHI

Nice . but please make it ariya . Iam a fan of ariya . pleaseplease . wait ye ariya per hi hiana please clarify first.

Love, I haven't wrote the whole FF yet so I am not sure what it will turn out to be but I can guarantee that you will love it because there are a lot of Ariya parts incorporated.😉
Thanks for showing your interest in it though!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16

Before I commence just letting you know that if I use this symbol *, it means that Riya is thinking or having a self-talk.

CHAPTER ONE

The door of the sophisticated ETF quarters opened in boom making the sound of thunder and the heavy rain echo through the hallways. Stood there partially drenched and struggling with a broken navy blue umbrella was a petite and cute Bengali girl. She did not look quite beautiful then because she was having an arm tussle with a lifeless umbrella! But as soon as she realised that people were staring at her like she was a maniac right out of an asylum, she straightened her walk, threw the umbrella in the side bin, and smiled her dimpled smile radiantly at the receptionist. Now that is BEAUTIFUL!

Hey! I am Riya Mukherjee. I had a meeting today with Mr Sameer Rathod, your ETF Chief?' The receptionist gave her the You Don't Belong Here Look' with a stern smile and finally directed her to the ETF conference room.

*Riya, you are such an idiot. Firstly, you are LATE! And secondly, BAD IMPRESSION on colleagues! I swear, agar tumne aaj aur koi galti ki, I'll kill you!* She groomed herself in front of the mirror door, fixing her makeup and hair and finally knocked and gripped the door knob. Saying her last minute prayers of good luck and gratefulness, she turned the door knob without realising that someone was trying to open the door from the inside too. As a result, she got pulled by the counterforce of the door and fell face first on the conference hall floor.

OUCH!

Riya are you ok?' Strong and firm shoulders picked her up slowly. She knew who that was but her priority at the moment was WHO PULLED THE DOOR!! Drowned by pain and anger, she looked around to see the person who had done that. Standing like a proud man with a smirk on his face was ARJUN SURYAKANT RAWTE.

*No Riya, you are not going to say anything, today is your first day*

Riya did not even expect a sorry from this guy; she knew how he was- arrogant and impulsive. Rolling her eyes away from him, she lightened up seeing her best friend, Sameer, who she had not seen for the past 8 years. They both hugged each other long just to reminiscence their beautiful friendship.

Are you alright?' said Sameer looking worriedly at Riya.

Yeah I am alright' whispered Riya.
They broke out of the embrace and Riya looked around embarrassed by the incident. She hadn't realised that there were around 6 people in the room. Ayesha, Chottu, Shree, Sakshi and Liza, all stared at her. Sakshi and Chottu even tried really hard to stop their smiles from spreading on their faces. She again looked at the 'stupid door' and realised that it was a transparent and glass door. *That jerk! He did it on purpose!*
Everything was calm for a second when Rathod rampaged at Arjun: 'Rawte, Tumne yeh jaan buj ke kiya. Tumhe patatha ki Riya bahar hai. Why did you pull the door?!'. Arjun looked carelessly at Rathod and replied 'Rathod, she is our new team member. I was just opening the door for her. I didn't realise that she is so weak'. Before Rathod could fire another accusation on him, Riya stopped him. 'Kya yaar! Its okay, it could have happened to anyone. Your Forgiven Arjun'. She then quietly whispered to Rathore, 'Don't worry, I will settle it later, not now...'
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Ok guys! Break out of the trance, this is it for today. I hope you like it.😃

Precap: Riya and Rathod recall past high school memories. Loads of Flashbacks coming around, with dashing dude of the college, Arjun Rawte!😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb start dr...
OMG Arjun did that on porpose... Poor Riya... wht a bad start...!!!
Loved Sam's concern for her.
Eager to kne that how she will take her revenge frm Arjun...
Thanx 4 pm...
Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
wow!!!!
Good way to start the story!!!!

Bechari Riya pehle hi din gira diya!!! 😕
Naughty naughty Arjun!!!!!! 😆
Awww😳
Friends reunite!!! So emotional 😭*Wiping tears*
this was an awesome way to start bro!!!
keep up the good work!!!!
😃

And continue soon!!!!
P.S- Thanks for the Pm!! 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
Awesome update dear.
Continue soon.
And thanx for pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
great update
arjun did that on purpose 😆
loved it
excellent

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